"Please act as an SPM Paper 2 examiner. I will provide you with my guided writing essay on the topic of Teenage Problems. The three points that I need to include in this essay are; what these problems are, the effects of the problems, how the problems can be solved. Please evaluate it and give detailed ffeedback on the following criteria:

1. content: how well does the essay address all parts of the task (the three points)? Are the ideas relevant and well-developed.

2. Communicative Achievement: Is the essay written in appropriate style and register for the target reader? Is the message clear and effective?

3. Organisation: How well is the essay structured? Are the ideas logically organised into paragraphs? Are there appropriate linkers and cohesive devices?

4. Language: How accurate and varied is the language? Is the grammar, vocabulary and spelling correct and appropriate for SPM level?

After your evaluation, please provide specific suggestions for improvement in each ofn these areas. My essay is as follows:

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