1st Period Review by Elizabeth Nicolai https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g Answer each column question-you don't need to put your name. en-us 2018-04-11 10:37:57 UTC 2018-04-12 11:31:26 UTC hello@padlet.com 3 and 5 essays https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250647809 Main difference was that the three did not answer the question at all and was poorly written in terms of sentence structure and grammar, whereas the five did answer the question, however superficially and with limited analysis.]]> 2018-04-11 11:29:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250647809 7 and 9 essays https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250648581 Main difference was that the seven had just slightly less connection in their analysis to the overall point of the sister however since their claims were backed up using evidence it remained effective, whereas the nine used the connection to the sister to show a more plausible reading of the text with higher vocabulary and slightly better syntax.]]> 2018-04-11 11:31:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250648581 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250648604 In essay 3 there was very little analysis as they were merely giving a summary of the story as in the 5 essay analysis was underdeveloped but still consisted of more analysis than the 3 essay. ]]> 2018-04-11 11:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250648604 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250649534 In essay 7 the analysis was less perceptive than essay 9 as the 9 essay had analysis that showed the irony within the dialogue. ]]> 2018-04-11 11:33:22 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250649534 Predicted score 4 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250650146 My predicted score is a four because I used superficial analysis, restated the question in the formation of my thesis, and the structure of my essay followed the 3-5 categories. ]]> 2018-04-11 11:34:34 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250650146 The 3 essay was, for lack of a better term, all over the place whilst explaining the interactions between complying to social norms and giving into fierce human nature, while the 5 essay does so in a much more clear fashion, stating the interactions in a manner in which the reader can easily follow the points and evidence of each. https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250650833 2018-04-11 11:36:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250650833 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250651207 A 4 because analysis was present but there was only a little amount of it. I addressed social propriety but only in a sentence or so. ]]> 2018-04-11 11:37:56 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250651207 Main difference between 3&5 essay https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250651689 The 3 essay had no analysis or or clear claims whereas the 5 essay put in more effort it had an okay analysis of the characters and a clear claim]]> 2018-04-11 11:39:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250651689 While the 7 essay superbly addresses the question in an advanced format, analyzing the prompt in an excellent way and properly using short quotes as evidence, the 9 essay does so in a way that is "above and beyond", furthering the explanation and analysis past satisfactory, as well as using advanced vocabulary. https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250651708 2018-04-11 11:39:51 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250651708 While the 3 has adequate analysis of the passage it is often irrelevant and not very extensive at all, and it often resembles a summary the 5 stays on topic and fully answers the prompt even if it is not done in the best way https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250651850 2018-04-11 11:40:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250651850 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250652247 The main difference between the 7&9 essay was that the analysis of 7 was adequate whereas 9 was more in depth ]]> 2018-04-11 11:42:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250652247 5 and 3 Essays https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250652726 The main difference between the two is that the 5 essay at the very least had a clear claim and addressed it at various points throughout the passage while the 3 essay had no such claim and thus the claims in the rest of the essay fall short of being persuasive and convincing.]]> 2018-04-11 11:43:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250652726 Predicted score 3 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250652750 I was confused about the passage and I didn't support my claim with proper analysis, ]]> 2018-04-11 11:43:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250652750 I think I got a 4 because, although I always think giving my best on an essay would yield a high score, I usually miss a detail in the prompt or essay, resulting in a much lower score than I anticipated. https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250652881 2018-04-11 11:44:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250652881 7 and 9 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250653434 The biggest difference between the 7 and 9 essays is the much better and more sophisticated use of diction and overall writing in the 9 essay and the much more profound and interesting analysis and claims made in the 9 essay.]]> 2018-04-11 11:46:08 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250653434 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250653924 Most likely a 4 because the ideas could've been made clearer and I didn't use many techniques to support my claims.]]> 2018-04-11 11:47:47 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250653924 My predicted score is a 4 because my essay was meh, it could've stayed on topic better than it did. https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250657218 2018-04-11 11:57:54 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250657218 The 7 does everything that is asked with great completion and very extensively but the 9 goes above and beyond in everything so things like style actually affect this category. https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250657562 2018-04-11 11:58:49 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/250657562 3 & 5 essay https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/251080690 Essay 3 had no claims and didn't answer the prompt, mostly summary, and poor diction. Essay 5 answered the prompt, decent claims, better diction and analysis, but analysis is not very in-depth ]]> 2018-04-12 11:24:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/251080690 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/251080981 The 3 essay's lack analysis and is more of a summary whereas the 5 addresses the prompt and has analysis]]> 2018-04-12 11:25:23 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/251080981 7&9 Essay https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/251081677 Essay 7 was well-formulated, good diction, and analysis is in-depth. Essay 9 stood out, very high diction, deep-analysis.]]> 2018-04-12 11:27:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/251081677 Predicted score 2 https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/251082532 I didn't finish my essay, because I was in a time crunch and I also wasn't connecting with the passage. I did a lot of summaring.]]> 2018-04-12 11:29:57 UTC https://padlet.com/elizabeth_nicolai/7ieqvh0hik3g/wish/251082532