3G3 Planned Response Feedback by SITI SAHARA BINTE OSMAN (NIE)

Instructions

siti_sahara_binte_osman — 2024-04-16 06:44:18 UTC

You should have:

Completed and uploaded brainstorming into Padlet.
Completed and uploaded audio/ video recording into Padlet.

You are going to:

Class: Go through common areas of improvement.
Pair: Listen to your partner's recording.
Pair: Provide ONE feedback for improvement and ONE strength to your partners.
Individual: Edit response based on feedback given.

Prompt 1

siti_sahara_binte_osman — 2024-04-16 06:47:20 UTC

Does going on social media appeal to you? Why or why not?

Which is better?

siti_sahara_binte_osman — 2024-04-16 06:53:36 UTC

Point 1: Going on social media does appeal to me.
Point 2: Going on social media is appealing because it entertains me.

Elaboration 1: It has a variety of platforms such as Whatsapp or Instagram where you can seek help.

Elaboration 2: We can easily seek help from friends at the comfort of your homes. If you need help with an assignment, or have difficulty completing your homework, you can ask your friends via social media platforms such as WhatsApp, Instagram, and many more. The ability to communicate without the hassle of meeting up when you need help is extremely valuable to us.

Elaboration 3: We can use social media for different sorts of entertainment such as watching videos, making videos, or sharing videos to your friends. You are also able to express yourself with the things you post. There are also downsides to it such as cyberbullying.

PE(E)L

siti_sahara_binte_osman — 2024-04-16 07:04:26 UTC

Key words/ phrases to look out for:

For example, I ...
I remember ...
I have ...

Tap on your experiences!

It has to be personalised and unique.

Example 1: For example, when I am bored, there is Instagram and TikTok where there are funny videos that entertain us. There is Instagram reels and stories which we can use to engage with others.
Example 2: One example would be, I travelled to Japan during school holidays. There, I saw a deer bowing politely for their food. I thought that this was very interesting. As such, I posted this interesting experience on my social media to share this source of joy with my friends and family. Though this may seem trivial, it is a good way for me to share my happiness and other emotions with my friends through social media. Hence, social media does appeal to me as it helps me express my emotions and experiences when I do not know who to talk to.

Example 3: Social media provides us with access to news and activities in real life. Although social media does have negative impacts like cyberbullying and depression, I would say that drawbacks are avoidable.

How can you elevate your response?

siti_sahara_binte_osman — 2024-04-16 07:06:45 UTC

Stage 1: Make your stance clear

Yes, I find it very appealing because... OR
No, I do not find it appealing because...

Stage 2: Provide varied perspectives

Yes, I find it appealing because... AND
However, some may not find it appealing because...

Stage 3: Varied perspectives + rich vocabulary

AT LEAST 1 min 30 seconds long

siti_sahara_binte_osman — 2024-04-16 07:08:43 UTC

1 Feedback for improvement + 1 Strength

siti_sahara_binte_osman — 2024-04-16 07:23:00 UTC

"Ron used a diverse range of vocabulary. However, he could work on elaborating on her main point."

"Harry was very fluent and clear in his delivery. He could lengthen his response by adding a personal experience to meet the 2 minute mark."

Jiemin and Yipei

loo_jie_min — 2024-04-17 01:19:27 UTC

We can use social media for different sorts of entertainment such as watching videos, making videos or sharing videos to your friends. From my experience, there are a lot of trends going on apps like TikTok, Instagram and others that are going viral. The reason of these trends going viral is because many people share the video to their peers. For example, the renegade trend was gaining popularity on TikTok back during the pandemic as people share the video to people to friends.

Aqiloo and Shahaziq

2024-04-17 01:22:48 UTC

Watching videos is entertaining for me as the social media will posts according to what interest me the most and the influencers I mostly like and follow. As for an example,I love watching and knowing more about what I could do at the gym.Therefore when gym contents appear,I would like and follow to make sure it goes on my FYP.Watching videos also allows us to relax our brains and have some peace of mind and fills out the Boredom.

Yong Xin , huiwen

lim_hui_wen_1 — 2024-04-17 01:23:12 UTC

We use social media for sort of entertainment such as sharing videos . when I see a videos that are interesting and useful like ways for cooking and some cooking skills I will share to my family members such as my parents as they usually cook for us at home so that their cooking skills will improve and the cooking video will also entertain me as I like such cooking videos

Luo ley and Haziq

2024-04-17 01:23:25 UTC

We can watch videos in social media apps such as TikTok, YouTube and Instagram. We watch these videos for many purposes, such as entertainment and personal interests. For example, someone may like watching a specific influencers videos or specific type of videos, because they find them entertaining and fun.

Huaxin,Yuze

zhang_huaxin1 — 2024-04-17 01:23:39 UTC

we can use social media for different sorts of entertainment such as watching videos , making videos or sharing videos to your friends , for example I can express my feelings through posting ,or even entertain others with my humorous videos

teng fong munyu

2024-04-17 01:24:32 UTC

sharing videos allows me to attract people with similar interest such as me sharing about michael jordan about his basketball career through the sharing we can get more relation with the people that are keen to see the post as well as understanding the content.Therefore, video that i share can seek out other people interest in the content that i posted

Xuehan and Wei hong

huang_xuehan — 2024-04-17 01:25:24 UTC

We can entertaining ourselves in social media by watching videos as it helps us to improve mood, relaxation and connectivity with our friends.For example, me as a students feel stress for the examination therefore I will watch videos such as sponge bob and Doraemon frequently so i will destress throughout the enjoyment of watching videos.

Zhi Ying and Xie Rui

tang_zhi_ying — 2024-04-17 01:25:52 UTC

Using social media to share viral video such as Instagram.For example,some influencer posted some funny videos like they playing games which are interesting and they make fun of themselves.I can share this video to friends can let them feel happy and we also can use the video ideas that I share on our real life.

Adam and asyi

mohamad_adam_mohamad_hairulsham — 2024-04-17 01:27:58 UTC

We can use social media for different sorts of entertainment such as watching videos, making videos, or sharing videos to your friends. In my experience, I share videos for news to my family and friends. For example, in TikTok, there are news talking about the war happening right now. I share video’s like this to ensure my friends and family knew about the situation that is happening right now. Therefore, sharing videos help others to know more of the present