RAISING SOCIAL AWARENESS FOLLOW-UP by DAVID SUA https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34 Please post your writing task here as part of your Easter break assignment. Due date April 9th. en-us 2023-03-25 23:44:09 UTC 2023-04-21 13:45:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4da.png KEVIN yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531515980 Can humanity get rid of the internet and continue developing?
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In my point of view the essay has relevant information for the chosen topic, the paragraphs are organized and contain the requested items, the chosen image is also according to the topic and you can understand the content and perspective of the author. Alejandra]]> 2023-03-25 23:45:33 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531515980 DAVID yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516000 Feedback:
This is a really complex topic, but you synthesize the main ideas in a clear way. Your descriptions were concise and easy to understand. The examples were a good resource to introduce your point. And finally the parragraphs have a structure easy to read.
I like the essay in general terms. In mi opinion the topic is complex, because it is part of our daily life, we see a lot of issues of the society every day and it is frustrating think that this will continue to happen, if we are not part of it.
Thanks for choosing this topic, it was interesting to me read it.  
Comments by Juan Sebastian Enciso]]> 2023-03-25 23:45:38 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516000 SANDRA yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516020 The Psychology of Music 
How Listening to Music Can Have Psychological Benefits? 

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Personally, I think that the way you exposed the topic is very appropriate, you used the structure of the essay well and all the introduction, body, and conclusion were well understood. In addition, the references you put gave scientific context to what you were talking about. 
The topic you chose seems very interesting to me and all the information you gave made me learn many new things. 

Samuel
]]> 2023-03-25 23:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516020 LAURA yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516044 2023-03-25 23:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516044 SAMUEL yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516062 Feedback:

your essay complies with the proper structure and it is a relevant and interesting topic. The vocabulary of the paragraphs is very complete and you added in a good way a photo related to the topic. I liked the content of your essay.

Daniel H]]> 2023-03-25 23:45:51 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516062 VANESA yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516075 Feedback by Alejandro S:

From my own perspective this is a huge dilemma that we are facing day by bay. I think that you bring a useful paper due to the pros and cons that it contains. Also you gave a pretty good reference (The social dilemma) and that motives the reader to search for more information about the issue. I would like to highlight your creativity, because your task is pretty well designed and colorful and that means that it could catch the attention of anyone. Congrats.]]> 2023-03-25 23:45:55 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516075 SOFÍA C yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516107 Feedback
I consider that all the information that you chose was relevant and related to the topic as well I reckon that you selected the perfect image that express the fear of kids to go to school and the grammar and the way you write was very formal.]]> 2023-03-25 23:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516107 SOFÍA B yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516124 Feedback: I believe the topic of your essay is extremely interesting and essential, I really liked the way you explained how situations that are common for most children can affect them long term and the way you highlighted the importance of taking care of those issues in the right time so they don’t become a problem later, which is something all parents should be aware of. The way you structured the essay was very good, I only found a little mistake which is you wrote This are just a few examples and it is These are, but the rest of it was excellent.

Sofía C
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  •  Regarding your essay I have a similar opinion. Women  have the rigth to make decisions  about their own bodies and lifes. In that sence  that our country  had allowed  the abortion within 24 weeks  has been  a big step for women, since this decision can improve the women´s lifes  not only in health terms  also with poverty gap. I consider  that the abortion is an interesting topic and with a lot of points of view.
     In my opinion is good article with relevant information and you used easy vocubulary what makes the text easier to  understand
    Katherin Céspedes
    • ]]>     2023-03-25 23:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516142     DANIEL H yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516191 Is life better or worse than 50 years ago?

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    I can see that your essay accomplish all the relevance of the topic and is very complete. It has a correct structure regarding the introduction, paragraphs and conclusion, also the diagram is excellent and very appropriate for the text. I really liked your essay. 

    Sofia B.

    ]]>     2023-03-25 23:46:22 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516191     KAREN yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516200 2023-03-25 23:46:24 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516200 DANIEL C yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516216 2023-03-25 23:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516216 Ma. CAMILA yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516245 Feedbacck: 
    Your topic is very interesting, I like that it mentions different opinions, especially from scientific groups. Also by having an interesting and complete content you get the reader to see the importance of porbematics. Good job and nice presentation
    ]]>     2023-03-25 23:46:35 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516245     JAVIER yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516258 2023-03-25 23:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516258 ALEJANDRO yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516292 In this essay I tried to develop some perspectives about meat consumption. As a consequence this paper focus its attention on socio economic aspects and the environmental impact of this phenomenon, considering important data or facts from different studies to reach a personal opinion of the topic.

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    I    s really interesting how the consumption of meat can affect different aspects like our planet, society and health. I think all that stuff that involves the consumption of meat is really warning. However, is not that easy to take out of our diets since we are accustomed to consume it in our daily lives.

    All the aspects that you talked about in your essay are clear and give us the important information of each point.  
    All the essay is well organized the introduction, the two main ideas and the conclusion.  Also the grammar is perfect. 

    Congratulations
    Att: Estefanía Herrera Muñoz

    ]]>     2023-03-25 23:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516292     SARA yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516297 Feedback:
    Content
    The contents are relevant and they are connected to with the author's thesis. It communicates its ideas to the reader.

    Organization
    It includes an structure of an argumentative text and the ilustration is according to the topic.

    Style
    Is is concise,  has a format and it's clear.


    Language
    There are some spelling mistakes]]>     2023-03-25 23:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516297     ESTEFANÍA yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516313 Feedback: The topic is very interesting, is something that affect us more than we think, in your essay you talk about the most relevant things of this topic, you put and introduction that makes easier to understand the topic in context, I think you answered the first part of the cuestion you make, but the last part is unconclused, I think you can talk more about the different human rights that this type of industry is violating, you did a good job using the grammar and the formal vocabulary, it's easy to understand the essay and the images support very well what you are saying. Camila]]> 2023-03-25 23:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516313 JUAN S yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516342 Feedback: Considering everything you talked about in your essay, it made me wonder my daily personal consumption and how many companies generally blame consumers for environmental pollution. I believe that nowadays there is a dangerous excess of information that can make us  believe anything we read, and  i believe it´s important to be informed scientifically in order to not to fall into mistakes.
    I think it is a very punctual and concrete essay, you have to be careful with the punctuation, since some ideas are cut because of that. I liked that you explained it in a simple way, providing your point of view.
    Sara M

    ]]>     2023-03-25 23:47:00 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516342     KATHERIN yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516367 Feedback: The essay looks at how having same-sex parents affects kids' growth and happiness, and it's pretty thorough. It shows a lot of research to back up the idea that the most important thing is how well the family gets along, no matter if the parents are from the same sex or straight.
    The essay also deals with concerns that people might have about same-sex parenting, like whether it could influence on children’s sexual orientation. But the essay includes several relevant studies and research findings to support the argument that parental sexual orientation is less important than the quality of family relationships in determining the well-being of children raised by same-sex parents.

    The essay is a solid and thoughtful exploration of the topic, and it does a good job of making the case that same-sex parents are just as good as straight parents at raising kids. I really enjoyed
    Javier Acevedo ]]>     2023-03-25 23:47:05 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516367     ALEJANDRA yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516383 Should the working day be shortened for the sake of health? 

    Feedback: 
    The topic is relevant and exciting, and you show good statistics. 
    Maybe you can be a little clearer about organization and conclusions 
    Grammar: 
    The excess daily and weekly work is not a solution to ...

    ]]>     2023-03-25 23:47:10 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516383     XIOMARA yeisonsuacca https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516398 Do all kinds of sports bring benefits for people's health?]]> 2023-03-25 23:47:16 UTC https://padlet.com/yeisonsuacca/7gtyopcezdpc5s34/wish/2531516398