Water Crisis by Erin Gray Durocher https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2 Made with a curious mind en-us 2018-02-02 16:53:43 UTC 2025-12-18 05:13:31 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227576447 2018-02-02 16:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227576447 1161361 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227576710 2018-02-02 16:56:25 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227576710 ... https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227576924 One thing this person could do to make their response better is talking more about Gitanjali Rao's invention. ]]> 2018-02-02 16:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227576924 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578359  ]]> 2018-02-02 17:00:09 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578359 One thing that they could have added is that the machine https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578362 2018-02-02 17:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578362 one thing this person could do to make it better is for example, then Gitanjali made an invention that helps you test water to help see if it is dirty or not. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578510 2018-02-02 17:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578510 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578621 One thing this person could do to make it better is to write sentence starters.]]> 2018-02-02 17:00:42 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578621 they coulof at lease put a period do they pay attention https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578835 2018-02-02 17:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578835 one thing this person would of done to make it better is use For example or According to the text. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578841 2018-02-02 17:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578841 one thing this person can do is to tell what the problem is and to answer what they said .also they need to be pusific on what they said https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578863 2018-02-02 17:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578863 me https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578874 one thing this person could have done better is write a sentence starter like for example]]> 2018-02-02 17:01:15 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578874 one thing this person could of put a period there is no name but they put it in every other one. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578899 2018-02-02 17:01:18 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578899 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578911 one thing this person could do is they could use commas, periods and more. ]]> 2018-02-02 17:01:20 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227578911 one thing they could have done was put for example or on page blank it says https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579109 2018-02-02 17:01:39 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579109 one person https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579215 2018-02-02 17:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579215 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579431 some thing that this person cam do is fix it ]]> 2018-02-02 17:02:21 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579431 one thing the person should have said the girls name which is gitanjali and they said thing and they should have more examples about the machine. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579494 2018-02-02 17:02:31 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579494 One other thing they could of at least put a period this person needs to pay attention more. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579616 2018-02-02 17:02:44 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227579616 the problem is that she or he didn't have a capital. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227580011 2018-02-02 17:03:40 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227580011 one thing this person https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227580629 2018-02-02 17:05:04 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227580629 antonio https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227580962 they should make more sense ]]> 2018-02-02 17:05:50 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227580962 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581007 The person that they wrote because instead of a period.

]]> 2018-02-02 17:05:55 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581007 hi https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581140 One thing they could have done is read it over and look for mistakes.]]> 2018-02-02 17:06:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581140 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581293 something this person could do is check over their work .]]> 2018-02-02 17:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581293 The problem is that it's suppose to say text structure and he or she said test instead of text. Also that person didn't add a period, didn't complete C and they also should have added more details for C. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581294 2018-02-02 17:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581294 one thing this person could have done better to fix it is to put periods at the end of there sentences. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581419 2018-02-02 17:06:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581419 Get rid of the because this person needs help https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581482 2018-02-02 17:06:54 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581482 truthfuly i think he should put text structure intead of test subject https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581484 2018-02-02 17:06:55 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581484 ... https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581551 One thing this person can do to make this response better is getting rid of the because. They should also put the p lowercase in problem and solution .]]> 2018-02-02 17:07:03 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581551 one thing this person could do to make it better. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581630 2018-02-02 17:07:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581630 This person would of fixed there responce with adding periods and more details. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581760 2018-02-02 17:07:33 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581760 They should have added more information to there writing. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581764 2018-02-02 17:07:33 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227581764 billy mendiola maldonado 1161361 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227582642 every thing


]]> 2018-02-02 17:09:36 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227582642 they could make some changes https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227582702 2018-02-02 17:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227582702 Jonae https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227582782 at least they tried]]> 2018-02-02 17:09:53 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227582782 Yazlin https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583173 One thing this person did wrong ]]> 2018-02-02 17:10:46 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583173 They didnt spell water correct and they need a period and you cant start a sentence with because. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583241 2018-02-02 17:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583241 They spelled some words wrong. What grade is this https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583279 2018-02-02 17:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583279 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583303

They started with because in the sentence.]]> 2018-02-02 17:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583303 truthfully i think this person needs periods https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583322 2018-02-02 17:11:04 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583322 ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................that is what you need https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583330 2018-02-02 17:11:06 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583330 The problem is that that person didn't add a period in R A OR C and they started with the word BECAUSE BTW YOU NEVER START WITH THE WORD BECAUSE. Unless it's like something else. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583673 2018-02-02 17:11:46 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583673 ... https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583719 One thing this person could fix in their response is getting rid of the because that is starting their evidence in section C.]]> 2018-02-02 17:11:52 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583719 it is good but you need fix somthing......................................................................................................................................................... https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583756 2018-02-02 17:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583756 antonio https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583761 they need to put periods ]]> 2018-02-02 17:11:57 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583761 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583763 SOMETHING THIS PERSON COULD FIX IS ADDING PERIODS NEXT TO SOLUTION AND NEVER START WITH BECAUSE. NICOLE]]> 2018-02-02 17:11:57 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583763 one thing person that this person can fix is putting periods at the end of there sentences. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583864 2018-02-02 17:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583864 Yazlin https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583870 One thing this person did wrong was no punctuation ]]> 2018-02-02 17:12:11 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227583870 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227584132 they have to LOOK BACK FOR RELY ]]> 2018-02-02 17:12:41 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227584132 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227584470 2018-02-02 17:13:19 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227584470 that is good https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227584599 2018-02-02 17:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227584599 They did good this is the best one omg now thats 5th grade great job person https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227584622 2018-02-02 17:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227584622 antonio https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585341 they dont need to fix anything its perfect i wish i was like that]]> 2018-02-02 17:14:57 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585341 Yazlin https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585368 One thing this person could have fixed was to put the problem and solution in the A.]]> 2018-02-02 17:15:00 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585368 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585522 2018-02-02 17:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585522 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585589 Good Job to whoever made this !! :3

]]> 2018-02-02 17:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585589 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585864 2018-02-02 17:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585864 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585895 That is great. ]]> 2018-02-02 17:16:03 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227585895 they is good you can put a lil more work in https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586205 2018-02-02 17:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586205 I think that person did an amazing job. But she forgot a capital in A but she is doing great. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586251 2018-02-02 17:16:47 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586251 ... https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586258 One thing that this person did well was telling us about the device. ]]> 2018-02-02 17:16:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586258 i like how you put sentence starters https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586269 2018-02-02 17:16:49 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586269 What that person had to fix was the problem and solution but the other stuff he did good. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586433 2018-02-02 17:17:13 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586433 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586468 This person wrote everything correctly ]]> 2018-02-02 17:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586468 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586498 thanks]]> 2018-02-02 17:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586498 1165129 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586545 she is very smart]]> 2018-02-02 17:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586545 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586600 2018-02-02 17:17:33 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586600 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586886 2018-02-02 17:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586886 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586948 GOOOOO GGOOOOOOO u ROCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK]]> 2018-02-02 17:18:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586948 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586983 2018-02-02 17:18:20 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227586983 ball https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227587125 2018-02-02 17:18:36 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227587125 hi https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227620623 2018-02-02 18:29:10 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227620623 omar https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227620876 hi]]> 2018-02-02 18:29:42 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227620876 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227621224 ok

]]> 2018-02-02 18:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227621224 hi https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227621638 2018-02-02 18:31:31 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227621638 h https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227621702 This is a very good way to learn from or mistakes

]]> 2018-02-02 18:31:40 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227621702 One thing this student could have done to approve this race response is they could have done is put periods in places where they belong. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622019  JEFFERY]]> 2018-02-02 18:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622019 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622114 One thing that this person could do is put more details about Tethys.]]> 2018-02-02 18:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622114 ne thing this person could do is to use sentence starters and be more descriptive. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622120 2018-02-02 18:32:30 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622120 You need to add sentences starters and periods. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622237 2018-02-02 18:32:42 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622237 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622381 this ks fun

]]> 2018-02-02 18:32:57 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622381 RONAN https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622402 C is a NEEDS sentence starters. ]]> 2018-02-02 18:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622402 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622436 the person could of used sentences starters.

]]> 2018-02-02 18:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622436 good job https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622464 2018-02-02 18:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622464 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622465 One thing you can do is that you should put the name of the girl thing.]]> 2018-02-02 18:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622465 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622517 something the person could do better is to add periods and b]]> 2018-02-02 18:33:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622517 It doesn't make sense. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622560


]]> 2018-02-02 18:33:18 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622560 he spelled led wrong https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622570

]]> 2018-02-02 18:33:18 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622570 Siri https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622644 This could be fixed in one way. 

]]> 2018-02-02 18:33:26 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622644 hola https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622701 2018-02-02 18:33:31 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622701 it cool the best thing _juan https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622734 2018-02-02 18:33:35 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622734 They need to use better details from the text, and add periods. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622903 2018-02-02 18:33:55 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622903 yhdasvkjk https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622928 2018-02-02 18:33:58 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227622928 Maya https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623302 you didn't restate the question. ]]> 2018-02-02 18:34:44 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623302 s https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623479 2018-02-02 18:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623479 he did not put a period https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623486 2018-02-02 18:35:09 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623486 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623570 it cool]]> 2018-02-02 18:35:21 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623570 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623895 foooooooooooooooooooooooood]]> 2018-02-02 18:36:04 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623895 they could of added more details. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623911 2018-02-02 18:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623911 Maya https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623928 2018-02-02 18:36:07 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227623928 Jezzy https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624061 2018-02-02 18:36:22 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624061 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624332 They could have spelled lead right.]]> 2018-02-02 18:37:03 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624332 sup https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624583 2018-02-02 18:37:41 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624583 Keily https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624622 They could of  made sences.]]> 2018-02-02 18:37:46 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624622 ilugilgliygilgyylug https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624798 2018-02-02 18:38:12 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624798 The word story has to be text. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624821 2018-02-02 18:38:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624821 Alaiza https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624835 That you need more details in there writing.]]> 2018-02-02 18:38:17 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624835 they could of written text structure instead of test subject https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624884

]]> 2018-02-02 18:38:25 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624884 add periods and make proper spelling. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624903 2018-02-02 18:38:30 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624903 thats nice https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624906 2018-02-02 18:38:30 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227624906 One thing he could do better is fix the grammar. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625104 2018-02-02 18:39:04 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625104 they did a good jod on the R! https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625135 2018-02-02 18:39:09 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625135 they did not put full sentence https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625138 https://media.giphy.com/media/3oxOCwwg0LvrKe5LoY/giphy.gif

]]> 2018-02-02 18:39:09 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625138 they can do better by... https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625181 It is IT IS NOT SUBJECT. ]]> 2018-02-02 18:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625181 Maya https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625211 They should add three supporting details.]]> 2018-02-02 18:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625211 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625358 They could have put the word article instead of story.]]> 2018-02-02 18:39:49 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625358 it can be better some bad some good https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625500 2018-02-02 18:40:07 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625500 jabes https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625716 2018-02-02 18:40:37 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625716 it is not in full sentences https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625963
]]> 2018-02-02 18:41:08 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227625963 t https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626343 2018-02-02 18:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626343 their writing doesn´t https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626396 2018-02-02 18:42:13 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626396 jabes https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626464 2018-02-02 18:42:21 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626464 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626470 2018-02-02 18:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626470 they should add more details https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626573 2018-02-02 18:42:37 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626573 jabes https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626632 there needs to be more fun\

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]]> 2018-02-02 18:42:45 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626648 K https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626754 They could of not used because.]]> 2018-02-02 18:43:02 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626754 it cool https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626826 juan]]> 2018-02-02 18:43:12 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626826 NEEDS A PERIOD https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626893 2018-02-02 18:43:21 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626893 use periods and use proper spelling https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626908 2018-02-02 18:43:23 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626908 Alaiza https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626911 That Because According to the text doesn't make any sence and more deatils.]]> 2018-02-02 18:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626911 It is waste not wate. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626948 2018-02-02 18:43:28 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227626948 JEZZy https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627105 2018-02-02 18:43:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627105 ................................ https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627107

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]]> 2018-02-02 18:43:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627107 they should of used the sentence starters https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627150 2018-02-02 18:43:54 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627150 Maya https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627174 They should add more details and spell some words correctly. ]]> 2018-02-02 18:43:57 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627174 They should add periods https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627227 2018-02-02 18:44:03 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627227 JEZZY https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627335 2018-02-02 18:44:16 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627335 Braelyn https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627375 They could have used sentence starters.]]> 2018-02-02 18:44:20 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627375 how much i need to say ,.......................................... https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627556 2018-02-02 18:44:44 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627556 JEFFERY https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627587 2018-02-02 18:44:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227627587 add more deatails https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628085 2018-02-02 18:45:51 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628085 I'm learning https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628190 2018-02-02 18:46:02 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628190 he did good https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628217 2018-02-02 18:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628217 ALAIZA https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628536 You did a Good Job and you added a lot of deatils . 

]]> 2018-02-02 18:46:41 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628536 great job on what you wrote https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628577 2018-02-02 18:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628577 Great good I like your supporting details. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628635 2018-02-02 18:46:51 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628635 not chemicals lead https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628961 2018-02-02 18:47:31 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227628961 This is perfect. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629142 They used sentence starters and periods.]]> 2018-02-02 18:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629142 JEFFERY https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629157 2018-02-02 18:47:58 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629157 keily https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629564 I like how you Answer the question.]]> 2018-02-02 18:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629564 perfect job https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629576 2018-02-02 18:48:54 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629576 The hole thing is awsom but my favret part is the C. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629707 2018-02-02 18:49:11 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629707 you had every thing good and olso good https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629724 2018-02-02 18:49:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629724 lalala https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629771 2018-02-02 18:49:21 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629771 JEFFERY https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629807 2018-02-02 18:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629807 I liked th https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629825 2018-02-02 18:49:28 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629825 i like how she added periods. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629854 2018-02-02 18:49:31 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629854 Maya https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629889 I like how you did everything
(-__-) (*O*)]]> 2018-02-02 18:49:38 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629889 great job and i https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629928 2018-02-02 18:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629928 They did good https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629984 2018-02-02 18:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227629984 I liked that this person used three supporting details. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630059 2018-02-02 18:50:00 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630059 i like the words https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630109 2018-02-02 18:50:06 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630109 somebody farted. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630147 2018-02-02 18:50:10 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630147 great joband what you did https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630179 2018-02-02 18:50:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630179 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630232 I like how they added three details.
 ]]> 2018-02-02 18:50:23 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630232 BRAELYN https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630244 2018-02-02 18:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630244 They did good on most of it https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630268 2018-02-02 18:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630268 GGGOOOOOOODDDDD. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630274 2018-02-02 18:50:30 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630274 i love his text. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630317 2018-02-02 18:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630317 great job and i also liked how you restated the question https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630373 2018-02-02 18:50:42 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630373 i like how she resta https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630423 2018-02-02 18:50:49 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630423 GREAT RACE RESPONSE https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630463 2018-02-02 18:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630463 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630711 2018-02-02 18:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630711 i likw how she res https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630749 2018-02-02 18:51:35 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/227630749 EFRAIN https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228130473

]]> 2018-02-05 14:42:57 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228130473 the patriots lost https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228130788 2018-02-05 14:43:26 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228130788 Ryan https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228130940 Yolo

]]> 2018-02-05 14:43:38 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228130940 Sayma https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228130959 One thing that they could've done was restate the question better.]]> 2018-02-05 14:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228130959 hi buddy https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228131045 2018-02-05 14:43:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228131045 this is cool job https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228131233 2018-02-05 14:44:04 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228131233 pats rule https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228131258 Needs more work.

]]> 2018-02-05 14:44:07 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228131258 chris a guy https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132051 one thing they did wrong was they spelled restate wrong.]]> 2018-02-05 14:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132051 Azaria https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132400 They could've restated the question correctly.


]]> 2018-02-05 14:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132400 julissa11 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132402 One thing this person could do was fix his sentence and restate the question and put the period at the end and not in the begining.

]]> 2018-02-05 14:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132402 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132439 one thing that they could of done was they could of restated the question better, and have propper punctuation.]]> 2018-02-05 14:45:51 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132439 they could of done was https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132455 2018-02-05 14:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132455 One thing they could've fixed the restated question and periods. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132481 2018-02-05 14:45:55 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132481 Nooo! https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132491 2018-02-05 14:45:55 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132491 makailaa https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132514 One thing this person could do to make  it better is they could have restated the question correctly.]]> 2018-02-05 14:45:57 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132514 Kimberly https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132548 One thing the person could have done was at least put one more sentence in A in RACE because when you already look at it you could tell that it is wrong and could also put a period at the end instead of the beginning.]]> 2018-02-05 14:46:01 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132548 Sophia https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132600 they could of restated the question corectly.]]> 2018-02-05 14:46:05 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132600 Efrain https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132811 2018-02-05 14:46:26 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132811 Mensur you could have restated the quetion. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132832

]]> 2018-02-05 14:46:28 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132832 EZZY https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132904 one thing they cold have done is explain why the text structure is problem and souliton.]]> 2018-02-05 14:46:36 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132904 hello m8 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132922 2018-02-05 14:46:38 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228132922 Cristian https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228133109 Needs more of R and A.]]> 2018-02-05 14:46:56 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228133109 chris the guy2000 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228133985 one person did not even write c

]]> 2018-02-05 14:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228133985 Aver https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134686 One thing that they could of changed in there c is write the girls name and be more specific]]> 2018-02-05 14:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134686 Sophia https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134742 One thing they could of changed is use one of the sentence starter's.]]> 2018-02-05 14:49:30 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134742 add the persons name a add the invisions name https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134755 2018-02-05 14:49:30 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134755 David https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134817 one thing you can fix your C is to put the girl name and invention

]]> 2018-02-05 14:49:36 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134817 one thing they could've done was use sentence starter's https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134966 2018-02-05 14:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228134966 sayma https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228135012 One thing they could fix is ,instead of saying the girl they can just add her name.]]> 2018-02-05 14:49:58 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228135012 Cristian https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228135040 Needs to add the girls name.]]> 2018-02-05 14:50:01 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228135040 One thing they should have done is written the girls name even if they didn't know how to spell. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228135596 MAKAILAA]]> 2018-02-05 14:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228135596 Kayla https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228135811 One thing the person could of fixed is the invenitons name]]> 2018-02-05 14:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228135811 one thing that you can add is the persons name. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228136114 2018-02-05 14:51:16 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228136114 Kimberly https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228136126 One thing that the person could have done was put a sentence starter to help understand the sentence much better.]]> 2018-02-05 14:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228136126 julissa11 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228136262 One thing they could of done was put the girls name and not just say the girl because then we wont know who the girl is.]]> 2018-02-05 14:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228136262 Efrain https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228136624 They should put the name of the girl.


]]> 2018-02-05 14:52:01 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228136624 ryan https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228137786 Another thing is the text structre. they thought it was test subject and because shouldn't be there]]> 2018-02-05 14:53:48 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228137786 David https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228137818 2018-02-05 14:53:50 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228137818 avery https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138008 2018-02-05 14:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138008 Cristian https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138112 It is a text not a test]]> 2018-02-05 14:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138112 Sayma https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138240 One thing you did wrong is that instead of saying test subject you can ]]> 2018-02-05 14:54:28 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138240 David https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138820 Its a text not a test]]> 2018-02-05 14:55:14 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138820 julisssa11 https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138986 For A he could've done The problem and solution is.]]> 2018-02-05 14:55:26 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228138986 Kimberly https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139112 One thing they could have done in that WHOLE HOUR WAS at least put some more sentences because it would be a lot easier to understand. But the person did a good job.]]> 2018-02-05 14:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139112 Mensur https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139117 You should have not put the because there]]> 2018-02-05 14:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139117 makailaa https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139169 They should have added a little more work.]]> 2018-02-05 14:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139169 taste like chicken https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139250 2018-02-05 14:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139250 EZZY I think they could have read the quiston more then one time. https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139473 2018-02-05 14:56:02 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139473 Azaria https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139551 2018-02-05 14:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139551 Sophia https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139825 2018-02-05 14:56:32 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228139825 ryan https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228140391 2018-02-05 14:57:19 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228140391 Hey https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228141174 2018-02-05 14:58:24 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228141174 David https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228141328 Good start but there are some mistakes]]> 2018-02-05 14:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228141328 chicken strips https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228141694 2018-02-05 14:59:00 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228141694 David https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228143053 good work]]> 2018-02-05 15:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228143053 david https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228153477 2018-02-05 15:16:38 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228153477 howdy dooooo https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228623637 2018-02-06 14:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/228623637 hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/230787749 2018-02-12 19:28:13 UTC https://padlet.com/egray12/7gr2nof3ytm2/wish/230787749