https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn In pairs, type all the features you have identified. Can you add any more that you think you personally need to work on? en-us 2018-09-03 07:14:11 UTC 2018-09-19 08:28:03 UTC hello@padlet.com lauratulk https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/282759060
As I heard yet another stern voice echo across the field, I knew what I needed to do. It was the moment. The moment I had been trained for. My stomach churned and my muscles tensed. After what felt like hours but was only seconds, the final command came. I froze. All I could hear around me were deep, quick, heavy breaths. All I could see were terror-stricken faces on both man and beast. All I could feel was fear.

]]> 2018-09-18 08:33:41 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/282759060 lauratulk https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/282999042 A success criteria is something we use to make sure we include everything we need to for a successful piece of writing. 
For example:
What tense is it written in?
What person?
What sentence types can we include?
How can we make it descriptive?
Have they used their sense to add detail?]]> 2018-09-18 15:58:48 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/282999042 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301904 1) Write in FIRST person
2) Use the 5 senses: smell
Touch see hear feel (not sure on that)
3) show not tell

]]> 2018-09-19 08:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301904 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301945 try Your best 
Don’t write without pucntioan 
Paragraphs 
Capital letters 
First person 
Wow words 
Good connectives 

]]> 2018-09-19 08:17:13 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301945 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301951 1. Use senses to describe 
2. Subordinate clause 
3. Extended noun phrases 
4. Use punctuation correctly 

]]> 2018-09-19 08:17:14 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301951 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301955 My steps to success 
Use your senses 
Try your best
Concen 
Subord claus 🤶



]]> 2018-09-19 08:17:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301955 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301986 Punctuation,use 5 senses,write in first person,Capital letters,praragraphs ]]> 2018-09-19 08:17:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283301986 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302019 1. Senses
2.adh]]> 2018-09-19 08:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302019 n_ogilvie2_wis https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302090 The steps of success are :
Correct punctuation,Capital letters,Adjectives,Paragraphs]]> 2018-09-19 08:17:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302090 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302096 2018-09-19 08:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302096 tjain1609 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302097 Our success criteria today is to:
Use our senses in our writing
Use noun phrases
Use SMOAP]]> 2018-09-19 08:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302097 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302352 2018-09-19 08:18:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302352 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302367 1)use punctuation 
2)do it in first person
3)work hard

]]> 2018-09-19 08:18:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302367 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302414 Punctuation 
Spelling 
Grammar 
Write in full sentences 
Connectives
Adjectives 
Paragraphs 
Wow words]]> 2018-09-19 08:18:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302414 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302910 2018-09-19 08:20:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283302910 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283303021 1.) correct punctuation
2.)  paragraphs
3.) ]]> 2018-09-19 08:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283303021 https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283303430 To use our 5 senses and describe what we feel like]]> 2018-09-19 08:21:54 UTC https://padlet.com/lauratulk/7gopxl8fiitn/wish/283303430