https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x (작문 수행평가) 1과 P.25 Think & Write에서 동료평가를 받은 후 수정한 작문 올리기 en-us 2021-05-02 04:01:23 UTC 2021-07-30 01:02:50 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f618.png 3915look https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1481747360 When we use the internet, we should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more.First of all, we should follow language rules because someone may not understand us. Also, we should post only true information. People may believe our incorrect information. Finally, we should not leave rude comments. We can hurt others’ feelings. Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-05-02 05:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1481747360 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1533852535 When we use the Internet, we should follow some rules.
Then we can enjoy the Internet more.
First of all, we should post true information because people may belive our incorrect information.
Also, we should not leave rude comments because we can share personal information.
People can use our personal information.
Keep these rules in mind.
Then you will be a awesome internet user!]]> 2021-05-18 02:23:26 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1533852535 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1533853703 2102겨녕ㅅ]]> 2021-05-18 02:23:51 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1533853703 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1533858902 When we use the internet, we should follow some rules.
Then we can enjoy the internet more. First...,....
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Then we can enjoy the internet more.
At First, we should not leave rude comments. 
If we leave rude comments, we can hurt other's feelings. 
Secondly, We should not share personal intormation because people can use our personal information.
At last, We should should not copy someone's writing. 
We can make someone's effort diseppear. 
Keep these rules in mind.
Then you will be a great internet user! ]]> 2021-05-18 02:28:30 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1533865275 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1535122345 When we use the Internet, we should follow some rules.Then we can enjoy the Internet more.First, we should not use someone's ID because the ID's owner may be angry.Also, we should not copy someone's writing.We may break the law.Finally, we should post true information.If we post incorrect information, people may believe our incorrect information.So, we should follow these rules.Keep these rules in mind.Then you will be a great Internet user!]]> 2021-05-18 11:35:21 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1535122345 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539027383 When we use the internet. We should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more. The first way is, we should not use someone's ID. Because we may break the law.
The second way is, we should post true information. People may believe our incorrect information. The third way is, we should not share personal information. Because people can use our personal information. Keep in mind this way you can use the internet cleanly.]]> 2021-05-19 10:46:03 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539027383 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539030754 When we use the Internet, we should follow some rules.Then we can enjoy the Internet more.First of all, we should not us someone's ID because people can use our personal in formation. Also, we should not leave rude comments. We can hurt others' feelings. Finally, we should post true information. People may believe our in correct information. Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great Internet user!]]> 2021-05-19 10:48:14 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539030754 ggms110 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539039377 Create a Clean Internet Environment
When we use the internet, we should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more. First of all, we should not share personal information because people can use our personal information. Also, We should not leave rude comments. We can hurt others` feelings. Finally, We should post true information. People may believe our incorrect information. Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-05-19 10:53:39 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539039377 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539184728 2111백지원
Be a Great Internet User!
When we use the internet, we should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more. First of all, we should post true information because people may believe our incorrect information. Also, we should not copy someone's writting because we may break the law. Finally, we should not share personal information. Keep these rules in mind, then you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-05-19 12:08:46 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539184728 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539388770 When we use internet，we should follow some ruels.
Then we can enjoy the internet more.
First of all，we should not sharing personal information beacause we may break the law.
Second，should posting true information.
Beacause Peaple may believe our incorrect information.
Finally，we should not copying someone's writing
beacause we can hurt others'feelings.
Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great
internet user!]]> 2021-05-19 13:08:06 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539388770 ggms121 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539406517 When we use the internet, we should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more.Frist of all,we shold not leave rude commets because we can hurt other’s feeling Also, we should not share personal information. 
People can use our personal information,Finally, we should not use someone’ID. We may break the law. Keep these rules in mind Then you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-05-19 13:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539406517 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539578752 Be a Great Internet User!
When we use the internet, we should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more. First of all, we should not share personal information because people can use our personal information. Also, we should not use someone’s ID. The ID’s owner may be angry. Finally, we should not copy someone’s writing. We may break the low. Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-05-19 13:48:56 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539578752 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539585306 When we use the internet, we should follow some rules.
Then we can enjoy the internet, First of all.
We should follow language rules because someone may not understand us. Also, we should post true information People may believe our incorrt information.
We should not share personal information. 
People can use our personal information.
Finally, we should not leave rode coments.
We can hunt others’feelings
Keep these rules in mind. Then you will he a gread internt user !]]> 2021-05-19 13:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1539585306 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541632816 When we use internet, we should follow some rules.
Then we can enjoy the internet more.
First of all, we should not copy someone’s writing
because we may break the law.
Also, we should not use someone’s ID.
We can hurt others’ feelings.
Finally, we should not share personal information.
People can use our personal information.
Keep these rules in mind.
Then you will be a great internet user!

]]> 2021-05-19 23:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541632816 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541652643 Be a good Internet User!

When we use the internet, we should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more. First of all, we should not leave rude comments because we can hurt other’s feelings. Also, we should post true information. People may believe our incorrect information. Finally, we should not copy someone’s writing. We may break the law. Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great user!]]> 2021-05-19 23:26:28 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541652643 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541654042 When we use the internet, we should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more. First of all. we shouldn’t copy someone’s writing because we may break the law. Also, we shouldn’t leave rude comments.
We can hurt other’s feelings. Finally, we shouldn’t use someone’s ID. People can steal our ID. Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-05-19 23:27:23 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541654042 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541654960 When we use the internet,we should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more. First of all,we can copy someone’s wrting. because people may not undertand us. Also,we should not use someone’s ID. because people can use our personal information. Finally,we not leave rude comments. because,we may break the law. Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-05-19 23:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541654960 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541675345 Follow three rules on the internet
When we use the internet, we should follow three rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more. First, we should post true imformation because people may belive our incorret imformation. Second, we should not use someone's ID. We may break the law. Third, we should not leave rude comments. We can hurt other's feeling. We should follow these three rules, we can enjoy the internet more!]]> 2021-05-19 23:39:35 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541675345 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541676218 When we use the internet, we should follow some rules.Then we can enjoy the internet more. First, we should post  true information. Because people may belive our incorrect information.Second, we should not leave rude comments. We can hurt other’s feelings.Lastly, we should not copy someone’s writing.Because we may break the law. Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a well-mannered internet user!]]> 2021-05-19 23:40:05 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1541676218 ggms124 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1550642360 When we use the internet, we should follow some rules. Then we can enjoy the internet more. First, we should not leave rude comments because we can hurt others' feelings. Also, we should post true information. People may believe our incorrect information. Finally, we should not copy someone's writing. We may break the law. Keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-05-23 00:10:38 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1550642360 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1551421973 When we use the internet, we should follow some rules. 
Then we can enjoy the internet more. First of
all we shold follow language ruler because
someone may not understand us. Also,we shold
post true information be cause people may beliere our
incorrect information.
we shold not use someone's  10 because prople can use our personal infor mation.
Finall,we shold not leave rude comments.
we can hurt other's feelings
keep these rules in mind. Then you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-05-23 14:52:24 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1551421973 kcs1922910 https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1663517470 When we use internet , we should follow some rules. 
Then, we can enjoy the internet more.
First of all, we should follow language rules. because people may not understand us.
Also, we should post only true information. because people may believe our incorrect information.
Finally, we should not leave rude comments. we can hurt other's feelings. 
Then, you will be a great internet user!]]> 2021-07-29 00:12:34 UTC https://padlet.com/3915look/7dl9gkm4yb47my5x/wish/1663517470