https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl What three rhetorical devices/techniques did you utilize in your speech? What areas of your speech do you feel needs strengthened? en-us 2017-05-08 13:20:19 UTC 2017-05-08 16:59:35 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565273 I use quotes, parallelism, and pathos. My whole speech needs strengthened, I have a lot of points I want to make and things I want to say I just can't organize them the right way. It doesn't flow and it is all over the place.]]> 2017-05-08 16:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565273 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565538 I called out to the reader for them to take action and think about their lives]]> 2017-05-08 16:51:36 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565538 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565550 idk i didn't finish. i need to fix the grammar and edit the whole thoing]]> 2017-05-08 16:51:41 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565550 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565792 -Fact
-emotion
-evidence]]> 2017-05-08 16:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565792 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565809 why my issue happens and the way other people would feel on it.]]> 2017-05-08 16:52:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565809 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565911 -Rhetorical questions
-real life experiences
-audience addressing
The middle really needs working on

]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:03 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565911 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565917 I used lots of statistics and numbers and then connected it to emotion. Also, i need to actually finish my speech.]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:05 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565917 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565928
I used logic, and statistics in my paper.

I also used some emotional trauma.

]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:06 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565928 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565972 Moral, Sarcastic questions and Sarcastic statements. 

The length and structure kind of]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:16 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565972 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565993 I used face, delivery, lothos. Main points.]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:20 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170565993 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566000 idk i didn't really start writing it but i have nothing in mind so help 

]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:21 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566000 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566026 I used statistics and quotes as well as application to logos and pathos. I feel that i need to shorten and concentrate my speech so it is more presentable, and the flow needs some work

]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566026 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566070 2017-05-08 16:53:34 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566070 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566092 real life experiences 
quotes
audience ]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:38 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566092 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566097 reaching out to the audience ]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:39 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566097 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566116 I used a lot of pathos and facts. I feel my speech could use a better conclusion.]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:43 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566116 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566139 Repetition, Parallelism, Question and the ending ]]> 2017-05-08 16:53:47 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566139 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566201 quotes ,parallelism ,and moral
the call to action]]> 2017-05-08 16:54:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566201 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566244 im not sure what i use but ill find out and tell u]]> 2017-05-08 16:54:09 UTC https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566244 https://padlet.com/tshephard1/7d44e1mppgwl/wish/170566275 quotes, but I'm not finished

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the middle

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