Zaki Video:

I think the concept of the video is nice and simple, especially on the part where he show the text chat, really add to the realism. The video sells the product as a comfort for the character, fit the tone of what the product is intended. Overall, a really good video.

Gyandra Video:

The concept of the video is really unique and the comedy aspect sells the whole video. I really like the interaction between the actors and how authentic it is (in a borading house and between the friend). The product placement is nice too, although really frontal hehe. Overall, the video is really good.

Salwa Video:

Her video concept is simple and effective, presenting a "show don't tell" method. Not a lot of talking and just show what the product can do and what is intended for, a little hard selling strategies but effective in my opinion. Even so the storytelling aspect is present clearly Overall, really good video.

Artika Video:

Her video concept is similar to a lot of perfume advertisement in general, but there's a certain authenticity to it. Maybe because the scene is familiar between friend and it shows the product in not the usual elegance and luxury, but more so an everyday item that everyone can have and experience. Really good job on showing the story and also the product benefits.

Zaina Video:

Her concept video for her product is simple and effective in my opinion. Simple in a way that, relating the product to everyday item such as tea in this example. The emphasis of the product benefits only comes from narration which I think can used more visual, but it's fine as it is. Good job.

Bernadetha Video:

Her is interesting because the emotional aspect really sell the whole video. The concept itself is really simple, but effective on invoking the audience emotion and the message of how the product can make important memories. Really good video.

Faras Video:

His concept video is really unique, completely different from the original tone of the product itself. It leans more towards comedy and somehow it works really well. It's really good and fun.

Eka Video:

His video, unlike the previous one, is a proper advertainment product in general. Really professional, and well made. Hard selling strategy, but well made in general.

Kania Video:

Her video is simple and effective, showing how the product solve the character problem in a straightforward way. I really like the transition especially during the before and after the character have the product. Lastly the tagline at the end of the video is really well executed. Really good job.

Rahma Video:

Her video storytelling is really good and enjoyable and also relatable to the viewer. The subtle product placement is well executed, until the big reveal in the end. The transition and the music fit well, especially how it changes to fit the scene in the video, Really well done.

Siti Nurgina Video:

The video itself is quite nice and simple, having shown the message of slowing down in a busy world. The product placement is really subtle and more focus on the story that it trying to tell. Really well done. Although, the few subtitles that are being shown can be fixed to be more grammatically correct because I noticed one or two subtitles that kind of not grammatically correct. But, well done.

Revi Video:

Short and simple, really nice. It shows the "Why do this instead of joining this" kind of way. The editing and transition between scenes are smooth and effective. Really well done overall.

Ulya Video:

The video is relatable, showing how the struggle of being a college student in an authentic way who lives far away from home. The editing is well made, between the transition, the sound effect, the visual effect, all blend together nicely. Well done.

Esya Video:

Her video is different from other from what I can tell, because this is the first one that was inspired from a popular media, Wednesday, which is really good. The unique thing about the video from what i saw was the Hand, the effect is really real and believable, I have no idea how she edit the whole body out and leaving just the hand. Really good job.

Adinda Fatimah Video:

The video is simple, having little to show, but the concept is there and clear to see. The relatability is the main aspect that I think bring the video together, annoying ads and listening to music while studying really shows the authenticity of a college students. Overall, it's great. I think it can be improve with different camera angle such as from the top.

Syahla Video:

Short and simple, just showing the product itself and how it will be when being worn by people. Really showing the hard selling strategy that I assume she choose. Really good.

Kalil Video:

Short and fun. Really like the comedy aspect in this video. It's pretty generic in a good way, like a snicker video that i reminded. Well done.

Jihan Video:

I notice the concept of the video took a format from a popular TikTok format in which instead of guessing the job of the person, this one guess the favorite food. Really good at adapting the format and integrating it into her own video. Good job.

Raisha Video:

Another short and simple video. Effective use of transition, sound effect, and the product placement. Although the transition is a bit rough and can be improved to be smoother next time. Well done.

Maikel Video:

The video really emphasize on the product, showing the hard selling on a full frontal in the face kind of way. The comedy shows and really nice overall.

Nadya Video:

The video is simple and follow the typical format where the product is the solution to all problems. The editing is cute and fun, but I think the narrator voice can be a little clearer, especially when explaining the product benefits. Overall, well done.

Hairawati Video:

The format of the video follows a familiar format in which it becomes a "tutorial" on how to use the product it promotes. Different from the previous beauty product that I have watch before, which is a nice pace of change. Well done.

Hasna Video:

The video is simple and nice. Although there are some couple of things that can be improve. The first thing the video lack audio, like background music and sound effect. So, I think that can be improve next time. The second and last thing is the video angle can be more varied, especially when the character was writing a whole lot. Maybe a low shot angle and maybe a side angle. But, it's a really well made.

Esyliva Video:

The video is well made. I really like how she integrate memes for the comedic effect and then how it transition to the product placement, which turns to a more professional scene during it. Really good blend between two elements. Well done.

I really like the emotions and relatability that the advertisement evokes. It feels like the target audience might even experience it themselves.

for Gyandra: The story is entertaining. I enjoy watching the video even though it is a bit long.

for Salwa: The idea is so fresh. But the music is a bit too loud.

for Artika: The subtitle can help me understand your writing since the audio is a bit unclear.

for Zaina: I like the visual of your video.

for Bernadetha: I guess, additional writing can help dramatize the video.

for Faraz: hilarious! The video can show how the product is useful for cleaning the face.

for Eka: awesome visualization. I think emphasizing the visualization of the sweet tea would be more engaging.

for Rahma: Lady Rose is popular for older people, but you can make it appropriate for youngsters.

for Ghina: I like the calmness portrayed in your video. Adding a bit more about the sandals' features would be better.

for Revi: probably you need to add "call to action" words.

for Adinda Fatimah: the same as Revi, probably you need to add "call to action" words.

for Syahla: Lafiye Hijab looks comfy in the video. However the transition is a bit not smooth.

for Annisa Khalila: We know that Indomilk is for kids, but you can make it appropriate for college students.

for Jihan: The quality of the sound is so great.

for Raisha: I like the sound effect in your video.

for Nadya: Cute editing. But the sound is a bit unclear.

for Haira: I enjoy seeing your skincare routine. I think the sound of your video can be simplified.

for Siti Hasna: The features of Joyko can probably be added to the video.

I quite like the song selection and how minimalistic yet effective it is, which is great for a commercial. The emotion conveyed in the ad is excellent, and the theme fits the message.

Gyandra: It's entertaining. The comedic style of the video is really hooking to watch until the end of the ads.

Salwa: The purpose and aim of the product are shown clearly and with the right actors representing the target audience.

Artika: The narrative in the story gets a lot of people. I think it's emotionally connected to a lot of people. The filter when the perfume was applied tells a story by itself.

Zaina: I like how the shots were taken from the video, it highlights what the story wants us to know. And that's a good storytelling technique in my opinion.

Bernadetha: The storytelling is relatable for A LOT of people. Gramedia really can holds memories and different impressions for a lot of people. It connects products and people emotionally.

Faras: It's entertaining and funny, while somehow still relatable and helpful for the target audience.

Eka: I like how the shots was made. It doesn't look like it's taken by a college student. Shots and taken like professional-level.

Kania: I like how the purpose and the aesthetic of the product shown in the video. It highlights and tells the right things about the product.

Rahma: I like the buildup from the story to the product. It's really worth watching.

Gina: I like the cinematography in her video. I think she did a good job with it. It tells how busy the world is, and highlights the product.

Revi: I like how it captured a student's life with it's storytelling. It feels emotionally linked to students.

Ulya: I can see the incredible effort in the video. The tagline is also genius because "Catch Up" sounds similar to "kecap", the product.

Esya: I like the reference shown in the video. The theme goes really well with the product.

Adinda F: The problem shown in the video are related to a lot of students. I like how the storytelling shown that.

Syahla: The storytelling feels warmth, like what the product is trying to tell. It alligns well.

Kalil: The students' life and stress are shown relatable for a lot of people. I also like the humor of the video with the effect of the product.

Jihan: I like the concept because it's been to some people's algorithm. The humor is on point.

Raisha: I personally like the product, and I think the video captured how I really feel to about the product.

Michael: I like the humor and the vibe on the video. It's chill and simple, yet effective.

Nadya: The change of color in the video goes along with the story quite well. It highlighted the product.

Haira: The video brings upbeat energy that's related to a lot of people nowadays. Multiple highlighted products are also placed well.

Hasna: The buildup from start to finish is really worth to watch. It really gives the "ohhh" when people watch it.

Esyliva: The humor and the editing is relatable for the target audience. I think it can reach the audience well.

Fauziyah: The story introduce a common problem some people have, and followed with a clear solution (the product).

Annisa S: The product highlighted well along the storytelling in the video. The narrative is relatable for gen-z.

Arkan: I like and relate to both the story and the product. It's a daily consumption product and is highlighted well in the video.

Shafira: The storytelling is funny, possible, and relatable for all people, especially students. The message it's trying to tell is certainly delivered.

Retha: The storytelling is easy to follow. The technique didn't use any oral narrative, so the audience only need to watch and see what's happening.

Dharma: The humour is funny and it's related for the target audience's behavior. I think it's an example of an advertisement that understood it's audience.

Naufalita: The shots are on point to highlight the product. The story setting is also helping the soft-selling.

The audio isn't really audible and there's no subtitle so I it kind of hard to understand what Zaki's said in the video. But overall the video is very relatable especially for anak kos. 😬

The advertisement is really relatable especially for the boys since what we're looking for is mostly a good price with a good quality. The duration is quite long but I love how the video is made with some humors and comedy, it made me as the audience keep watching until the end.

Canva is something that I often use myself, so the ad actually gives me new ideas on how I can use it, not only for making presentation slide, but I can also make a memorable gift for a loved one.

Zaki:

I really like your choice of music, especially you getting bullied by your peers in your ads video. Your theme is captured in the video perfectly and I like how you use subtitle to tell the story, and of course the music is also strengthening the emotions to life.

Gyandra:

I like the comedy it gives, giving its own charm to the audiences. But my only problem is that it takes about more than one or two minutes, which can make the audiences lost or feel boring. The video could be made into two minutes.

Salwa:

I really like your ads, and the music is nice too. The camera motion and its position is perfect to show the audiences what happens without it being confusing. Although I do wish that the song's volume is lower, letting the audiences hear the voices of the people's dialogues in the advertisement.

Artika:

The video is nice by showing the brand for many times but not too overwhelming. The advertisement also has a good story to tell for the product. Although, one thing that lacks in the video is the audio almost unheard—maybe you can raise your audio volume.

Zaina:

The advertisement is nice, and the story is also simple, but the video shows its purpose clearly. Good job.

Bernadheta:

The advertisement is nice and has heartwarming tone. From the first half of the video, I was confused by the purpose of the video, like, "What this video is trying to sell, is it selling books, the place, or else?" And then I realized that it is trying to sell Gramedia. Maybe you need to be more explicit or show the brand more more, such as showing the characters admiring the place and point at the brand itself, making them look excited into the place.

Faras:

The video has a good comedy, and it really has nice, exageratted elements, making it very entertaining. The video also makes it clear what it is trying to sell, and I admires your effort in making it short for advertisement. Good job.

Eka Surya:

I really like a simple advertisement. The video is hard-selling, but it doesn't have overwhelming persuasion. I really like it. But I do want to have the narrator's voice to be louder. Good job.

Kania:

I really like your advertisement and the storytelling is simple but effective for selling the product, especially you make it clear what product you are selling in the ads. Good job.

Rahma:

I like the advertisement approach you use by showing the daily life of college student that has problems with sleeping. And it flows seamlessly with selling the product. But duration could be shorter, maybe around two minutes, to make it effective so you don't lose your readers' attention.

Nurgina:

The video is nice because it uses UPI's environment, particularly its nature such as leaves, grass, and trees. Although it still suffers with the confusion of what product it tries to tell. Maybe you need to be more explicit in showing your product without trying to tell your audiences to buy the product, since you seem to be using soft-selling approach.

Revi:

The advertisement is very much relatable with the problems college students are facing. I really like your scenes in your video, because they show variation that keep audiences engaged. But the first until the half of the video could be tightened or shorter because I almost lost my interest—it stretches too long than it needs to.

Ulya:

I relate too much with how in your ad, the main character expresses her protest to her daily food being chicken and always be chicken. I love its pacing, and the brand is very much clear to the audiences so they know what this video is trying to sell.

Esya: The video is very cool because I watch the wednesday and for "thing hand" is so cool and attractive.

Adinda Zahra: Spotify brand is so wonderful because I use that apps too for listening music, so Dinda's video is related to me.

Syahla: For the brand video is so attractive and the caption "Timeless design, Radiant mind" is cool.

Khalila: The video is so funny because the talent is totality, and the editing for Indomilk is very cool.

Jihan: In this video especially ladder scene is funny and I like richeese factory chicken.

Maikel: For Maikel's video is related to me because converse sneakers is one of my favorite and very cool to wear.

Nadya: Cimory is cool for drink in hot condition in Bandung, and for the Nadya's video is attractive make me want to buy that cimory.

Haira: For the video is wonderful when Haira used sunglasses and the product is attractive make the audience want to use N Pure product.

Hasna: For the video is great explanation about the Joyko, and the transition is good.

Esyliva: For the video honestly is so great because position of camera and ice between the glass and yakult looks cold, make me want to mix that ingredients into drink.

Raisha's Video: I think it is pretty interesting from the design effect of the ad.

Fauziyah's Video: The video about scarlett product is so cool because feels like real vibes when the weather is so hot and my skin is dry, make me want to use that product.

Annisa Sabilla's Video: For the concept video about Chakolab tumblr is so good, her explanation about the product is great too, make me want to buy the tumblr because big size.

Arkan's Video: Kapal api and the explanation is so attractive because he explain kapal api is one of the sponsor in independence day in 2019, and for the video is great because feels like horror vibes and connect with the kapal api product.

Shafira's Video: She explain Ice cream Joyday is so funny because there is a boy nabrak dia

Retha's Video: In my opinion the video is so cool but sorry I don't know about the product, but the music and the video is great mix and connect with the blush on product.

Dharma's Video: The lighting could get more work, but other than that, it's fine

Naufalita's Video: The video is so wonderful because the vibes feel nostalgic with "Rindu Sendiri" song and her explanation about hanasui product is good.

I think the advertisement is very funny and relatable. The fact that shoes/one piece of clothing can make one feel confident is nice.

I really like that the advertisment leans on the exaggerated/hyperbole humour. It also gives the audience a solution to their problem with the product.

The ad does great job in giving solution to a problem and I think it gives a clear message and purpose to the audience.

The storyline is what catches my attention. I think it's quite fresh and relatable, especially with the inability to sleep and adapt to a new environment.

it was interesting, especially it feels grounded and relatable. Noodles is indeed the best choice for tough times like that. It has emotional connection to most people, I believe.

Gyandra P

The video was so funny. It looks natural like how people would talk to each other. He also used references that it was engaging to watch. I wonder how he created the script because it was funny and creative.

Salwa M

It was interesting! Canva indeed can be a good choice for situation like that. I like how she make it so natural. It was straightforward which make her video engaging.

Artika S

I love the video! It gave warmth and the quality of the video was great. It shows how nice perfumes can increase one's confidence and I like that.

Zaina A

I love tea! The way she utilize colors to show the changes (from grey to colorful) is great. I also love how the actors looked natural.

Bernadetha D

I love books so I like the video. Gramedia indeed has a special connection to me personally as it holds memories. Books always the best one to choose whenever I need to heal from my busy day.

Faras A

I love the backsound! The acting was also nice and fun to watch. I can see the effort they put on making this video and it was outstanding. Even though maybe the video can be made with better lighting.

Eka S

I love the video! It looks like a real advertisement, and the backsound also match the vibe. The color orange was emphasized and it shows a strong confidence.

Kania N

I'm so relatable to the video! I always struggle with my stuff and I believe a good bag would be the savior. I like how she made the video grounded natural.

Rahma Eka

I love how natural the actor is! The video really shows how many college students are having the same problem. It would be better if they add a slight backsound to cover the noise at some scenes.

Revi R

Interesting. I like the backsound as it feels like a real busy day.

Ulya R

I like how she shows a very relatable scene. She made me feels nostalgic because I often miss my home as well. I can see the effort she put on to the video.

Esya F

I like how she used Wednesday as references. It was engaging and it's not too long so it's effective to persuade the audience.

Adinda Fatimah

She depicted college life in a realistic way. I personally listen to Spotify and I hate it if the ad appears.

Syahla

It has an interesting meaning. The backsound matches the video as well.

Annisa Khalila

The video was funny and it makes me curious about how good the product is that they acted so energized.

Jihan F

I know the reference, and the video somehow makes me want to really buy the product. She made the script interesting.

Raisha M

It was interesting. It must be a lot of effort to create this. I would like to see the video to be made longer.

Michael B

The video looked so natural, funny, and relatable. The volume of the backsound, tho, can be made a bit lower.

Nadia Eka

The video is nice. The voiceover is matched the video. She used colors to define changes, and it was good.

Hairawati S

It was so interesting! It looked like it was made professionally. I like the confidence that it brought. Also, the video angle is great. The backsound matched the video beautifully.

Siti Hasna

The simplicity of the video is effective to engage the audience. Not much backsound, made me (personally) curious about what she is trying to deliver. It was a good marketing strategy. Also I like the creativity she put on her book.

Esyliva M

I love how she added memes to the video! It was fun and engaging to watch. The backsound also added the vibe to the video.

Zaki: I think the video is interesting and makes me want too make indomie too

Gyandra: The video that gyandra make is quite funny.

Salwa: I like salwa's video and the edit is very cute

Artika: I like the tone of the video and i like the edits of the video

Zaina: the video is interesting and the story is good

Benet: the video is good and the message delivered well

Eka: The video quality is very good

Kania: The video is cute and the story is very good

Rahma: The story is interesting

Gina: The video is good and interesting

Revi: The video is good and interesting

Ulya: I like the concept of the video

Esya: The concept is very cool

Dinda: The message from the video is well delivered

Syahla: The video is very good and the message is delivered well

Kalil: The concept is very cute and relateable to student's daily life

Jihan: The concept is unique and i like watch the content like that and the choice to make the video to advertisement video is the best choice

Urai: The video is very good and interesting

Maikel: The video already good and the message is delivered well

Hai: The concept and story is very interesting

Hasna: The video is good and message is delivered well

Esy: The concept and video's edit is very good and interesting.

your video is good, but maybe you can give subtitle since your voice over is not quite clear and loud. Overall, good job, zaki!

Gyandra:

Your video is very creative and funny, but maybe you can cut the duration to avoid the viewers lost their attention to your video

Salwa:

Your video is very creative and how you put your idea to give your bestie the edited scrapbook is very adorable!

Artika:

I really like your video! it is very demure, very cutesy, and adorable!

Zaina:

your video is really calming and simple yet left the impression to the viewers

Bernadetha:

Your video is very simple yet memorable because as a gramedian, I agree that every corner holds memories.

Faras:

you really put lot of effort especially the part where your face stained by dirt(((hope your face okay)))

Eka:

your video looks like a professional video! I like the visual of your video

Kania:

i like your copywriting and how you ensure the readers to buy the product

Rahma:

Your video is good, I really like the plot of your video

Gina:

your video is simple but I like the words you put on your video

Revi:

Your video is very academic coded and I like how you promote education in your video

Ulya:

your video is really creative and relate for the boarding houses' entity like mosf of college students who must be missed their homemade cooking

Esya:

it is creative when you put the only palm in your video, it is amazing!

Syahla:

I like how you put the charm and classy vibes in the hijabi girl, the way you act confident for the advertisement is really adorable!

Kalil:

your video is good, and your talents are funny! I like the vibes

Raisha:

I like the way you promote fore, but I agree for you to use the tripod for more stable video

Jihan:

Your video is good and funny and I admit i start feeling hungry when I saw your video

Michael:

your video is funny, the backsound which make it funny

Nadya:

I like your video! its engaging

Haira:

I like your video, it is very gen Z coded and you are very creative to make the plot of your story

Hasna:

Your video is good, I like the plot but maybe you can add more lighting in your video

Esyliva:

I like your video and the drink looks very refreshing

I think it is better if you put some subtitle in the video. But, overall you are doing amazing.

Gyandra:

Your video is interesting because you’re edited the video with some funny moment, and it makes the audience engage with your video.

Salwa:

I like the way you edit your advertising videos. Especially when you show how you edit things in Canva. Your edits make me, as an audience, want to edit photos in Canva.

Artika:

I love how you connects the memories with the parfume

Zaina:

I think it is better if you put some subtitle. But, overall I like your videos.

Faras:

Your video is so funny, and I love the story.

Eka:

I like how you and your friend edited the videos, it makes the brand looks more luxury.

Kania:

I really love how you put the story in your ads video.

Rahma:

I like how you use the edit feature in CapCut (text to speech).

Siti Nur Gina:

I know it is a softselling, but I think it is better if you focus more on the product. (Karena, kalau dilihat sandalnya kaya kurang terekspos dikamera gitu). But, overall you are doing great!!

Ulya:

I love how you put your effort in making the video, how you change your clothes many times. Thank you for sharing your video.

Esya:

I really like your ads video, you edited the video so cool><

Adinda F:

I love your story, it really relates to my life as a gen z that use spotify free hehe. You are doing amazing in making the video><

Syahla:

You’re doing amazing, I really like your ads video.

Annisa K:

I like the character in the video, at first they are stressed with the assignment but after the other friend gives them a milk, they enjoy their lives.

Raisha:

I think it is right that you said you should use tripod to make the video more stable. But, overall I love your video.

Siti Hasna:

I really love how you put detail in the video, how you catch the “joyko” item in the video. You are doing amazing!

Esyliva:

I love the way how you shoot the brand product, and make some drink from the brand. It makes me want to try the drink, because it looks so refreshing.

Salwa: without any subtitlte Salwa successfully conveyed the value of her product.

Artika: she emphasize her products value by adding a subtittle is amazing.

Zaina: I love how zaina conveyed her products value using a quiet short storyline yet engaging at the same time.

Bernadetha: the storyline very emotional and realistic to our daily life.

Faras: the concept is unique and funny.

Eka: the video looks proffesional.

Kania: The storyline is very related to our daily life and very engaging.

Rahma: it's very relatable and unique.

Gina: she successfully conveyed the "peace" in her point of view.

Revi: the storyline is to the point and clear enough.

Ulya: bringing up the "anak kos homesick" concept, the storyline is relatable and authentic.

Adinda: the video is simple and to tge point.

Syahla: it's very emotional and I suggest to makes the story more relatable with the products value itself.

Kalil: very relatable with "mahasiswa" without mentioned the value of her product.

Jihan: the concept is unique and trendy.

Raisha: I really love the tagline "forever"

Michael: the product zoom in is very dramatic.

Nadya: cute concepts in conveying her products value.

Haira: trendy video and success in emphasizing the products value.

Hasna: she shows the usefulness of the product by using a relatable storyline. I suggest to add a music so the video is more engaging

Esy: even if the concept looks general but she successfully make it looks creative.

2. Gyandra: The acting in this video is very entertaining and the idea behind it is truly beyond reason, so people who watch it won't get bored.

3. Salwa: The editing is very good, especially the idea of making something for someone on a special day.

4. Artika: I really like the idea of this perfume ad, because perfume can indeed preserve memories.

5. Zaina: I really like the color tone in the editing, and I'm also looking for a perfume with a tea scent.

6. Bernadetha: I really like the editing, because it really focuses on grammar.

7. Faras: This video is very entertaining, the idea for this facial cleanser ad is truly outside the box.

8. Eka: This video ad is very cool, especially the extraordinary cinematic aspect.

9. Kania: I really like the editing, but maybe there are some scenes that don't fit with the video's point of view.

10. Rahma: This video ad is very good, especially the acting, which is very deep.

11. Gina: Your video ad is very relevant to my current situation, where I rarely go out to get fresh air.

12. Revi: I really like this ad because it directly refers to the services offered without beating around the bush.

13. Ulya: I'm very interested in this video because the editing is very good.

14. Esya: I really like this idea because it connects to the movie Wednesday, which I also like.

15. Syahla: This video is very interesting and doesn't look like it's selling a product.

16. Kalil: I really like the idea of this ad because it fits perfectly with the situation of students who are overwhelmed with assignments, and fresh drinks are the solution.

17. Jihan: This video is similar to foreign content.

18. Raisha: The idea for this ad is very good and leads directly to the product.

19. Michael: This ad video is very relevant to everyday life, where Converse shoes are an item that is often worn.

20. Nadya: This video is very funny, even though there are changes from the previous draft.

21. Haira: This video is really like with influencers reviewing products.

Hasna: I really like the editing, which depicts daily activities and conveys everything through text.

22. Esyliva: This video is very interesting and focuses on the product.

Gyandra: Successfully delivered the message very well. The way comedy was inserted made the video very engaging.

Salwa: Salwa delivered her presentation very well. Her explanation was clear, and I liked the part where the video showed the editing process.

Artika: Artika presented very well. The way “memories” were visualized in the video was excellent.

Zaina: The final shot with perfume and honey was well executed and very aesthetic.

Bernadetha: Benet did a great job delivering and promoting Gramedia.

Faras: The video uses comedy. It was delivered quite well.

Eka: The editing was very good and undoubtedly well done.

Kania: It was very helpful in explaining the function of the bag and how it can hold many items.

Rahma: Well delivered. The way she presented a problem and positioned Lady Rose, the brand, as the solution was effective.

Siti Nurgina: Well done. The part I liked the most was how she used a point-of-view perspective in the video.

Revi: Repi delivered the advertisement quite well, especially considering she was advertising services.

Ulya: The video was very relatable for college students.

Esya: Impressive. I was very impressed by the “Thing” from the Wednesday series—great dedication.

Adinda F: Well done, and the message was clearly delivered. Spotify was portrayed as a companion while working on assignments.

Khalil: Well done, and the message was clearly delivered. Very well delivered.

Jihan: The concept was very good and different from the others.

Michael: Well done, and the message was successfully delivered.

Nadya: Well done. The editing that changed the gray tone into a colorful one gave a strong impression of mood transformation.

Hairawati: I liked the song and the outfit—both suited Haira very well. The voice-over line “whatever you say, girl” fit perfectly with the video.

Siti Hasna: Well done, and the message was delivered clearly. I liked the transition showing her doing various tasks.

Esyliva: I liked how memes were incorporated into the video.

Personally, I really like how you edit the video especially when you want to show the room chat. Also, I think it is quite relevant to "anak kos". Cool!

Gyandra - KYT

Wkwkw honestly your video is so fun. It shows the "helmet" but packed with funny stories. Keep the goodjob!

Salwa - Canva

Your video is really god, you highlighted the brand. Me personally just found that the "carosel feature" is exist.

Artika - Mykonos

I really enjoy your video. I think is very cute, aesthetic and demure. My favorite part is your voice over. It so smooth, and make me feel want to sleep. Great Job, Artika!

Zaina - Bonavie

You cinematic is really nice. It feels like i'm watching a real movie. I can feel the emotion in your video. Good job!

Bernadetha - Gramedia

Great! your video is like melancholy movie.

Faraz - Barber Daily

I should say your video is very fun. Your effort can be seen from your face wkwkw.

Eka - Crusita

Your video is very good quality. When i saw that, it feels like looking a professional advertisement.

Kania - Exsport

Great video, Kania. From your video, I really interested to buy that bag. So cool!

Rahma - Lady rose

I really enjoy your video. It really makes me missed my bed wkwkwk

Gina - Torch

Your video is so cool, the "gerlong situation" scene is very related.

Revi - SINUS

I really enjoyed your video, how you edit the scene is so cool

Ulya - Bango

Your video is so heart-warmed. I really appreciate your hardwork!

Esya - Skintegrity

Esyaa your theme is so cool. Wednesday look is really suit on you. I adore your "thing".

Dinda - Spotify

Your video is so cool, i love how you packed the brand in a simple way.

Syahla - Lafiye

Actually, i love your video. You really emphasised your brand. So cool!

Kalil - Indomilk

I love your video. I laughed so hard because is so fun. Keep the good job!

Jihan - Recheese factory

Ohh really, i love your video. I never expected that kind of promotion. Also, the chicken make me hungry. Great, Ian!

Michael - Converse

Your video is very nice. I like how you shoot your video. Good!

Nadya - Cimory

Great job Nadia. Your video editing is so cute, i love how u put a cute stickers in it.

Haira - Npure

Hairaa i can see you put a lot of effort in your video. It feels like watching a professional beauty influencer. Keep the awesome job!

Hasna - Joyko

Hasna it is so cool, I can see you show up the brand. Great!

Eshy - Yakult

Esy, your video is very cool. The lemonade yakult is really tempting. I thing i want to make it after this. Cool!

1. for Zaki: your idea of using that kind of story is great, it is somehow related to me, as a univ student.

2. ⁠for Gyandra: your ads contains a comedy conversation, which I think that's good.

3. for Salwa: I love your storytelling line and video editing, it's very interesting!

4. for Zaina: I love how you filmed the closing visual of your video when it shows the product, it seems quite professional!

5. for Bernadetha: since I am a type of person who also love books, I would say that your video is succeed to make me nostalgic with Gramedia, how I spent my time there with my beloved ones.

•for Faraz: your video is very creative, it is great that you and your friends put those brown thing on your faces.

6. for Eka: I love how you film the product on your video, that's very professional and eye-catching as well.

7. for Kania: I love how you organized the concept of your video, it somehow related to many univ students

8. for Rahma: Regardless the duration of your video, I think your storyline for the whole video is very engaging to watch!

9. for Gina: Overall, I would say your video is cool, you did a great job :D

10. for Ulya: The part I noticed the most of your video is the one when you eat chicken, I love how you show your effort to film that part!

11. for Esya: Really love how you show that 'thing' on your video, it's very creative!

12. for Adinda Fatimah: Your storyline is very related to some people including me.

13. for Syahla: Overall, I would say that your video is very interesting!

14. for Annisa Khalila Mardzak: I love how your video somehow show colorful visual!

15. for Jihan: your idea of using that concept is very interesting to me!

16. for Raisha: I love how you put those voice effect on your video. However, it would be more interesting if the video wasn't too short! Overall, your final result is great!

17. for Michael: Your video is great!

18. for Nadya: I think your video is great, good job!

19. for Haira: I love how you put efforts on your final project! it's very professional.

20. for Hasna: I think it would be more interesting if your video also contains the voiceover or backsound. Overall you did a good job!

21. for Esyliva: Really love how you make that eye-cathcing drink from Yakult!

Gyandra’s video: Your video is really creative. Your video didn’t use much effect and editing but still fun to watch, and your jokes are really fresh. However, because it is an advertisement video, you should consider about your video duration because I think it is too long. Overall, our video is absolute cinema.

Salwa’s Video: I like the concept of your video. There is less dialogue and just present the product. It is an effective way to make people understand what do you want to tell.

Artika’s video: I think her video is proper and quite similar with the most perfume advertisement. However, I think you should change the font color in your video because if the background is light and your font is white, it is hard to see it clearly.

Zaina’s Video: I like the visual of your video and how you put common items in your video

Bernadetha’s video: I like the emotional aspect in her video. There is no dialogue in her video but that is what makes her video interesting and wonderful. Good job.

Faras’s video: His concept is very out of the box. Its randomness brings new tone and its really funny. The comedy aspect is really work and fresh.

Eka’s video: I think this is the most proper and professional advertisement so far. Unlike the other videos, this video really looks like a real brand advertisement. Hard-selling, short, and professional.

Kania’s video: Her video is quite simple as others. It shows how the product solves the character’s problem. But, maybe you should edit the audio because I can’t clearly hear what the character’s say because the backsound is as loud as the character’s voice

Rahma’s video: Her video is fun and enjoy to watch. The audio is clear enough so we can understand what are the characters’ try to say. Good job.

Gina’s video: I like the concept of your video. But, if you want to picture the busy day, it will be better if there is less shaking in your video because it looks more like there is an earthquake happens.

Revi: it is relatable situation where a students got frustrated from learning. Good job

Ulya: The situation is relate with anak kosan who always eat chicken everyday and got bored of it.

Esya: It’s good idea to bring a popular series as a reference in your advertisement.

Adinda Fatimah: It’s a simple video yet it’s able to depicted college student who always listen to music.

Syahla: It’s a good-simple video. The story you bring is align with the product you want to present.

Kalil: Your video is good. I like how you show the stress of student in humorous way.

Jihan: I like how you adapt the concept of a popular content in your way and it’s suit with your ads.

Raisha: I like how your present the product, the background is quite nice.

Michael: It’s a humor and chill video. The transition of the story and the ads is not smooth, but it creates more humor.

Nadya: The changed of color makes a good story-telling and create layer of emotion in your ads.

Haira: The video tells the product quite well.

Hasna: To be honest, for me it’s like a horror video. There is no backsound, no another angle, only one person just wrote something a whole time.

Esyliva: The humor and the editing is good for the audience. Well done.

- It was fun to watch but caption/subtitle will be appreciated

Gyandra

- I really enjoy the video, it was really funny and I really like the bgm choice

Salwa

- I really love your ideas, I found it really touching

Artika

- I think your placement of captions in the video are really great

Zaina

- I love your narratives in the video but caption/Subtitle will be appreciated

Bernadetha

- I love your video and the narratives you try to convey silently

Faras

- I really like your video but caption/Subtitle will be appreciated

Eka

- I love the vibes and color hues of your video, I can really capture the perfume's scent

Kania

- I love all the tidbits of edits in your video

Rahma

- I love how the narratives going and how you show the product

Gina

- I love the message you brought and the camera shots of your video

Revi

- I love the way you convey emotions in your video

Ulya

- I like the change of vibes, I can really feel the nostalgia

Esya

- I really like the character and how you relate your ideas to a popular series

Adinda Fatimah

- I can relate to the problem that showed on your video

Syahla

- I really like the bgm in your video, but maybe caption/subtitle will be appreciated

Annisa Khalila

- I really like your video, the sudden bursts of energy was really funny

Jihan

- I really like how you mentioned the product's characteristics in the video

Raisha

- I like the sound effects you used in your video

Michael

- I love all your bgm used in the video

Nadya

- I love the visual mood in your video, but caption/subtitle will be appreciated

Haira

- I like the routine you shown with each product, I found it quite educational

Esyliva

- I love the tidbits of meme shown in your video, I think it's really suitable for your target audience

I found the video very funny. But I think the duration is a little too long, I think it would be better to upload the video on YouTube.

Salwa:

I like how the advertisement gives the audience an idea to give a gift of a design.

Artika:

I like how the subtitle is only in some parts because that emphasizes on messages the video is trying to deliver.

Zaina:

The black and white part is satisfying to watch, it really illustrates the feeling of emptiness.

Bernadetha:

I like how the warmth of the video is different when it shows nostalgia.

Faras:

The overall storyline is really funny, I enjoy watching it.

Eka:

Wow! It is a professional advertisement.

Kania:

I really like the story, it's poetic somehow.

Rahma:

Cool! Funny! Amazing! Fantastic!

Gina:

I think it is an interesting point of view for the camera. Also, the transition from busy and chaotic to slow and calm is satisfying.

Revi:

The stress is really relatable as someone who has been through that phase.

Ulya:

Cool editing with a relatable story.

Esya:

I think it is interesting to use an existing character which is Wednesday, fits well to the integrity concept.

Syahla:

Nice video but I think it would be better if you come with another tone or voice.

Annisa Khalila:

Funny yet relatable. Also, a big applause for the acting.

Jihan:

The video uses trends on the internet, I believe it would gain many views.

Urai:

Nice video but I think the video duration is too short.

Michael:

I think the overall storyline is interesting.

Nadya:

I think the video should not point to another brand because I thought it was an Indomaret ad at first.

Hairawati:

Cool video. It follows trends on the internet, I believe it would gain many views.

Esyliva:

I like how the advertisement gives the audience an idea of how to drink Yakult in different ways.

Yayan: so funny! and good advertisement

Salwa: simple and cute concept

Artika: the aesthetic matches you so much

Zaina: unique and out of the box

benet: your video pacing is a bit too slow… but still good

Faras: very humorous and entertaining

Eka: so professional! such a good edit

Kania: i can where you bring the whole storyline. very clear

Rahma: nice edit and plot (because i’m the talent)

Gina: nice video of the color pallette, but i kinda get dizzy with the unsteady camera

Repi: brief and understandable

Ulya: how can you advertise soy sauce in such a deep way?!

Esya: it’s fantastic! the way you act as wednesday is just great

dinda: like the concept, but a bit too monotonous

Syahla: a complete elegant video

Kalil: funny and super energetic! loved it!

Urai: short and incredible, and i guess you can add more detail to the product

ian: i love how you make your video as what it’s trending now

Maikel: as always, super jokey

nadya: i kinda get confused at first what product will you advertise… but all done nicely

hayi: slayyinggg babeee. loved the concept so much!

Hasna: great, but maybe you can increase the video quality a bit!

Yayan: Yayan's advertisement is quite funny and entertaining, it's relatable too, maybe it needs more closure to the product.

Salwa: Salwa's advertisement is pretty good and entertaining, but putting some voiceover might strengthen the product's benefit closure.

Artika: I really like Artika's advertisement, it's colorful and it's deliver the product message easily, it also resemblance the product’s image.

Zaina: I like Zaina's advertisement because it shows the product’s image creatively and I like the cinematic effect that Zaina use.

Bernadetta: Bernadetta's advertisement is encouraging and comfortable for me, but it needs some closure of the product's benefits.

Faras: Faras' advertisement is very funny and fun to watch, it makes me aware of my face's hygiene.

Eka: Eka's advertisement is very cinematic and professional, but maybe it needs some closure of the benefits for the product.

Kania: Kania's advertisement is very motivates me to buy or use the same bag as she's advertised. The product closre is pretty good.

Rahma: I like Rahma's advertisement because it's shows the product’s benefits really well.

Gina: I like how Gina's put the first person impression on her advertisement, maybe it needs to show the product benefits a little bit more.

Revi: Revi's advertisement is very simple yet very interesting. Makes me want to try the tutoring service.

Ulya: Ulya's advertisement is very relatable and encouraging the audience to use the product.

Esya: Esya's advertisement is very creative and encouraging, maybe needs more closure to the product's benefit.

Dinda: Dinda's advertisement is pretty good and encouraging, needs more of the product's benefit.

Syahla: Syahla's advertisement is very emotional touching, needs more closure of the product.

Kalil: Kalil's advertisement is pretty simple, needs more closure of the product's benefit.

Jihan: Jihan's advertisement is creative and encouraging the audience.

Raisha: Raisha's advertisement is encouraging and comfortable.

Michael: The advertisement is very simple but entertaining.

Nadya: Nadya's advertisement is very simple but entertaining and cute.

Haira: The advertisement is very encouraging and informative. I like how it explain the information of the product very well.

Hasna: Hasna's advertisement is encouraging.

The storyline of the ad is really touching me and I think the message behind it delivered really well. I also have some products from Colorbox. So I feel relate with the ad, the colors of myself sometimes came from Colorbox's outfit!

Zaki: Your video is great, and simple. I want to buy Indomie after watch the video. But, there is an unfortunate opportunity there's no subtitles in the video

Gyandra: I really like the comedy of your video. This is engaging to watch from the start to ending.

Salwa: It's interesting and simple video. Really like how you edit the video

Artika: Wow cool editing! It makes me want to try that perfume

Zaina: I really like how you use black and white concept in the video

Bernadetha: The ads is using a soft selling strategy, and successfully promote the Gramedia

Faras: The story is engaging and fun to watch. I really like how you put the comedy in your video, but unfortunately you don't use the subtitles in your video. But overall, it's GREATT! After watch the video, I think I will buy barber daily for my daily skincare

Kania: I really enjoy watching your video, but there are some text that is not visible because its blended with the background

Rahma: Wow I really like the concept of your video. It's engaging and fun to watch from the start to the ending

Gina: Your video is interesting. My favourite part is when you shot the gerlong situation

Revi: It's really relatable to me because I have experience to that situation before (the UTBK)

Ulya: The story is great and the editing is really cool!

Esya: I really like the concept of your video. I still wondering how you make the "thing"

Adinda Fatimah: The video is good and simple. And I used spotify too, and sometimes it's annoying when the ads pop up

Syahla: The video is interesting. The strategy used is hard selling. Overall, it's a great ads!

Kalil: It's really fun and engaging. The talent is very energic

Jihan: I really like how the concept of the video you used. It used food guess leader, that make it interesting.

Raisha: The video is engaging and to the point

Maikel: Your video is really fun to watch, and there are some part of the video that relate to me. And I really like the humour of the video

Nadya: I really like when the colors change from black and white to very colorful.

Haira: Wow your acting are great. And I can see that you put a lot of effort when making this video.

Hasna: Your video is good, but I think you can adjust your volume

Esyliva: The video is great and really engaging. Hmm it makes me want to mix some drinks with yakult

2. Gyandra: I like how he packed the story; it's entertaining, and it's also funny

3. Salwa: I like how you edit the video, and the back sound really matches. I think you should have the voice recorder.

4. Artika: I really like your video since it really matches your personality. It really shows how nice the perfume is.

5. Zaina: The video is adorable and refreshing, and the actor also acts so great.

6. Bernadeta: What a video, I love Gramedia and the things in it. However, you can add more emotional appeal.

7. Faras: Your video is funny and

8. Eka: I love the video. It looks really prepositional and refreshing. I'd be great if you add some voice-over

9. Rahma: The video has good storytelling, and the video has great editing

10. Gina: i think your video is kind of different in a good way, i like the way you shoot the video.

11. Rhevi: It's pretty good. I like the way you deliver it.

12. Ulya: The editing is good, and how you transition to the product is so smooth.

13. Esya: I really like how you act as Wednesday, and the way you made the things were so realistic

14. Dinda: It's so relatable. I love your video

15. Syahla: It's pretty good and so advertising

16. Khalil: The video is funny

17. Jihan: The video follows the trend: using interviews and its creative

18. Raisha: The video is aesthetic, but somehow, we need a voice-over or at least subtle.

19. Michelle: It's good, and relatable.

20. Nadia: It's good, but at first, we were kinda confused about what product would be an advertisement

21. Haira: It's a cool advertisement. You looked confident, and all of the things matched the product.

22. Hasna: It's so creative

23. Esy: It's pretty good the way you put Wednesday as a reference.

Zaki - Indomie

I like it when there's a lot of talk from outside, It deepens Zaki's character's feelings. Man, it makes me want some Indomie. Oh, maybe it would be cooler if subtitles were added.

Gyandra - KYT

Even though the video is quite long, you can still enjoy watching it from start to finish. However, I feel that the hard selling part could have been made a little shorter.

Salwa - Canva

The video ad is very neatly edited. Cool.

Artika - Mykonos

This video motivated me to seriously join the Mykonos perfume buying war on TikTok live.

Zaina - Bonavie

I agree that fragrance can bring back memories. GG

Bernadetha - Gramedia

Very interesting video. Motivates me, who has low literacy to read more.

Eka - Crusita

Absolute Cinema. It made me feel the fragrance, even just through the video. Maybe I'll try buying it and see if it's drinkable.

Kania - Exsport

The advertisement really explains how functional the bag is. Nice

Rahma - Lady Rose

The video is hilarious. Turns out the main problem isn't the boarding house, but the sheets, haha.

Gina - Torch

The ad reminds me that sometimes we need to take a break from all the busyness. Great

Revi - Sinuskseupi

Interesting video, All of that for that price feels like a steal.

Ulya - Bango

Very relatable. AYAM LAGI!

Esya -

Surprised by the "Wednesday" reference, Nice

Adinda F - Spotify

Ads on Spotify should really be removed from this world civilization.

Syahla - Lafiye

Cool and simple. Maybe if possible, the volume of the people speaking could be turned up a bit so they don't get overshadowed by the backsound.

Kalil - Indomilk

The characters are very energetic, the advertisement is good.

Jihan - Richeese

The concept similar to the career ladder I saw on TikTok is perfect to apply to this as well.

Urai - Fore

A simple ad wrapped in a very neat edit. Nice

Maikel - Converse

Peak storytelling. I want to buy those shoes so I don't have to fix my hair.

Nadya - Cimory

The cat sticker edit fits the ad perfectly. Although I feel like the narrator's audio could have been made clearer.

Haira - Npure

Nice storyline and tells how to use the product very well.

Hasna - Joyko

Since there's no background music, I thought it was a bit of a semi ASMR paper. But I think if that's the focus, maybe the volume could be turned up a bit more.

Esyliva - Yakult

Lots of memes, nice.

2. Gyandra: The ad is good because it's not boring even though it's long for an ad.

3. Salwa: The ad concept is contemporary.

4. Artika: I like the warm but bright vibe of the ad.

5. Zaina: I like the visuals and editing of the ad.

6. Bernadetha: The concept of the ad is interesting and easy to follow.

7. Faras: I am entertained by the Fashial wash ad, which is comical.

8. Eka: The video is very professional, and even though it is short, that is what shows its selling point.

9. Kania: The concept of the ad is very relatable to me, as I also often carry a lot of things, and I also like the visuals and audio.

10. Rahma: The vibe of the story resonates with the young target audience, even though this brand usually seems to target housewives.

11. Siti Nurgina: I like the aesthetic visualization, so it's not boring to watch.

12. Revi: Even though this is a service advertisement, Revi is able to convey the promotion quite well for me.

13. Esya: It's a good advertisement because even though it's short, it's memorable, especially since the theme is unusual.

14. Adinda Fatimah: The ad is very relatable and simple, so it's easy to follow.

15. Syahla: I really like the video and how you advertise by showing the brand's footage well.

16. Kalil: Wkwkkwkwkw, the ad reminds me of my many tasks, but it can be entertaining. Also, milk ads are usually for children, but you can package it for an adult target audience.

17. Jihan: The ad is so natural that at first I wondered, what kind of ad is this?

18. Raisha: The story really relates to me because I also like to do my homework in the forest sometimes.

19. Michael: The ad is entertaining and the video is well shot.

20. Nadya: I like the funny and cheerful video editing.

21. Haira: I like the video because it's very modern, like a famous influencer's.

22. Hasna: The ad is simple and the concept is good, but it might be better if the audio was more cheerful.

23. Esyliva: I like the video because the editing is good and the ad is enjoyable to watch.

Annisa Sabilla: i love how you make your ads more like a typical “a day in my life.”

Arkan: simple and interesting ads i’d say

Safhira: funny but still such a deep concept for an ads

Retha: simple and straight to the point

Putra Dharma: interesting plot, but i didn’t expect it to be Advan ads

Naufalita: very nice storyline for such makeup ads

Annisa Sabila: Your video is good! I love the concept, the backsound

Arkan Rafi: your video is quiet but I dont know why I found it funny

Teh Shafira: Your video is REALLY GEWWWDD! I like the concept and the message you want to deliver, I also like the flashback part! good work, teh shafira!

Teh Retha: your video is simple, but the backsound somehow makes it slightly boring, maybe you can try to put another backsound beside that beat

Dharma: Your video is good, it promotes the gaming laptop well

Naufalita: your video is simple and I love your video concept and the backsound too!

1. Fauziah

   your video is a straight forward master! But not only that, it is also nice to watch!

2. Annisa Sabilla (disya)

   your video have simple concept but the thing is, it is simple and so close to our life! it is so great so the audience can relate easily to the message of the video!

3. Arkan

   what i really like the most is the narrative script and the jusic choice! it tells a lot about your story!

4. Teh shafira

   Your video is soo full of colors! fun, hilarious, and bittersweet! it is like watching a short movie!

5. Teh Retha

   your story is soo college life! but for development, it would be better if you use several different angle so the video got more 'rushing'

6. Dharma

   this concept is out of the box! it is so hilarious, fun and especially fit for genz humor. it is so fun to watch 'you' appear in different angle and devices!

7. Naufalita

   since the opening, your video is so melancholic; align with narrative, story, angle, shots and backsound it's all so beautiful and sweet

Fauziah:
The ad display is good, simple and straight to the point regarding the product that being advertised.

Disya:
The video looks great. The advertisement video is like a "day in my life's" vlog. The product displays are quite subtle and relate to the video's concept.

Arkan:
The video's concept is quite good and cinematic. The storyline is quite smooth until the end where the product is displayed. The concept is quite relatable for someone who enjoys drinking coffee every morning before work.

The Shafira:
The storyline is funny and exciting. It keeps me intrigued in every second video. The concept is incredibly fresh and really good.

Teh Retha:
The story is good and the video concept is very relatable into the college life today, especially as a girl when getting ready, especially if you have to put on makeup first.

Dharma:
The concept is quite humorous and might be relatable to gamers who need a high-spec laptop for gaming. The storyline is quite good.

Naufalita:
The storyline is cool, and the video's concept is profound and touching. It's quite melting when i watch the video.

I really like the fact that the advertisement explicitly highlights the problem and give solutions to it.

To Annisa Sabilla:

I enjoyed the advertisement. I really like how it shows the characters journey's through life with the product. I feel like the audience might relate to it a lot.

To Arkan:

I found the advertisement very entertaining. The mismatch in the vibes of the video and the music as well as the context of the video itself, I found, very humorous.

To Teh Shafira:

I like how the advertisement bring me through a whirlwind of emotions, it goes from funny to very sentimental.

To Teh Retha:

The advertisement shows how the product is being used, which I think is a charm in and of itself. It emphasised the fact that the product is reliable, too.

To Muhammad Dharma:

I like that the advertisement combines hard selling (showcase of the product) and soft selling (storyline).

To Naufalita:

I really like the concept and the writing. The fact the writing, too, that implies that the product is very long lasting.

• Fauziyah: Your ad is short, but the message is clearly delivered.

• Annisa Sabilla: I like that you used "a day in my life” format, it feels more relatable since Tumblr is used in daily life.

• Arkan: It feels like a movie. It engages the audience well and make us curious about the product, and the shots in each scene are also good.

• Teh Shafira: The concept is funny, but also heartwarming. It really engages the audience.

• Teh Retha: Simple and to the point.

• Dharma: Funny and engaging.

• Naufalita: Simple, the storyline is also good.

The video is simple and clean, not much going on but it is to the point, selling the product to the audience without any heavy conflict. Overall, really good.

Annisa Sabila

The video is simple and clean. I really like all the sub text that appears in the video, and the product placement is on point, but not too much. Overall, really good.

Arkan Video

The video is nice and simple, the cinematography is really good, especially when showing him making the coffee. The final slogan at the end of the video is a really good way to end it all, bringing the whole video together by using the original tagline of the product. Overall, really good and relatable.

Shafira Video

The video is really nice, especially the editing in the video, it's clean and not too overdone. The story that the video is telling is nice and comforting, which i think what she is trying to achieve. Overall, it's a good video. The message is nice as well.

Retha Video

Her video in my opinion lack engaging scene and content, since she just show the product usage and how it's quick to use. So, i think if she makes a little bit of editing to make it quick just like what the product is offering, i think it will be better. But, it's good overall.

Muhammad Putra

The dialogue is a bit awkward in my opinion, but the comedy in the video work and relatable. The way he shows the product quality is a bit underwhelming, only showing it by text and through gameplay footage, i think it will be better to have a comparison so that the audience know this laptop is better. But, overall is good.

Naufalita Video

Her video concept is nice and simple, the story telling is relatable especially the part where she tells us that we come home tired. The product placement is subtle and implicit, aligned with her soft selling strategy. Overall, really good.

I think you can add some subtitle so the audience can understand better, because as an audince I can’t hear the voice, so if you add the subtitle the audience can engage with the video.

Annisa Sabila:

Love your concept, the audio, and the narrator’s voice^^

Arkan:

Love the story where the man started his day with a cup of coffe

Shafira:

I love your video so much, the concept, the story, the angle of the camera, all of them make your video so interesting.

Retha:

Love your video, but I think it is better if you choose another song, because if just one song and it repeat all the time, it can makes the video boring.

M. Putra Dharma:

I love your concept video, but I think you can shorter your video, because for ads video it is too long if you make a 4 minutes video.

Naufalita:

I love your video so much, and you choose a good music that help the audience engage with your video^^

Fauziyah N

The video starts interesting, especially the back sound fits the video well. It's also effective, not too long but deliver the message explicitly.

Annisa Sabilla

I like the video because it looks like vlog, showing beautiful views. The backsound also make the video interesting. The voiceover also fits the video. I like how it looked simple but effective.

Arkan Rafi

The video match the vibe of the product. Adding subtitles would be better to make sure the audience get the message.

Shafira

The video was so funny yet emotional. The concept was interesting, especially with the appearance of a little kid. No need much sentence but the message was delivered effectively.

Retha

The video is relatable especially when college life hits that busy period.

Putra Dharma

Not gonna lie, I actually kinda persuaded to play games by watching the video. It was interesting, but it can be better to add lighting, except if the concept is to be dark themed like that.

Naufalita

I like how she made the video feels nostalgic, especially with fireworks at the beginning. Even though the video can be better if some lighting were fixed, because it somehow kind of difficult to analyze.

For Fauziyah Nur:

The video is about the hero's journey, showing that if you are in hot weather, you need to use the product. The ad explicitly advertises the product, conveying its benefits effectively. Good Job, Fau 🫰🏻

For Annisa Sabilla:

I think the video is very unique because the ad uses the vlog concept. It also shows how the product can be “friends” with the one who uses it. Also, the product is really cute. Good Job, Disya 🫰🏻

For Arkan Rafi:

I think you did great on doing the act in the ad. Because of the unique vibe and other elements in it, the ad really delivers how the product really makes the consumers feel comfortable. Good Job, Arkan 👍🏻

For Teh Shafira:

I really like the plot of the ad because it’s cute and has a plot twist in it. It makes the consumers enjoy watching the ad. The product also showed really well and personally makes me want Ice Cream, too. Good Job, Teh Shafira 🫶🏻

For Teh Retha Kasih:

The ad shows how the product is really useful so it delivered well. Also, the storyline is really relatable with students who sometimes have rush and late moments, the ad answers for girls who want to make up faster. Good Job, Teh Retha 🫶🏻

For Muhammad Dharma:

I like the storyline and the concept of the ad because it’s really unique. It really well-delivered how the product is really worth buying. The ad also explicitly gives the description of the product which is good. Good Job, Dharma 👍🏻

For Naufalita Aghna:

The ad has good storytelling. Even though, it’s soft-selling, it still shows how the product has the same concept as the story, how it stays. I really like the concept of the video. Good Job, Naufalita 🫶🏻

2. Arkan: The editing is excellent, but the sound is a bit creepy and the rock and roll theme may not be the best fit.

3. Teh Shafira: I really like this video because it's funny and touches my heart, as there's a part that reminds me of my father.

4. Teh Retha: This video shows how chaotic the actor is, and Tavi is introduced as a solution to help him get ready quickly.

5. Dharma: I really like this video because it's very funny and also very narrative.

6. Naufalita: I really like this video, but it doesn't highlight the brand advertising too much and is very subtle in its marketing.

Disya's feedback: The concept is so cute I feel like watching a vlog. Good job Disya!

Arkan's feedback: The video is good but the music didn't really match the video.

Shafira's feedback: The concept is very cute and fresh I love it.

Retha's feedback: The video didn't really show the product so at first I didn't know what kind of brand it is until I saw the caption.

Dharma's feedback: The video really shows the audience the specifications of the laptop but I think the video is too long.

Opal's feedback: The concept is cute because it's very relatable but didn't really shows the product.

1. for Fauziyah: Your video is great. The story is quite relatable to me.

2. for Annisa Sabila: I like how you capture the scenes and emphasize that your Tumblr always with you wherever you go.

3. for Arkan: I love the way you deliver the tagline in the end of your video, the voice sounds like the original one.

4. for Shafira: Your video is wonderful, I love how you show the ideas, it is very heartwarming.

5. for Retha: I think it would be better if you put the soundtrack that contains song or back sound that has more beat.

6. for Dharma: The sound of the recording on your video is a bit unclear, so just a little suggestion, you can adjust it to become clearer.

7. for Naufalita: Your storytelling is very poetic, I love the way you capture the scenes as well, it's giving cinematic ambience.

1. Zaki - Indomie

   Actually, I feel kinda sad because the conflict is so relatable… I love how you convey the message at the end and how the product gives a special touch amid the limitations of people’s lives. The editing also supports the story really well. Sooo good!

2. Gyandra - KYT

   The ad is so entertaining, but still delivers a good product's information. Well done!

3. Salwa - Canva

   I think the ad is very informative and shows Canva’s tools really well. It also gives new ideas to the audience. Very lovable, good job!

4. Artika - Mykonos

   I think if people don’t know the ad is an assignment and don’t pay attention to the account, they might think this is a post from the official account. Well made, high quality, and strong storytelling. Good job!

5. Zaina - Bonavie

   The product's shot at the end is so good. Love it!

6. Bernadetha - Gramedia

   I think the way you connect the place with the “memories” it holds will feel very heartfelt to the audience. At first, I was a little confused because I wasn’t sure whether it was a flashback or a present moment. My suggestion would be about the editing, maybe you could differentiate the flashbacks/memories from the present moment more clearly by using a filter. Overall, the message is really good. I like it!

7. Faras - Barber Daily

   I wasn’t expecting the skincare ad to be made like this. It’s so hilarious, and the ideas are brilliant. I think if people see this video, they might want to try the product. Good job!

8. Eka - Crusita

   Your ad feels like an official product ad that randomly appears on my FYP and suddenly makes me want to buy it. Simple, aesthetic, and very high quality!

9. Kania - Exsport

   I think this ad shows the benefits of the product really well. As a student, I would definitely want to have this bag as part of my daily life too. Love it!

10. Rahma - Lady Rose

    I think I just love everything about this video… T_T It’s very well made and feels like watching a short movie. Great job!

11. Siti Nurgina - Torch

    I really love the message, it seems simple, but it’s actually so deep. The way you shot it from the MC’s POV is also very cool!

12. Revi - SINUS

    I like the “show, don’t tell” storytelling technique you used here. It’s very simple, but I think it will reach the audience well. I like it!

13. Ulya - Bango

    Wow, the editing is so cool! The ad feels very Gen Z, and I think it’s refreshing to see this side of the product.

14. Esya - Skintegrity

    The concept is so brilliant and interesting, especially as someone who has watched Wednesday, it’s so fun to watch. Good job!

15. Adinda Fatimah - Spotify Premium

    I like the way you show how annoying the ads on a free account can be. As someone who thinks a lot before upgrading to premium, your ad actually persuaded me, hehe. Simple but right to the point.

16. Syahla - Lafiye

    Watching your ad feels warm and motivating. Maybe you can improve the audio quality in the future. Good job!

17. Annisa Khalila - Indomilk

    First things first, big appreciation for all the actors, they really represent most uni students’ daily lives so well. I love the concept and the tagline (stay sane is all we need, isn’t it?). Good job, Kalil!

18. Jihan - Richeese Factory

    It’s so refreshing because the concept you used comes from viral trends. I think it’s very clever in selling the product, it feels like soft selling, but also hard selling at the end. Good job!

19. Raisha - Fore

    I understand the message well, and the editing is cute. I also know it must have taken so much effort to shoot it. Good job!

20. Michael - Converse

    I like the authenticity of the characters through the use of Sundanese in the conversations. I think the message reaches the audience well. My suggestion would be that in the main character’s “rush” part, you could use faster cut-to-cut editing to enhance the sense of urgency. Overall, it’s good!

21. Nadya - Cimory Yogurt

    The synchronization of the monologue, editing, and story is well done. I like how the ad makes the product feel like water in the desert. Now I want to drink Cimory Yogurt too!

22. Hairawati - NPURE

    The concept of transitioning from an inconvenient afternoon to a very calm and fresh night routine is so refreshing. I love how you show the step-by-step skincare routine using all the products. As a girl, I would love to buy the product after watching your ad. Good job!

23. Siti Hasna - Joyko

    Honestly, I was a bit confused at first because I didn’t know what product you were promoting. My suggestion would be to add more background music and include more shots that show the product details. Good job!

24. Esyliva - Yakult

    The ad really makes me want to make a fresh drink using the product. It’s really good!

Monday, 22nd December 2025

1. Fauziyah - Scarlett

   You show really well how the product is there to help the character. My suggestion would be to shoot the little details in closer shots (e.g., the MC’s dry skin). Good job, Fauziyah!

2. Annisa Sabilla - Chako Lab

   The mood built in the video is really great. The concept and song choice are also so good. I felt happy watching it, and I think it will make people want to have the product as part of their daily life too. Good job!

3. Arkan - Kapal Api

   The vibe I got from the video is comfort, and I think you delivered the feeling after drinking the product really well. My suggestion would be about the background music, it feels a bit mysterious. Overall, it’s good!

4. Retha - Tavi

   I think the message you want to convey is good. My suggestion would be to add more shots from different angles and combine them with the editing so it feels more “in a hurry.”

5. Putra Dharma - Advan

   I think you could make it shorter while still delivering the product information clearly to the audience. It’s nice!

6. Naufalita - Hanasui

   I really like the night time vibe. The quiet atmosphere and the darkness make the product stand out more. It also gives a familiar feeling to me, and I think it will persuade people who aim for longevity to buy the product. Good job!