https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t Sharing appositives/appositive phrases with other tribes. en-us 2016-11-10 13:51:14 UTC 2016-11-10 21:20:33 UTC hello@padlet.com nicholas_bell2 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136716226 1. The zombie, a walking carcass that was once a man, creeped slowly across the street.
2. A walking carcass that was once a man, the zombie creeped slowly across the street.
3. The peacefulness of the street was interrupted by a zombie, a walking carcass that was once a man.]]> 2016-11-10 13:52:57 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136716226 nicholas_bell2 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136780690 I like Mr. Bell's third sentences most because at first everything was fine, but then, the peaceful scene is subverted with gruesome imagery.]]> 2016-11-10 16:08:23 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136780690 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136872713 1. The name's Bond, James Bond.

2.  The 1985 Pittsburg Steelers, the best football team in NFL history,  was my favorite team.

3. There was a massive hole in the ground from Mjolnir, Thor's hammer.

]]> 2016-11-10 19:46:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136872713 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136872921
1) The girl, a fourteen year old with a purple backpack, was walking to school.

2) A fourteen year old with a purple backpack, the girl was walking to school.

3) Walking to school was a girl, a fourteen year old with a purple backpack.]]> 2016-11-10 19:47:32 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136872921 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136873144 1. The room, a dirty mess that was once clean, needed major work.
2. A dirty room that was once clean, needed a lot of  work.
3. A room that needs a lot of work, is a dirty mess that was once clean.]]> 2016-11-10 19:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136873144 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136873172 1. The baseball bat, a  $100 wooden slugger, broke in half.
2. The $100 wooden slugger, a baseball bat broke in half.
3. The baseball bat that broke in half, was an $100 wooden slugger.]]> 2016-11-10 19:48:06 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136873172 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136873219 1. The dog, a running ball of fur, chased the cat down the street. 
2. A running ball of fur, the dog chased the cat down the street.
3. the cat was chased down the street by the dog, a running ball of fur.

]]> 2016-11-10 19:48:15 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136873219 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136873682 1.The cat, a furry hairball, scratched its owner's face.
2.A furry hairball,the cat scratched the owner's face.
3.The cat scratched its owner's face, a furry hairball.]]> 2016-11-10 19:49:38 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136873682 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136877851 Your first sentence is the most effective because it makes the most sense, saying that it needed work and it was once clean.]]> 2016-11-10 20:00:20 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136877851 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136878443 We like sentence 3 the most because of the position of they appositive phrase]]> 2016-11-10 20:02:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136878443 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136879295 Your third sentence was the strongest; because, it best explains what happened.]]> 2016-11-10 20:04:56 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136879295 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136879553 your sentences are all good ]]> 2016-11-10 20:05:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136879553 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136879911 The first sentence makes the most sense ]]> 2016-11-10 20:07:11 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136879911 https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136880223 Your most effective sentence was the first one, because it explains better what the dog did.]]> 2016-11-10 20:08:17 UTC https://padlet.com/nicholas_bell2/7a6kzpweek1t/wish/136880223