https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0 en-us 2019-04-22 09:48:14 UTC 2019-04-23 01:01:51 UTC hello@padlet.com natasharafiq1 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353011915 Response]]> 2019-04-22 09:49:17 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353011915 natasharafiq1 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353011938 Response]]> 2019-04-22 09:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353011938 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353208801 All 3 samples starts about how technology improved people's lives. But towards the end the samples talk about technology worsening certain aspects of life. ]]> 2019-04-23 00:31:48 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353208801 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353208946 Each passage constitutes a difference which is like differentiating similar smells with different solution on it when you are blindfolded. Passage A shows a summary about how technology has made great strides and disadvantages in mankind. Passage b is about how technology has improve people lives in the healthcare. Finally, passage c is about how technology has impacted the skills of mankind in the workforce.]]> 2019-04-23 00:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353208946 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209077 The 3 samples talks about how technology benefits the people in various areas. Sample A specifically talks about how technology brought convenience to our lives, sample B talks about how technology has affected us in the health care aspect while sample c highlights about how it has impacted our skills.]]> 2019-04-23 00:34:21 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209077 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209451 -Impacts of technology
-Broad/General explaination on Technology & uses
-Dual Perspective
-A Stand]]> 2019-04-23 00:37:05 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209451 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209454 Sample A only gives a vague balanced treatment, with little specifications on his claim on how it is simplistic to solely assume improvement due to technology , whereas for Samples B & C, they justified their balanced treatment with their points.

While both samples A and B started by answering the question and supporting it, sample C started from the reverse POV, by stating the positives before ending off with the negatives (which the qn asks about)]]> 2019-04-23 00:37:07 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209454 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209506 - benefits of technology
- impacts of technology 
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]]> 2019-04-23 00:37:33 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209506 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209630 All 3 samples agreed that technology helps to improve our lives in many different ways. All also mentioned the disadvantages of technology.]]> 2019-04-23 00:38:22 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209630 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209650 All 3 talks abt the current situation of how technology helps people.
Overall structure of the 3 remains relatively the same
-Starting with quote first +issue / just issue
-Then thesis statement 

]]> 2019-04-23 00:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209650 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209675 There is always a drawback for every benefit technology has brought in all samples]]> 2019-04-23 00:38:44 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209675 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209683 - All 3 topics are on technology 
-All 3 samples provided a balanced view

]]> 2019-04-23 00:38:46 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209683 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209710 Azhar

All three samples mentioned about how technology has impacted today’s society.]]> 2019-04-23 00:38:56 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209710 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209747 All of them have stated the function of technology, explained why this function is important and included examples to illustrate their points. A good vairety of vocabulary is also used.]]> 2019-04-23 00:39:10 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209747 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209767 All three samples mentions that technology are usually beneficial, but there are instances where technology has failed to do so and in cases technology may even be harmful to men.]]> 2019-04-23 00:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209767 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209802 -Use of Quotations (Different use of Grabbers)
-Dual perspective but conditions were also stated for Sample B
-Differents impacts of Technology based on different uses

]]> 2019-04-23 00:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209802 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209818 The 3 samples talk about how differently technology has improved our lives. Sample A- media, communication and information. Sample B- healthcare.  Sample C- labour workload.]]> 2019-04-23 00:39:38 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209818 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209874 ryan

technology improve standsrd of life of ppl.
in all positive impacts there would be consequences as well. such that it will worsen the impacts]]> 2019-04-23 00:40:00 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209874 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209879 Summer
All 3 samples state how technology affect people’s lives greatly be it through machines to ease workload or improving health. However every benefit comes at a price, which instead may bring unwanted consequences ]]> 2019-04-23 00:40:01 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209879 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209890 • all three sources have explained the benefit thet technology has brought to better human lives on all sorts of ways 

•all three sources understands that there is a flipside to the advantages of technology - good things dont come cheap]]> 2019-04-23 00:40:05 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209890 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209940 Hilmi
- describes the positive and negative impacts of technology today
- a balanced perspective
- overall stand
- provides a brief context at the start of the intro]]> 2019-04-23 00:40:26 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209940 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209974 Sample A and B both listed the positive impacts of technology to the respective aspects of our life which then the thesis statement however, concluded in the opposite argument. However, Sample C brought out the  different perspectives in the introduction already. ]]> 2019-04-23 00:40:37 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209974 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209993 Advancement in technology has resulted in an overall improvement in peoples' lives but it comes with a trade-off. ]]> 2019-04-23 00:40:46 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353209993 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210051 -How technology impacted mankind in a positive way which has addressed the urgent issues in the society.]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210051 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210063 The differences is that sample A talks about mainly modern technology while sample B and C talks about technology of the past and present.]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:10 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210063 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210076 The structure of the introductions remains the same throughout the three samples. They start of with some general facts and information about the theme and questions,  provide concession and afterwhich put their overall stand out there.]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210076 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210125 All 3 samples tell both sides of how technology would impact people's lives, given the requirements of their respective questions.]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:32 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210125 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210147 - benefits of technology
- impacts of technology 
- 2 sided

]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210147 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210148 The 3 samples have a similarity in addressing both the positive and negative impacts that technology brings about ]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210148 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210150 Impacts of technology on people in general

]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:45 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210150 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210168 The three samples mentioned different types of technological advancements. Sample A talks about how improvements in communication technology improved the living standards of people, Sample B talks about improvements in medical technology, but only benefitting certain people, while Sample C talks about improvements in automation technology which can be a double-edged sword.]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:51 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210168 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210177 Sample A does not have a set boundary when talking about the opposing view except the boundary set by the question
Sample B presents a condition for the opposing view
Sample C shows an irony as an opposing view]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:56 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210177 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210178
In all 3 samples, one similarity would be the benefit of technology and how it has improved our lives in general. With the advancement in technology it has helped meet our fast paced life and allow a more efficient healthcare for the people. 

However in all 3 samples, it also shows us the down side to the advancement of technology ]]> 2019-04-23 00:41:56 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210178 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210197 The 3 responses agree that although technology has help people, it comes at a cost]]> 2019-04-23 00:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210197 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210666 B starts with a quote while A and C does not
-A answer the qns by identifying that the view is myopic
-B answer the qns with a condition
-C answer the qns with own views and opponents]]> 2019-04-23 00:42:36 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210666 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210910 All 3 samples talk about different aspects of people.
A talks about overall lives, B is about the health of people, while C is the decline of old skills.]]> 2019-04-23 00:42:52 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210910 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210912 All three samples talk about how our lives were impacted by technology both good and bad]]> 2019-04-23 00:42:52 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210912 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210949 1)Sample B starts off with a quo]]> 2019-04-23 00:43:06 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210949 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210952 Summer
Sample A has a more general area of discussion on people’s lives while sample B and C focuses on specific area such as health and skills]]> 2019-04-23 00:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210952 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210956 All have attempts for balanced treatment]]> 2019-04-23 00:43:10 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210956 https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210974 Azhar
Each sample mentioned about different aspects of impact technology has on today’s society.Sample A talks about how technology improved the social welfare of people.Sample B talks about how technology greatly improved healthcare,benefiting manh people.And sample C talks about how technology undermined human skills although it helped to ease people’s lives.]]> 2019-04-23 00:43:20 UTC https://padlet.com/natasharafiq1/79mn08345cm0/wish/353210974