What feedback can you give Andy? by https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau en-us 2019-02-05 09:51:40 UTC 2026-03-02 05:39:23 UTC hello@padlet.com Pls never use comic sans https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807501637 2021-10-11 12:45:41 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807501637 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807503543 Sounds unprepared - broken speech suggests lack of engagement with research and group]]> 2021-10-11 12:46:19 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807503543 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807503908 he is not very clear about any of it]]> 2021-10-11 12:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807503908 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807504442 seems very unsure on the science he's talking about, lots of pauses and visible confusion ]]> 2021-10-11 12:46:34 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807504442 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807504933 Don’t bring up that you can’t remember something - shows lack of knowledge or understanding about your topic]]> 2021-10-11 12:46:46 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807504933 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505062 less urm and ah and learn how to pronounce the compounds he is talking about]]> 2021-10-11 12:46:49 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505062 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505078 should've prepared better, and gone through the presentation to be familiar with it]]> 2021-10-11 12:46:50 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505078 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505131 “Errrmmmm” a bit unsure, not very well presented, “and yeah”]]> 2021-10-11 12:46:51 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505131 presentation was messy https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505315 2021-10-11 12:46:55 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505315 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505706 Slides congested with words, unclear to read and understand]]> 2021-10-11 12:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807505706 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807506681 he was not well prepared and didnt know the material ]]> 2021-10-11 12:47:25 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807506681 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807506764 Andy sometimes sounded unsure about the information being presented. Next time it might help to practice the presentation to a friend to make sure the information is secure ]]> 2021-10-11 12:47:27 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807506764 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807507036 try and get a more clear spectrum- was very hard to read and don't know what kind of spectrum]]> 2021-10-11 12:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807507036 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807508056 not a lot of detail about the aims of the project, or the findings]]> 2021-10-11 12:47:55 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807508056 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807508632 Formatting of the slides could do some checking over :)]]> 2021-10-11 12:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807508632 Lack of understanding of the chemistry https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807508897 2021-10-11 12:48:15 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807508897 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807509610 Excellent presentation, very clear slides and was very specific when talking about the reaction schemes.]]> 2021-10-11 12:48:30 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807509610 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807509920 Lots of information presented but maybe layout a bit neater in the second (?) slide so you can read/understand better and to keep it consistent.]]> 2021-10-11 12:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807509920 Incredible, I wish I could do the same. I'll work hard to make it to Andy's level! https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807509976 2021-10-11 12:48:39 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807509976 Informal https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510095 Says "This I goes here" when you could have said "The iodine wss inserted at this position".]]> 2021-10-11 12:48:42 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510095 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510295 try and use more scientific language, know what you are talking about ]]> 2021-10-11 12:48:46 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510295 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510364 slides overloaded with information, non-specific language used when describing reactions (eg. this thing becomes that thing)]]> 2021-10-11 12:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510364 Language used https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510432 Lots of non-specific language was used like "this thing" and "that bit there". This made it hard to follow the process you were describing.]]> 2021-10-11 12:48:50 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510432 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510492 get familiar with the actual science, naming of structures etc!
Stop saying erm!
Don't cram so much info and schemes onto one page, pick the important ones/ones you're actually speaking about.
Keep font/formatting the same.
Practise more - this was very unorganised and sounded unplanned]]> 2021-10-11 12:48:51 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807510492 Spectrum https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807511808 The units are illegible and the quality is overall very low.]]> 2021-10-11 12:49:22 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807511808 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807511810 Reviewing the slides and checking their formatting before giving the presentation would help to make the information clearer]]> 2021-10-11 12:49:22 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807511810 needs fluent speak, specific names of reagents products - amounts https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807512091 2021-10-11 12:49:29 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807512091 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807512539 Too much hesitation.]]> 2021-10-11 12:49:39 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807512539 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807512652 make sure the slides are legible ]]> 2021-10-11 12:49:41 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807512652 Slides were muddled and unclear. Delivery lacked conviction and knowledge of the topic https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807513202 2021-10-11 12:49:54 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807513202 More talking about the reaction https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807513263 2021-10-11 12:49:56 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807513263 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807513565 There was a lot of time-filling words (ah/um/yeah) and not being absolutely sure on the name of the molecules means that more practice might be needed
There wasn't any context or explanation for the experiment or what was done
The text was inconsistently formatted
I think the presentation should talk about we as in the team rather than saying I did/didn't do this]]> 2021-10-11 12:50:02 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807513565 Presentation https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807513905 Slides were quite crowded and in one slide it was overlapping so the information couldn't be read. Presenter wasn't confident on his content, for example he couldn't pronounce the starting reagent. He also wasn't confident on the methods used and what that meant in the grand scheme of things as he couldn't convey what chemistry was actually taking place.]]> 2021-10-11 12:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807513905 Smoother delivery of presentations i.e. lessen the use of "ermm" https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807514232 2021-10-11 12:50:17 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807514232 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807514542 Ask for questions at the end, thank people for attending and listening]]> 2021-10-11 12:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807514542 Text was overlapping on the slide with yields https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515198 2021-10-11 12:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515198 sorry Andy you were stressing me out https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515335 2021-10-11 12:50:42 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515335 lots of umming and erring https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515345 2021-10-11 12:50:42 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515345 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515378 He needed to know his technical terms better ]]> 2021-10-11 12:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515378 pcylb13 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515412 A lot of “umm-ing”]]> 2021-10-11 12:50:43 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515412 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515512 Not mention the specific name of the molecule]]> 2021-10-11 12:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515512 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515547 Use a lot of this/here but still hard to fallow with ]]> 2021-10-11 12:50:46 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515547 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515607 Andy spoke too quickly in general and would say umm when he wasn't sure what to say next.

]]> 2021-10-11 12:50:47 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515607 In his explanation of the reactions it could have been clearer if he spoke more slowly, explained the process in order and was more specific in his terminology. https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515652 2021-10-11 12:50:48 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807515652 Feedback pcysb14 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516192 Not structured]]> 2021-10-11 12:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516192 When he encountered things he wasn't confident on he stuttered and dwelled upon them. Either learn the presentation more or present what you know clearly https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516481 2021-10-11 12:51:06 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516481 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516504 didn't seem to understand the science nor have practiced to find the flow to the presentation to avoid using lots of filler words

]]> 2021-10-11 12:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516504 Very nervous. Take a breather and think about what you're talking about, go over your notes beforehand and be clear and precise about what you are talking about, e.g. not just 'this and that'. https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516511 2021-10-11 12:51:07 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516511 really interesting https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516540 2021-10-11 12:51:08 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516540 Lacked enthusiasm, information was badly presented, he didn't seem knowledgable on the topic. https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516580 2021-10-11 12:51:08 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516580 Not confident in what he’s talking about https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516772 2021-10-11 12:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807516772 he didnt show a lot of understanding about the topic https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517048 2021-10-11 12:51:20 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517048 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517359 Need to have a clearer understanding of the topic being presented.
Slides used should have the same formatting.
Maybe should have conferred with the group more about who did what for the project.
More practice presenting needed to reduce the number of filler words used in the presentation. ]]> 2021-10-11 12:51:27 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517359 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517507 Drawings of structures weren't consistent and many weren't "cleaned up" in order to represent the correct bond angles.]]> 2021-10-11 12:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517507 Too many 'urmms' made you sound like you didnt know what was happening https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517520 2021-10-11 12:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517520 wasnt clear on what he was trying to present https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517540 2021-10-11 12:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517540 https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517562 There was a lot of hesitation/pauses. The slides were not organised. ]]> 2021-10-11 12:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807517562 Slides were overloaded with unnecessary info https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807519222 2021-10-11 12:52:07 UTC https://padlet.com/anna_bertram3/78v7i37smbau/wish/1807519222