https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment Identify 2 positive aspects of your academic writing capabilities and 2 areas for development based upon feedback. en-us 2019-01-09 11:21:03 UTC 2021-01-15 09:50:06 UTC hello@padlet.com adamlv9 https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090490959 +
I have included a lot of paraphrases

My reference list is correct and in alphabetical order
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I need to include more reliable academic sources

I need to include more information in my introduction and conclusion ]]> 2021-01-15 09:39:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090490959 https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090491309
Pros 
good use of language and literature 
cover the correct info and MLO's

cons 
references
use of credible sources  ]]> 2021-01-15 09:39:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090491309 https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090491356 Pros
-  Finding credible sources of information from google scholar documents
- Creating introductions and conclusions that link to my piece of work
Cons
- Using too many website sources
- Not referencing pictures/ missing out citations on paragraphs.]]> 2021-01-15 09:39:09 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090491356 https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090491984 Positives:
- Strong paraphrasing

Improvements:
- Be more concise with writing ("too wordy").
- Referencing and sources need work (in order etc.)
- Timing in presentations needs improvement.

]]> 2021-01-15 09:39:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090491984 1904318 https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090492133 + Good use of literature
Intricate writing technique
- Lack of different Sources
Stop waffling]]> 2021-01-15 09:39:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090492133 https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090492722 + Ability to make good discussion points.
+ don't waffle

-not enough use of journals 
-ability to find information from academic sources.]]> 2021-01-15 09:39:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090492722 https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090492798 + correct in text citations 
+correct referencing
- more interesting start and finish 
- more academic sources ]]> 2021-01-15 09:39:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090492798 williamohalloran https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090493184 cons - improve introduction and use more journals and not just websites  
pros - making sure its done well in advanced ]]> 2021-01-15 09:39:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090493184 1904318 https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090496281 Pros - Good intro
Good reference list
Cons - Wider variety of sources
More engaging conclusion]]> 2021-01-15 09:41:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090496281 lukedonno https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090496306 cons- need more paraphrasing
pros- good use of citations]]> 2021-01-15 09:41:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090496306 samuellinskey455 https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090500981 Pros- Well presented essays 
Use of literature, images and examples

Cons- Make sure to cover all content listed
Use more academically recognised sources]]> 2021-01-15 09:42:55 UTC https://padlet.com/mark_fergusonsm/assignmentdevelopment/wish/1090500981