Jaden's Personal Narrative by Kevin Van Dyke https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2 What was your favorite part of the story? en-us 2014-04-16 01:47:01 UTC 2014-04-16 01:48:50 UTC hello@padlet.com http://d262le4z25sx36.cloudfront.net/portraits/earth.jpg  Hadley Tice https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26117766 Wow Jaden that was an amazing story! My favorite part of the story was when you took of your blindfold and saw what you really wanted.

]]> 2014-04-16 13:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26117766 Brooke Baarda https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26118416 I loved your story it was wrote so well! My favorite parts of the story were the parts when your mom was so suspicious and your sister grabbing you and putting her headband around your eyes. I really coldnt pick just one part! great story!

]]> 2014-04-16 13:56:44 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26118416 Maddie Crocker https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26119138 My favorite part of the story was when u saw your uncle Dave and said u did not want any of your pesents because what u wanted most was to see your uncle Dave!

]]> 2014-04-16 14:02:09 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26119138 Rebecca https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26396156

Jaden,

I loved your story and I think one of my favorite parts of your story is when when you took off the blindfold off and saw your Uncle Dave because that was one of your birthday presents you wanted.It was really fun reading your story, and someday I would like to see my grandpa because he didn't make the best choices either, and I haven't seen him since I was 3 I think your story was one of my favorite stories I have read. So good job and I hope you are proud of your story that you put together cause I am .

]]> 2014-04-22 14:17:52 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26396156 Elizabeth Squires https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26578297 Wow Jaden! I liked that story a lot it was really touching for some reason. My favorite part was when you said that you didn't need any more presents for your birthday. Your story had a lot of inner thoughts and I really liked that, I liked the part when you took off the blindfold and you saw our uncle dave. I can relate to the part that you hadn't seen your uncle dave for a while. My uncle Nathan also made a mistake to and my family and I hadn't seen him for a long time, so I can relate to that. I will look forward to more of your writing good job!

]]> 2014-04-24 13:47:41 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26578297 Denali Conover https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26670442

I loved your story! It is really touching like Elizabeth said. I liked the words you where using in your story. I thought your story was very touching, great job!

]]> 2014-04-25 13:58:15 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26670442 Carter https://padlet.com/vandyke/Jadenb2/wish/26671299

You did a very nice job on your story ,but one of my favorite parts was when you said thank you and that you did not need anymore presents. good job

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