5 Grace_A Kind Deed_Writing Good Conclusions by Fei Ming

Rachel Liu (25)

2018-08-02 03:10:41 UTC

Strategy: Ending with a proverb or wise saying

As the dog barked at me as if it was saying goodbye, I could definitely feel the warm filling my entire being. As a saying goes," A little kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted."

#13 Joey Ong

2018-08-02 03:10:45 UTC

Strategy: Ending with a proverb

As I waved to my grandma till I could not see her from the car, as I looked backed on how happy she was by my company, I knew that the time l spent with her was worth it. AS the saying goes, a little kindness really goes a long way

Shannon (28)

2018-08-02 03:10:49 UTC

Strategy: Lesson Learnt
From that day on,Tim vowed to do his part to stop animal abuse. An animal is still a life,we should care for them instead of hurting them.

Hello

2018-08-02 03:10:55 UTC

Strategy#3:Ending with a proverb or wise saying.
As the dog barked at me,I could feel the warm feeling of happiness growing in me. The answer was clear.Saving the dog and keeping it in the end was meaningful.Kindness is truly priceless.

3# Elisha;D

2018-08-02 03:10:55 UTC

strategy: ending with a question

Was it worth it? Should i have spent all my savings for the medical attention of this dog? As i looked at the dog, I saw its twinkling eyes saying thank you. I looked it and thought yes, it is worth it ,the gift of kindness was priceless. "I am going to adopt it." Ally said.

hihi

2018-08-02 03:10:57 UTC

#24 Gillian Poon

2018-08-02 03:10:58 UTC

Strategy #3: End with a proverb.
Watching Jamie's retreating back, I smiled. The amount of money he had given me would buy me a complete meal for a day. However small that act of kindness was, it was the thought that really counted. A small act of kindness truly does go a long way.

#23 jaelynn

2018-08-02 03:10:58 UTC

strategy number 1: a question

Should i have spent my all my savings on the dog? i stared into the dog's grateful brown eyes and the answer was clear. a small act of kindness goes a long way.

Rachel Teo

2018-08-02 03:11:04 UTC

Strategy

nutella:)

2018-08-02 03:11:05 UTC

Hui Jun

2018-08-02 03:11:05 UTC

Isabella:

2018-08-02 03:11:06 UTC

Strategy:Lesson Learnt
"I wonder if I made the right choice to adopt this puppy and use all my year's saving to buy things for the puppy."I wondered as I looked into the little puppy's grateful brown eyes.I supposed the answer was clear.The gift of kindness was priceless.

Ashley Tey (34)

2018-08-02 03:11:09 UTC

Strategy: proverb or wise saying
As I left Leah's house that day, I felt a warm feeling in my heart. I was glad that I could make Leah's birthday a special one. A little kindness really does go a long way.

jing en

2018-08-02 03:11:10 UTC

#17 lim jing en
strategy:ending with a proverb
I felt great!i had helped mdm tan .she thanked me profusely after we crossed the road and walked to the door of her house,she also told me that she would definately pass on this act of kindness whenever she could .
as the saying goes,an act of kindness goes a long way.i silently vowed to keep up the good work.

#33 Yuu Shane

2018-08-02 03:11:12 UTC

Stategy

jin yee[18]

2018-08-02 03:11:16 UTC

statergie : lesson learnt Whenever Mary remember the good deed she had done, she would smile . She had learnt the importance of lending a helping hand to those in need. This incident will always be etched in her head for the rest of her life.

chanell

2018-08-02 03:11:20 UTC

strategy: proverb or wise saying
Looking into the grateful brown eyes of the little puppy,

Timea goh (7)

2018-08-02 03:11:21 UTC

Strategy:

Hui Jun

2018-08-02 03:11:21 UTC

ricaa ;) [ 8 ]

2018-08-02 03:11:26 UTC

heyooo <3
strategy ; proverb or wise saying

As i looked into the grateful brown eyes of the little puppy, my heart warmed instantly and i knew i had done the right thing. An act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.

Kate Ng (14)

2018-08-02 03:11:31 UTC

Strategy 3:Ending with a proverb or wise saying.As I watched my classmate's retreating back,I felt the warm feeling of happiness in my heart.The gift of kindness certainly is priceless.

natanya(38)

2018-08-02 03:11:34 UTC

stratergy: question
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"will i live a happy life with this little guy?" i questioned myself as i waked home with the little puppy ,who i named brownie,in my hands. the answer was yes. it has been one week and brownie has recovered very well. from thin and skinny limbs, to strong and big limbs. he has been very playful and loves me very much. i do too. i am delighted that i made th choice to adopt brownie.

#27 Christina(Reggie)

2018-08-02 03:11:38 UTC

Strategy: Lesson learnt
Looking back, I learnt that we should put in effort to be kind, even if it is troublesome. After all, its the thought that counts. (Even little things like giving banana leaves to old ladies so that they can grow banana trees and eat bananas from their backyard without having to go to the NTUC)

#19 kate lim

2018-08-02 03:11:38 UTC

strategy: ending with a Lesson Learnt
-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-
Dogs are living things too. We should treat them with respect like how we do to humans. No matter what animal, stray or pet, we should be kind to them and not abuse them. I did a kind deed and will never forget that day.

#11 Adelle

2018-08-02 03:11:38 UTC

Strategy : End with proverb or wise saying.
Recalling the radiant smile on the old lady's face. It always gives a warm feeling in Mary's heart every time she thinks of it. This kind deed did not only made Mary feel proud of herself, but also thought Mary a lesson. That it is the thought that counts, not how big the gift is.

carrie:) ( 29 )

2018-08-02 03:11:39 UTC

hi i love why dont we
strategy :: lesson learnt
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Seeing the cute and happy dog chasing the ball that i threw across my backyard , i knew i made the right decision . My heart felt warmth as i picked up the puppy , looking into its hazel brown eyes . No matter what , i learnt that we should all be kind to one another , as a kind act is never forgotten .

#35 tiffany loy

2018-08-02 03:11:48 UTC

strategy:question

"how would mum and dad react to you? would they like you?"I questioned the puppy and myself as i walked home.
when i reached home mum was surprised that i had a puppy in my.she surprisingly did not scol me but questioned me. upon telling her the story,she praised me for the kind act i did and allowed me to keep it.i was proud of myself and promised to take good care of it.

#16 Hui Jun

2018-08-02 03:12:09 UTC

Strategy: Ending with a lesson learnt
After this incident, John learnt that whenever he sees anyone having difficulties, he must take initiative to help that person that is in need. then, when he need help, people will help him too.

Jimin's Baeeee (Natalie) #20

2018-08-02 03:12:22 UTC

Strategy: A question
As Tata's large brown eyes stared up innocently at me, a huge wave of relief washed over me. Am I a responsible enough pet owner? I asked myself. A million thoughts raced through my mind. I had only gotten Tata three days ago for my birthday, and this was the second time I lost him.

Rachel Teo

2018-08-02 03:12:39 UTC

Strategy: End with a proverb or wise saying
As Lisa watched her grandmother happily playing with Cloud, she smiled. It always gives a warm feeling in her heart that she did a kind act. Lisa
was extremely happy that her grandmother was finally smiling. This act has also taught Lisa a very good lesson: The best and most precious things in the world has to be felt with the heart.

Emma Tan (4)

2018-08-02 03:13:08 UTC

Strategy: proverb
As I watched my friend jump in joy , I felt like the happiest person on earth. I smiled, happy that I helped her achieve success. I was glad I lent her a helping hand and not stood by and watch her suffer. A little kindness certainly goes a long way.

Heidi(10)

2018-08-02 03:13:17 UTC

Strategy: Lesson Learnt
Trotting home with my owner, I was in high spirits. I had saved a dog's life. Saving a life is a kind deed. I won't hesitate to save another.

#6 gen

2018-08-02 03:13:20 UTC

Strategy:lesson learnt
Stroking my new dog's fur,I looked into her cute round eyes.'Luckily I saved you,"I giggled while patting her head.Through this lesson, I learnt that no matter what, an animal deserves as much love and attention a human does.

#22 Nericcia Tung

2018-08-02 03:13:26 UTC

Strategy: Question
" Was it worthwhile to give up the puppy that i adored to the old lady?" I wondered as i watched the old lady's retreating back. I recalled her damp eyes when she opened the box to reveal a bouncy golden retriever puppy. The grateful brown eyes of the puppy looking at me was etched in my mind. I supposed the answer was clear. The gift of kindness is priceless and certainly goes a long way. The old lady was not lonely anymore and the puppy got a new comfortable home

#33 Yuu Shane

2018-08-02 03:13:29 UTC

Strategy: End with a proverb or saying

As I recalled the old lady's grateful smile, I could feel the warm feeling of happiness growing in me and filling my entire being. I was glad I had stepped in and lent a helping hand. Thankfully, after 10 years, there was no more misunderstanding between her and her son. The gift of kindness was priceless and a little kindness had certainly gone a long way.

xuan yu (32)

2018-08-02 03:13:51 UTC

strategy : a proverb or a wise saying
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border idea fr Kate lim

i twirled the pen around my fingers with a wide smile plastered on my face . How did i know this pen could make such a big impact on my life . I will always treasure the pen and remember fondly of the kind deed my friend did for me. Kindness does go a long way . ;)

Earlina tan, [31]

2018-08-02 03:13:52 UTC

Strategy: [lesson learnt}
looking at Coco [my pet dog ], i smiled . i was glad that my mom had adopted Coco.treat other like you want others to treat you . today, i did a kind deed. i hope that no matter what , people will treat animals like human. we should not bully them and hurt them , they are a living thing too .

Ein Yeu(36)

2018-08-02 03:14:21 UTC

Strategy:
Everytime that I see old pel

Katelyn (15)

2018-08-02 03:14:48 UTC

Strategy:
Receiving the voucher that the old lady gave me in, I smiled happily. Watching the old lady slowly disappear, I thought," wow. Helping someone is actually really worth it." I felt a warm tingly sensation of pride and joy inside me. As the saying goes," no act of kindness is ever wasted." Today, I learnt the true meaning of it

#30 Tan Li Lin

2018-08-02 03:15:12 UTC

Strategy:Lesson learnt

Looking back, I realised that because of my kindness, I was
able to bring others happiness. I resolved to help others forever, regardless of human or animal.

#09 HannaHeng

2018-08-02 03:17:51 UTC

Strategy: Ending with a proverb or wise saying ;)

Was it worth it when l organised that fund-rising to buy a pencil case and a couple of pens and pencils for Janet? l asked myself. The answer seemed clear. The picture of Janet's smile and thankful face and the card she made for us was painted in my mind. The gift kindness was priceless.

#16 Hui Jun

2018-08-02 03:18:17 UTC

Strategy: Ending with lesson learnt
After this incident, whenever he sees someone who is in need, he would take the initiative to help. Then, whenever he need help, someone would help him.

#18 Lim Rui Bin

2018-08-02 03:22:20 UTC

Strategy: A question
Looking into the grateful brown eyes of the golden retriever, I scratched him behind his ears as I wondered," What would have happened to you if I didn't find you?" I resolved to continue to do my part to stop animal abuse. like the old saying," Others like how you want others to treat you." A little kindess certainly goes a long way

2018-08-02 03:22:24 UTC

An act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted.

2018-08-02 03:23:41 UTC

a little kindness really goes a long way

#2 Clare

2018-08-02 03:24:58 UTC

As I looked at the twinking eyes of the old lady, I smiled, not regreting my decion. That moment, a warm feeling of kindness filled my entire being.

#5 Eyota

2018-08-02 03:25:31 UTC

"Was it worth all the trouble adopting the puppy?

Ein Yeu(36)

2018-08-02 03:25:39 UTC

Strategy:
Every time I see my grandma smiling away, I would remember that I had helped my grandma to grand her the wish she had been wishing

Nata #20

2018-08-02 11:24:23 UTC

Tata's large brown eyes stared up at me innocently, a huge wave of relief washed over me. Was I a responsible enough pet owner? A million thoughts raced through my mind. I had only gotten Tata three days ago, and this was the second time I lost him. "I'm so sorry,", I whispered into Tata's ears and gave him a little kiss on his forehead. Who knew playing a small game of hide and seek could cause a huge problem?

#09 HannaHeng

2018-08-02 11:58:02 UTC

Strategy: Question // Ending with a proverb or wise saying ;)

Was it worthwhile when l organised that inter-class fund-rising to raise money and buy a pencil case and some stationary for Janet? l asked myself. The answer seemed clear. The picture of Janet's grateful smile and the thankful card she made just for us with her new stationary was painted in my mind once again. l was glad that l had helped Janet. The gift of kindness was truly priceless!

#5 Eyota sentosa

etania_felita_sentosa — 2018-08-02 12:31:20 UTC

Strategy:Question/ wise saying

2018-08-02 13:31:31 UTC

2018-08-03 09:09:12 UTC

ta ta favorite_border 0 Your avatar #5 Eyota sentosa #5 Eyota sentosa Strategy:Question/ wise saying "Was it worth all the trouble adopting the puppy?"I asked myself,stroking my new puppy,Thunder.We were on the way home from the vet. As i saw the grateful brown eyes of Thunder, I knew the answer, it was clear.All animals deserved the same amount of love humans do, we should all do our part the stop animal abuse.After all dogs are men beast friends! favorite 2 1 comment Anonymous 19h Dear Eyota, did you mean 'best friend'? I cannot imagine you what you mean by 'beast friends'... :o (Mdm Chong) Your avatar #09 HannaHeng #09 HannaHeng Strategy: Question // Ending with a proverb or wise saying ;) Was it worthwhile when l organised that inter-class fund-rising to raise money and buy a pencil case and some stationary for Janet? l asked myself. The answer seemed clear. The picture of Janet's grateful smile and the thankful card she made just for us with her new stationary was painted in my mind once again. l was glad that l had helped Janet. The gift of kindness was truly priceless! favorite 1 Your avatar Nata #20 Nata #20 Tata's large brown eyes stared up at me innocently, a huge wave of relief washed over me. Was I a responsible enough pet owner? A million thoughts raced through my mind. I had only gotten Tata three days ago, and this was the second time I lost him. "I'm so sorry,", I whispered into Tata's ears and gave him a little kiss on his forehead. Who knew playing a small game of hide and seek could cause a huge problem? favorite 3 Your avatar Ein Yeu(36) Ein Yeu(36) Strategy: Every time I see my grandma smiling away, I would remember that I had helped my grandma to grand her the wish she had been wishing favorite 1 3 comments Anonymous 20h what is your strategy?!? Anonymous 19h Yes, that's what I was wondering about too...(Mdm Chong) Anonymous 19h do you mean grant her wish? Your avatar #5 Eyota #5 Eyota "Was it worth all the trouble adopting the puppy? favorite_border 0 1 comment Anonymous 20h erm.... ppl pls do not read this one the other one is the real one as i have no acess the this one Your avatar #2 Clare #2 Clare As I looked at the twinking eyes of the old lady, I smiled, not regreting my decion. That moment, a warm feeling of kindness filled my entire being. favorite 1 Your avatar a little kindness really a little kindness really goes a long way favorite_border 0 Your avatar An act of kindness, no m An act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. favorite 1 1 comment Anonymous 1d ever or never? Your avatar #18 Lim Rui Bin #18 Lim Rui Bin Strategy: A question Looking into the grateful brown eyes of the golden retriever, I scratched him behind his ears as I wondered," What would have happened to you if I didn't find you?" I resolved to continue to do my part to stop animal abuse. like the old saying," Others like how you want others to treat you." A little kindess certainly goes a long way favorite 2 2 comments Anonymous 20h RLY good conclusion Anonymous 20h "Treat others like how you want them to treat you"? Nice conclusion, though. Your avatar #16 Hui Jun #16 Hui Jun Strategy: Ending with lesson learnt After this incident, whenever he sees someone who is in need, he would take the initiative to help. Then, whenever he need help, someone would help him. favorite 3 3 comments Anonymous 23h It should be "whenever he needed help" not need LIM HUI JUN Student 22h thansk LIM HUI JUN Student 22h thanks Your avatar #09 HannaHeng #09 HannaHeng Strategy: Ending with a proverb or wise saying ;) Was it worth it when l organised that fund-rising to buy a pencil case and a couple of pens and pencils for Janet? l asked myself. The answer seemed clear. The picture of Janet's smile and thankful face and the card she made for us was painted in my mind. The gift kindness was priceless. favorite 2 1 comment Anonymous 21h Hi please ignore this one! Hanna Your avatar #30 Tan Li Lin #30 Tan Li Lin Strategy:Lesson learnt Looking back, I realised that because of my kindness, I was able to bring others happiness. I resolved to help others forever, regardless of human or animal. favorite 4 Your avatar Katelyn (15) Katelyn (15) Strategy: Receiving the voucher that the old lady gave me in, I smiled happily. Watching the old lady slowly disappear, I thought," wow. Helping someone is actually really worth it." I felt a warm tingly sensation of pride and joy inside me. As the saying goes," no act of kindness is ever wasted." Today, I learnt the true meaning of it favorite 3 1 comment Anonymous 1d Pls bold the parts Your avatar Ein Yeu(36) Ein Yeu(36) Strategy: Everytime that I see old pel favorite 1 Your avatar xuan yu (32) xuan yu (32) strategy : a proverb or a wise saying ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ border idea fr Kate lim i twirled the pen around my fingers with a wide smile plastered on my face . How did i know this pen could make such a big impact on my life . I will always treasure the pen and remember fondly of the kind deed my friend did for me. Kindness does go a long way . ;) favorite 3 2 comments Anonymous 1d nice Anonymous 20h why was the pen such a big impact on your life? Your avatar Earlina tan, [31] Earlina tan, [31] Strategy: [lesson learnt} looking at Coco [my pet dog ], i smiled . i was glad that my mom had adopted Coco.treat other like you want others to treat you . today, i did a kind deed. i hope that no matter what , people will treat animals like human. we should not bully them and hurt them , they are a living thing too . favorite 4 2 comments Amanda Chong 1d Please check your punctuation, my dear. Mdm Chong Anonymous 19h Maybe you could use CAPS and plural words?:) Your avatar Heidi(10) Heidi(10) Strategy: Lesson Learnt Trotting home with my owner, I was in high spirits. I had saved a dog's life. Saving a life is a kind deed. I won't hesitate to save another. favorite 5 Your avatar #6 gen #6 gen Strategy:lesson learnt Stroking my new dog's fur,I looked into her cute round eyes.'Luckily I saved you,"I giggled while patting her head.Through this lesson, I learnt that no matter what, an animal deserves as much love and attention a human does. favorite 3 1 comment Anonymous 1d where is the proverb or wise saying Your avatar #33 Yuu Shane #33 Yuu Shane Strategy: End with a proverb or saying As I recalled the old lady's grateful smile, I could feel the warm feeling of happiness growing in me and filling my entire being. I was glad I had stepped in and lent a helping hand. Thankfully, after 10 years, there was no more misunderstanding between her and her son. The gift of kindness was priceless and a little kindness had certainly gone a long way. favorite 1 1 comment Amanda Chong 1d Yuu Shane, please bold the part that shows the proverb or saying. Thanks! Mdm Chong Your avatar #22 Nericcia Tung #22 Nericcia Tung Strategy: Question " Was it worthwhile to give up the puppy that i adored to the old lady?" I wondered as i watched the old lady's retreating back. I recalled her damp eyes when she opened the box to reveal a bouncy golden retriever puppy. The grateful brown eyes of the puppy looking at me was etched in my mind. I supposed the answer was clear. The gift of kindness is priceless and certainly goes a long way. The old lady was not lonely anymore and the puppy got a new comfortable home favorite 3 Your avatar Emma Tan (4) Emma Tan (4) Strategy: proverb As I watched my friend jump in joy , I felt like the happiest person on earth. I smiled, happy that I helped her achieve success. I was glad I lent her a helping hand and not stood by and watch her suffer. A little kindness certainly goes a long way. favorite 3 Your avatar Rachel Teo Rachel Teo Strategy: End with a proverb or wise saying As Lisa watched her grandmother happily playing with Cloud, she smiled. It always gives a warm feeling in her heart that she did a kind act. Lisa was extremely happy that her grandmother was finally smiling. This act has also taught Lisa a very good lesson: The best and most precious things in the world has to be felt with the heart. favorite 3 Your avatar Jimin's Baeeee (Natalie) #20 Jimin's Baeeee (Natalie) #20 Strategy: A question As Tata's large brown eyes stared up innocently at me, a huge wave of relief washed over me. Am I a responsible enough pet owner? I asked myself. A million thoughts raced through my mind. I had only gotten Tata three days ago for my birthday, and this was the second time I lost him. favorite 3 2 comments Anonymous 1d Nat please change your username overall your conclusion is very good Anonymous 20h change your usermameeee ~jaelynn Your avatar #16 Hui Jun #16 Hui Jun Strategy: Ending with a lesson learnt After this incident, John learnt that whenever he sees anyone having difficulties, he must take initiative to help that person that is in need. then, when he need help, people will help him too. favorite 1 Your avatar natanya(38) natanya(38) stratergy: question ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "will i live a happy life with this little guy?" i questioned myself as i waked home with the little puppy ,who i named brownie,in my hands. the answer was yes. it has been one week and brownie has recovered very well. from thin and skinny limbs, to strong and big limbs. he has been very playful and loves me very much. i do too. i am delighted that i made th choice to adopt brownie. favorite 2 3 comments Anonymous 1d :| Anonymous 20h Maybe you could try using caps at the beginning of a sentence?Anyways, nice conclusion!:) Anonymous 19h I think it makes sense to edit your punctuation, Natanya. :) (Mdm Chong) Your avatar #11 Adelle #11 Adelle Strategy : End with proverb or wise saying. Recalling the radiant smile on the old lady's face. It always gives a warm feeling in Mary's heart every time she thinks of it. This kind deed did not only made Mary feel proud of herself, but also thought Mary a lesson. That it is the thought that counts, not how big the gift is. favorite 2 1 comment Anonymous 20h i like your conclusion~ jaelynn Your avatar #19 kate lim #19 kate lim strategy: ending with a Lesson Learnt -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- Dogs are living things too. We should treat them with respect like how we do to humans. No matter what animal, stray or pet, we should be kind to them and not abuse them. I did a kind deed and will never forget that day. favorite 2 2 comments Anonymous 20h i agree! ~ jaelynn Anonymous 19h Do you mean you did a kind act that day you would never forget?If so,maybe you could write: I am glad I helped that little dog/ did a kind deed and I would never forget it/this will forever be etched in my mind.[these are suggestions and might be wrong so yea.]:) Your avatar #27 Christina(Reggie) #27 Christina(Reggie) Strategy: Lesson learnt Looking back, I learnt that we should put in effort to be kind, even if it is troublesome. After all, its the thought that counts. (Even little things like giving banana leaves to old ladies so that they can grow banana trees and eat bananas from their backyard without having to go to the NTUC) favorite 1 5 comments Anonymous 1d hi christina ;)) lol Anonymous 1d REGGIE! Anonymous 1d im pretty sure da old ladies would have already died before the banana saplings have sprouted... Anonymous 1d Gillian Anonymous 20h lol ~ jaelynn Your avatar carrie:) ( 29 ) carrie:) ( 29 ) hi i love why dont we strategy :: lesson learnt ---------- Seeing the cute and happy dog chasing the ball that i threw across my backyard , i knew i made the right decision . My heart felt warmth as i picked up the puppy , looking into its hazel brown eyes . No matter what , i learnt that we should all be kind to one another , as a kind act is never forgotten . favorite 1 1 comment Anonymous 19h My heart warmed/warmth filled my heart.(these are just suggestions if you want to use them)Nice conclusion:) Your avatar #35 tiffany loy #35 tiffany loy strategy:question "how would mum and dad react to you? would they like you?"I questioned the puppy and myself as i walked home. when i reached home mum was surprised that i had a puppy in my.she surprisingly did not scol me but questioned me. upon telling her the story,she praised me for the kind act i did and allowed me to keep it.i was proud of myself and promised to take good care of it. favorite_border 0 1 comment Anonymous 19h Dear Tiffany, this sounds like the 'solution', not the conclusion. Please provide a conclusion. (Mdm Chong) Your avatar ricaa ;) [ 8 ] ricaa ;) [ 8 ] heyooo <3 strategy ; proverb or wise saying As i looked into the grateful brown eyes of the little puppy, my heart warmed instantly and i knew i had done the right thing. An act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted. favorite_border 0 2 comments Anonymous 1d hi ericaaaa , guess who is this Anonymous 1d hi ~guess who Your avatar Hui Jun Hui Jun favorite_border 0 Your avatar chanell chanell strategy: proverb or wise saying Looking into the grateful brown eyes of the little puppy, favorite_border 0 Your avatar jin yee[18] jin yee[18] statergie : lesson learnt Whenever Mary remember the good deed she had done, she would smile . She had learnt the importance of lending a helping hand to those in need. This incident will always be etched in her head for the rest of her life. favorite_border 0 1 comment Anonymous 19h You could say: whenever Mary remembers the good deed she had done,the warm feeling of happiness would engulf her.She was glad that she had helped the dog/old lady/(main character) to (solve problem) and also: etched in her head.Um,this these are just suggestions,though. Your avatar Timea goh (7) Timea goh (7) Strategy: favorite_border 0 Your avatar nutella:) nutella:) favorite_border 0 Your avatar Ashley Tey (34) Ashley Tey (34) Strategy: proverb or wise saying As I left Leah's house that day, I felt a warm feeling in my heart. I was glad that I could make Leah's birthday a special one. A little kindness really does go a long way. favorite 1 1 comment Anonymous 20h Short and sweet, Ashley. Nice! (Mdm Chong) Your avatar jing en jing en #17 lim jing en strategy:ending with a proverb I felt great!i had helped mdm tan .she thanked me profusely after we crossed the road and walked to the door of her house,she also told me that she would definately pass on this act of kindness whenever she could . as the saying goes,an act of kindness goes a long way.i silently vowed to keep up the good work. favorite 1 Your avatar Kate Ng (14) Kate Ng (14) Strategy 3:Ending with a proverb or wise saying.As I watched my classmate's retreating back,I felt the warm feeling of happiness in my heart.The gift of kindness certainly is priceless. favorite 1 Your avatar Isabella: Isabella: Strategy:Lesson Learnt "I wonder if I made the right choice to adopt this puppy and use all my year's saving to buy things for the puppy."I wondered as I looked into the little puppy's grateful brown eyes.I supposed the answer was clear.The gift of kindness was priceless. favorite_border 0 1 comment Anonymous 20h Isabella, maybe you could specify what 'things' you bought for the puppy. eg. puppy bowl, blanket, etc. If not, I feel you can just say "Is it worthwhile spending all my savings on the puppy?" ... Your avatar #23 jaelynn #23 jaelynn strategy number 1: a question Should i have spent my all my savings on the dog? i stared into the dog's grateful brown eyes and the answer was clear. a small act of kindness goes a long way. favorite 1 Your avatar #24 Gillian Poon #24 Gillian Poon Strategy #3: End with a proverb. Watching Jamie's retreating back, I smiled. The amount of money he had given me would buy me a complete meal for a day. However small that act of kindness was, it was the thought that really counted. A small act of kindness truly does go a long way. favorite 5 1 comment Anonymous 19h This is a interesting perspective to be the beneficiary. Your avatar Hui Jun Hui Jun favorite_border 0 Your avatar #13 Joey Ong #13 Joey Ong Strategy: Ending with a proverb As I waved to my grandma till I could not see her from the car, as I looked backed on how happy she was by my company, I knew that the time l spent with her was worth it. AS the saying goes, a little kindness really goes a long way favorite 1 Your avatar hihi hihi favorite_border 0 Your avatar Rachel Teo Rachel Teo Strategy favorite_border 0 Your avatar #33 Yuu Shane #33 Yuu Shane Stategy favorite_border 0 Your avatar Shannon (28) Shannon (28) Strategy: Lesson Learnt From that day on,Tim vowed to do his part to stop animal abuse. An animal is still a life,we should care for them instead of hurting them. favorite 4 2 comments Anonymous 1d nice story shannon ~ anonymous (jk) Anonymous 19h Maybe you could write an animal is still a living thing on the earth like us and we should treat them fairly.Instead of abusing them,we should protect and care for them.This is nice,tho. Your avatar Rachel Liu (25) Rachel Liu (25) Strategy: Ending with a proverb or wise saying As the dog barked at me as if it was saying goodbye, I could definitely feel the warm filling my entire being. As a saying goes," A little kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted." favorite 5 2 comments Anonymous 1d hi Rachel i like your proverb Gillian Anonymous 1d ok:) Your avatar 3# Elisha;D 3# Elisha;D strategy: ending with a question Was it worth it? Should i have spent all my savings for the medical attention of this dog? As i looked at the dog, I saw its twinkling eyes saying thank you. I looked it and thought yes, it is worth it ,the gift of kindness was priceless. "I am going to adopt it." Ally said. favorite 4 2 comments Anonymous 20h i like the bold sentence ~ jaelynn Anonymous 19h For the last sentence, you could write that Ally decided,not said.;) Your avatar Hello Hello Strategy#3:Ending with a proverb or wise saying. As the dog barked at me,I could feel the warm feeling of happiness growing in me. The answer was clear.Saving the dog and keeping it in the end was meaningful.Kindness is truly priceless. favorite 1 Your avatar add

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favorite 3 Your avatar more_vert Rachel Teo Rachel Teo Strategy: End with a proverb or wise saying As Lisa watched her grandmother happily playing with Cloud, she smiled. It always gives a warm feeling in her heart that she did a kind act. Lisa was extremely happy that her grandmother was finally smiling. This act has also taught Lisa a very good lesson: The best and most precious things in the world has to be felt with the heart. favorite 3 Your avatar Jimin's Baeeee (Natalie) #20 Jimin's Baeeee (Natalie) #20 Strategy: A question As Tata's large brown eyes stared up innocently at me, a huge wave of relief washed over me. Am I a responsible enough pet owner? I asked myself. A million thoughts raced through my mind. I had only gotten Tata three days ago for my birthday, and this was the second time I lost him. favorite 3 2 comments Anonymous 1d Nat please change your username overall your conclusion is very good Anonymous 20h change your usermameeee ~jaelynn Your avatar #16 Hui Jun #16 Hui Jun Strategy: Ending with a lesson learnt After this incident, John learnt that whenever he sees anyone having difficulties, he must take initiative to help that person that is in need. then, when he need help, people will help him too. favorite 1 Your avatar natanya(38) natanya(38) stratergy: question ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "will i live a happy life with this little guy?" i questioned myself as i waked home with the little puppy ,who i named brownie,in my hands. the answer was yes. it has been one week and brownie has recovered very well. from thin and skinny limbs, to strong and big limbs. he has been very playful and loves me very much. i do too. i am delighted that i made th choice to adopt brownie. favorite 2 3 comments Anonymous 1d :| Anonymous 20h Maybe you could try using caps at the beginning of a sentence?Anyways, nice conclusion!:) Anonymous 19h I think it makes sense to edit your punctuation, Natanya. :) (Mdm Chong) Your avatar #11 Adelle #11 Adelle Strategy : End with proverb or wise saying. Recalling the radiant smile on the old lady's face. It always gives a warm feeling in Mary's heart every time she thinks of it. This kind deed did not only made Mary feel proud of herself, but also thought Mary a lesson. That it is the thought that counts, not how big the gift is. favorite 2 1 comment Anonymous 20h i like your conclusion~ jaelynn Your avatar #19 kate lim #19 kate lim strategy: ending with a Lesson Learnt -_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_-_- Dogs are living things too. We should treat them with respect like how we do to humans. No matter what animal, stray or pet, we should be kind to them and not abuse them. I did a kind deed and will never forget that day. favorite 2 2 comments Anonymous 20h i agree! ~ jaelynn Anonymous 19h Do you mean you did a kind act that day you would never forget?If so,maybe you could write: I am glad I helped that little dog/ did a kind deed and I would never forget it/this will forever be etched in my mind.[these are suggestions and might be wrong so yea.]:) Your avatar #27 Christina(Reggie) #27 Christina(Reggie) Strategy: Lesson lear