https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90 EAP for Business and Management en-us 2018-09-11 08:01:39 UTC 2025-11-26 12:36:55 UTC hello@padlet.com simon74000 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/279747373 Don’t start your essay with a time phrase or adverb of time (e.g. Nowadays!). Start with a keyword such as a word or synonym from the essay question.  ]]> 2018-09-11 08:37:40 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/279747373 simon74000 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/279747739 Over several years, the development of the internet has seen an increase in e-communication. ]]> 2018-09-11 08:38:39 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/279747739 simon74000 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/279748172 Avoid weak conclusions which simply recommend that governments do something about the problem. Make your conclusion recommendation/prediction/solution related to the content of the main body. Make your stance clear in your conclusion]]> 2018-09-11 08:40:14 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/279748172 simon74000 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/279757621 The advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
Avoid overusing the word people.  Instead, replace with a more specific word or consider whether the person is important.  If not, use passive.]]> 2018-09-11 09:10:44 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/279757621 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/355328111 Try to expanse your idea even more with a clear reasons and try to use a new word with the same meaning]]> 2019-04-30 07:49:27 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/355328111 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/355328192 2019-04-30 07:49:56 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/355328192 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/355328264 Dont start off with the main point cause in the introduction point your just introducing the topic to the reader it not telling explain your idea right now. Your main idea is will be explained in the main paragraph.]]> 2019-04-30 07:50:24 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/355328264 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/355328533 Brainstorm is very important to organize  your idea for your  writing....... after brainstorm you will know which idea should come first ,second ,next .....or which idea should not fit the topic . ]]> 2019-04-30 07:51:54 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/355328533 simon74000 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373330787 2019-08-05 22:06:03 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373330787 simon74000 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373331081 2019-08-05 22:09:39 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373331081 simon74000 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373331100 2019-08-05 22:10:12 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373331100 rongh https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373406724 How to describe your own position?]]> 2019-08-06 11:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373406724 alyqj1 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373406896 2019-08-06 11:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373406896 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373406908 To show the goal of TW at the first paragraph.]]> 2019-08-06 11:18:15 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373406908 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373407006 Language should be academic, objective and tentative. We can Use cohesives to make language more logical.]]> 2019-08-06 11:19:04 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373407006 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373407027 Tips
1. A clear central idea should be presented in each paragraph. 
2. Put the central idea in the first sentence is effective. 

]]> 2019-08-06 11:19:16 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373407027 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373407139 Language 
Use the words like may, might, could, would to illustrate the trend in the future, and  provide evidence to prove yourself.]]> 2019-08-06 11:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373407139 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373407428 1：Introduction＋Abstract
2：Main points e.g. advantages 
       links between benefits and problems 
3：Conclusion e.g.  ×× overweigh ××]]> 2019-08-06 11:24:09 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373407428 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373708569 perfect sentence to share ]]> 2019-08-08 10:43:43 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373708569 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373708721 2019-08-08 10:45:43 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373708721 https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373709205 There are many nouns phrase in many sections, especially at the beginning. I think it is quite helpful to expand the information for understanding.

E.g.
The benefit to a company of adopting basic sustainable practice such as...........used in business-related processed.
Gon-id]]> 2019-08-08 10:51:00 UTC https://padlet.com/simon74000/75uaqw4win90/wish/373709205