Pre Writing by Connor Powers

1. Write about a problem in your city. 2.What you suggest doing about it. 3.Possible results.

powersconnor — 2023-08-02 22:40:51 UTC

My city is becoming very dangerous due to unempoyed people.

2023-08-03 00:53:16 UTC

I suggested, creating places to give job.
In short, it can help reduce the crime

Streets need to be repair

2023-08-03 00:54:24 UTC

In my personal opinion, I recommend to increase some taxes in household bills such as electricity, water and internet in order to save money and repair the streets. Furthermore, according to the city's major we will need about three hundred million dollars to cover this out-going. If all the streets are in good conditions, businesses and industries will earn a lot of money and families could be beneficiated because their incomes will be improved.

Three problems in my city

2023-08-03 00:54:37 UTC

firstly, the insecurity must create laws for serious crimes
unemployment create micro-enterprises and traffic

powersconnor — 2023-08-03 01:03:54 UTC

Well, I live in a coastal city and there was an oil spill, so my suggestionis that that there be better control by the authorities in the environmental sector and that could help prevent these things from happening again

2 problems in my country

2023-08-03 01:10:33 UTC

From my point of view, the insecurity is a big problem because we can leave with any valuable object because despite being robbed, you have the risk of being murdered. For those reasons,it is vital created laws for minor and serious crimes.
On the other hand, there is unemployment due to the lack of experience and ages are taken into account, which creates an obstacle to apply for a job. In this case, we can create micro-enterprises or careers that generate productivity in our country.