Linking poems by Jiya Desai https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p Mind map to help with critical essay en-us 2019-03-24 08:54:59 UTC 2019-03-29 04:09:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png This room jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533677 Themes:
- Change
Tones:
Both of the poems have Improbable events
Style:
- free verse
- use of imageryrepetition]]> 2019-03-24 08:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533677 Vulture jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533678 Style:
free verse
A Possible theme could be selfishness like in not my business. In vultures there were superior people torturing or being evil to people below them, this is the same as in not my business. ]]> 2019-03-24 08:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533678 Huricane hits England jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533679 Themes:
No control over what happens, cant be stopped
Techniques
- uses differnent similes and metaphor; great imagery and depicts the image in the reader's head. 
- anaphora of phrases but in Not My Business they do it with a whole stanza.]]> 2019-03-24 08:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533679 An unknown girl jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533680 Tones:
In unknown girl the personna has a strong connection with characters however in Not My Business has really weak and id seflish towards them]]> 2019-03-24 08:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533680 Not My Business jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533681 Techniques:
Repetition: "no query, no warning, no probe" and "waiting,waiting" 
Repetition of main chorus
Themes:
- Corrupt
- Voice: dont be afraid to speak about things that arent right
selfish
Style:
the stanzas are the same lentgh
repetitive phrase through out the whole poem; reminds the reader the message of the poem. 
]]> 2019-03-24 08:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533681 Call jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533682 Themes:
In Not my Business they were snatching them away from their home and call was about a call home : home and displacement . ]]> 2019-03-24 08:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533682 A mother in a refugee camp jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533684 Themes:
survival
war
food is limited 'froze my hungry hand"
Tones: 
Both of the poems set in a atmosphere where it is a war zone, no peace, anything could happen anytime. ]]> 2019-03-24 08:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533684 At the border jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533685 Both of the poems discuss terrorism and the county ebing dan]]> 2019-03-24 08:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344533685 Telephone conversation jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344534232 Techniques:
- Irony : you dont have a choice on your skin color] and in Not my Business the irony was showed when the persona did not care what happened to the other characters as long his yam isnt taken away - in the end it did get taken away.
- Contradiction: persona ends up being more mannered than the woman
Consonance is used in both poems as there are cold emotions and sense of being dominated as in Not My Business the terrorists are very dominated and the victims dont have choice]]> 2019-03-24 09:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/344534232 Nothing has changed jiya2022 https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/345627199 Repetition - in both poems they use repetition, this builds up the tensions and emphasises the effect of the words as it sticks into the reader's mind.
Structure 
- the structure of the both of the poems are completely opposite, in Nothing Has Changed; hes back where he started but in Not My Business; he lost everything he had in the end. 
- Both poes are set in Africa and revolves around corruption.
- These poems juxtapose each other because Nothing Has Changed is about protest and cry of pain but the personna in Not My Business suggests the idea of being silent even though its wrong]]> 2019-03-27 10:59:08 UTC https://padlet.com/jiya2022/755m5i0lwf7p/wish/345627199