https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp Please put your name in the "subject" box en-us 2018-04-24 12:31:13 UTC 2018-05-02 14:27:43 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257237515 the children gathering stones, the villagers keeping their distance from the black box

]]> 2018-05-02 13:39:11 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257237515 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257246239 The author explains everything that goes on before the lottery. Also he withholds information about what the lottery is for]]> 2018-05-02 13:53:58 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257246239 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247047 Jackson created suspense by not allowing the villagers to open up their paper to see whats on it. It makes the reader become more curious to see what is in the lottery in the first place. Even when they do open the paper, it still isn't revealed to what it contains. When they re-do the lottery again, the reader is expecting the lottery to be money or something beneficial but its shocking to find out what it really contains.]]> 2018-05-02 13:55:28 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247047 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247690 Jackson creates suspense by including a lot of details that are unnecessary and is written to create time like the details of the history of the lottery rituals]]> 2018-05-02 13:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247690 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247730 Theres a lot of suspense from long descriptions and withholding evidence from the reader]]> 2018-05-02 13:56:31 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247730 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247858 The author goes into a lot of detail to drag out the process of the lottery and create suspense. ]]> 2018-05-02 13:56:42 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247858 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247925 The author creates suspense with her descriptions that are long and in depth and with her tone as well.]]> 2018-05-02 13:56:48 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247925 koncuratj https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247943 Shirley Jackson builds suspense by not telling the audience what the lottery is for, simply just establishing the characters weariness of it by slowly revealing information over time. So also tells the story in the third person point of view so that the audience doesn't develop a connection to any of the characters and feels separated from the society.]]> 2018-05-02 13:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247943 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247966 Describing in detail how Mrs. hutchinson entered the crowd and threw her sweater over her shoulders. Much like how in the hunger games clip, they took time showing her pick a card and katniss walking up the stairs.]]> 2018-05-02 13:56:53 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247966 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247998 The order of events during the lottery create suspense because they delay the final outcome that everyone is waiting for. Jackson adds detail to each event and character to create suspense as well.]]> 2018-05-02 13:56:56 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257247998 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248046 Elements I have noticed in the reading so far, is that she explains everything in great detail; and makes it super drawn out so that the reader has to keep waiting just for the lottery.

]]> 2018-05-02 13:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248046 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248059 Irony when characters act like this is nothing strange, even though their lives are at stake.]]> 2018-05-02 13:57:03 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248059 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248363 The author uses tone and withholds information to create suspense throughout the story]]> 2018-05-02 13:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248363 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248543 Withholding information about what the lottery is for.]]> 2018-05-02 13:57:57 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248543 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248644 Teh
 author created suspense through the children gathering the rocks and not really explaining the meaning of the box or the lottery.]]> 2018-05-02 13:58:08 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248644 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248821 Suspense is created when Jackson describes the variation of rituals, but doesn't go into detail on what the purpose for it was or why it was to be hidden until the day of use.]]> 2018-05-02 13:58:28 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248821 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248866 There are a lot of things that are being drawn put within the first couple of paragraphs.  She also includes broken up parts of a story, the theme isn'
t necessarily clear.]]> 2018-05-02 13:58:35 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248866 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248894 he keeps evidence from the audience which creates suspense ]]> 2018-05-02 13:58:38 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248894 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248917 I noticed that Jackson adds alot of long sentences and details to elongate the story making it more suspenseful]]> 2018-05-02 13:58:42 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257248917 daianabanton https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257249181 they all have to wait in order to open the slip and see what they pulled they also have to wait a whole year to do the lottery all over again]]> 2018-05-02 13:59:14 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257249181 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257249269 The villagers acting nervous when their name is called and when they are looking at the names on the paper.]]> 2018-05-02 13:59:25 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257249269 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257249372 The author uses point of view (3rd person) which doesnt allow her to display what she feels ]]> 2018-05-02 13:59:34 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257249372 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257250171 The events prior to the lottery seem super long to the reader, especially with the directions they have to sit through before they get their slip of paper. This creates suspense because it makes the reader feel the anxiety of each of the characters who are impatiently waiting as well. ]]> 2018-05-02 14:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257250171 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257250350 the speed of the story helps build suspense it just seems slow and drawn out

]]> 2018-05-02 14:01:24 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257250350 https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257250568 The author creates suspense by describing the people's actions as grave and unhumorous, yet does not tell the audience what is going on fully.]]> 2018-05-02 14:01:48 UTC https://padlet.com/gretchen_griffith/74yv9nqhfkjp/wish/257250568