PRE-MAR: UNIT 9 - REVISION OF ESSAYS by Ly Le (M.A.) https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb Made with an aura of mystery en-us 2022-06-28 12:18:44 UTC 2026-02-23 09:52:24 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/0039.png Ôn các kĩ năng viết học thuật https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232435140 1. Ko đc quy kết (hedging)
2. Thay thế từ trở nên formal, từ cao siêu, thay từ nhàm chán
3. Thay thế đtừ, t từ chỉ cảm xúc thành danh từ, cụm dt
4. Thay từ not
5. Ko viết tắt]]> 2022-06-28 12:49:26 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232435140 Ôn cách viết học thuật shinichikudocomrang https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232472765 1. Hedging: không quy kết
2. Thay từ phủ định
3. Không viết tắt
4. Norminalization thay bằng danh từ
Cách viết đoạn:
Câu 1: Ý chính: nhiều vấn đề
Vấn đề 1:
Ví dụ+ Impact
Vấn đề 2:
Ví dụ+ Impact
Vấn đề 3:
Ví dụ+ Impact
Đề 3: mọi người đổ ra phố sống dân số ở phố quá đông
Đề 4: Internet truyền thông tin rất nhanh và vấn đề là gì
2 bạn viết chung mở bài, mỗi người viết 1 thân bài: problem, solution]]> 2022-06-28 13:35:40 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232472765 Bài viết shinichikudocomrang https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232473024 The Internet is a powerful invention that brings many conveniences in people's every-day lives. Besides the positive things the internet also brings serious problems in people's lives.
Children's access to websites should be closely supervised by parents so that children can stay far from harmful information sites. Installing age control applications to access websites is a solution that deserves attention.

]]> 2022-06-28 13:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232473024 đề 4 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232478851 The Internet is one of the cutting-edge inventions in the technological age. Although the internet has the potential to make people's lives more convenient and easier, it also creates obstacle.


One of the pervasive existential problems caused by the internet is cyberbullying. For example, someone could spread false information about an individual or send threatening or harassing messages to them. Needless to say, the consequences caused by cybercrimes are irreplaceable. Another thorny issue is children's access to dangerous websites. More specifically, Facebook is gradually becoming toxic and negative thoughts are rampant on social networks. There is no doubt that such thoughts will affect children's thinking and development, as well as society as a whole.









]]> 2022-06-28 13:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232478851 Overpopulation of urban areas has led to numerous problems.Identify one or two serious ones and suggest ways that governments and individuals can tackle these problems. haminh22012005 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232478856 Many cities in the world are experiencing  overpopulation of urban areas, which has led to many problems. I will discuss the most serious one arising and also solutions in which the situation can be improved.

Obviously the most gravest problem caused by the growing population in cities is lacking  of qualified houses. Urban areas are chock-a-block with people, but there is no space construct enough houses for them. Furthermore, houses which are built up rapidly, can be in unsatified quality. Because of limited space, houses are able to lack in heating and cooling system.]]> 2022-06-28 13:42:26 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232478856 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232479102 In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing, this can take a serious toll on society.

First of all, population impacts on labour force structure, economic growth and development. In addition, public finance has to cope with the pressure to ensure the health care needs of the elderly (the average cost of health care for an elderly person is 7-8 times the average cost of health care for a young person).




]]> 2022-06-28 13:42:42 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232479102 In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing.What problems will this cause for individuals and society?Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations. hongdoan1022 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232479820 Population aging has been a prevalent issue to resident and goverment in the mordern life. I will discuss the most serious problem arising, and also two ways in which the situation can be improved.
in general, one of the gravest problems caused by increasing  average life expectancy is the structure of labor force and the economic growth. For example,

]]> 2022-06-28 13:43:28 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232479820 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232479943   Excessive time spent playing computer games  can take a serious toll on children in various ways. I will discuss the most serious problems arising and also three ways in which the situation can be improved.
 On the one hand, computer games can inhibit children’s development of intelligence and communication skills. To illustrate, children who spend many





 
 ]]> 2022-06-28 13:43:32 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232479943 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232480064 Urban population growth is causing issues in many nations throughout the world, and it is the responsibility of both governments and citizens to figure out how to solve these problems.

As far as decisions are concerned, I believe the government needs to take greater responsibility for making decisions. All of the state's residents must have access to basic housing and medical services. Secondly, it aims to start community projects that will promote a stronger sense of community and assist in keeping children safe from harm. Teenagers may also be entertained, for instance, by joining youth groups or enrolling in evening classes. Inner-city neighborhoods would also benefit from better enforcement.

Naturally, people should endeavor to solve these issues. One option is to exert pressure on the government to ensure that the concerns are addressed. For example, action groups can be formed to push the government and demand intervention and sufficient money. To try and lower the high levels of crime, they might also create Neighborhood Watch districts.


]]> 2022-06-28 13:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232480064 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232480220

Excessive time spent playing computer games can take a serious toll on children in various ways. I will discuss the most serious problems arising and also three ways in which the situation can be improved.

]]> 2022-06-28 13:43:46 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2232480220 bố sung https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237262747 Excessive time spent playing computer games can take a serious toll on children in various ways. I will discuss the most serious problems arising and also three ways in which the situation can be improved.

On the one hand, computer games can inhibit children’s development of intelligence and communication skills. To illustrate, children who spend many time in front of a screen instead of doing outdoor activities or reading books.As a result, they will live rather isolated lives and have a little opportunity to interact with other people. Moreover, the violence of many of the games easily make players to become aggressive and violent. Scenes of brutality from games are also linked to improper behavior. On the other hand, prolonged sitting games can have a bad effect on children’s health. It may be damage eyes and lack in self-control.  (Thiên An)

One of the most effective solution is diminishing the amount of time spending on computer games. Instead of playing this mean of recreation, children totally can engage in interesting outdoor activities. Which is benefical to their mental and physical heath. Another solution is spending time on healthy games and parent can get hold of these. Besides, to alleviate the damage of eyesight, children should play with appropriate extent. For example, we can prolong screen at maximun of 45 minutes and take a break at least 5 minites each round. And it is advisable for us to check eyes health frequently at hospital. (Phương Hà)

In conclusion, playing computer games has a range of benefits but there are also many risks attached to it. However, to balance its upside and downside, we should play it properly.]]> 2022-07-05 13:11:31 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237262747 bố sung https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237262815 Excessive time spent playing computer games can take a serious toll on children in various ways. I will discuss the most serious problems arising and also three ways in which the situation can be improved.

On the one hand, computer games can inhibit children’s development of intelligence and communication skills. To illustrate, children who spend many time in front of a screen instead of doing outdoor activities or reading books.As a result, they will live rather isolated lives and have a little opportunity to interact with other people. Moreover, the violence of many of the games easily make players to become aggressive and violent. Scenes of brutality from games are also linked to improper behavior. On the other hand, prolonged sitting games can have a bad effect on children’s health. It may be damage eyes and lack in self-control.  (Thiên An)

One of the most effective solution is diminishing the amount of time spending on computer games. Instead of playing this mean of recreation, children totally can engage in interesting outdoor activities. Which is benefical to their mental and physical heath. Another solution is spending time on healthy games and parent can get hold of these. Besides, to alleviate the damage of eyesight, children should play with appropriate extent. For example, we can prolong screen at maximun of 45 minutes and take a break at least 5 minites each round. And it is advisable for us to check eyes health frequently at hospital. (Phương Hà)

In conclusion, playing computer games has a range of benefits but there are also many risks attached to it. However, to balance its upside and downside, we should play it properly.]]> 2022-07-05 13:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237262815 CHỨA BÀI VIẾT hongdoan1022 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237266465 DỊCH
1.nhiều nơi trên thế giới phải đối mặt với 
-> many cities across the globe are facing the risk of overpopulation
2. vấn đề nghiêm trọng nhất là thiếu nơi ăn chốn ở 
-> the lack of accommodation
3. hãy thử viết tiếp tiếng việt cho câu trên sao cho đảm báo tính tuyến tính
5. houses which are built too rapidly can be under qualified
phố đầy người nhưng 
sự thiếu hụt này là do khan hiếm quỹ đất 
 NOTE: 
- TRÁNH DÙNG TỪ THE WORLD => chuyển sang ACROSS THE GLOBe
- THAY TỪ ENOUGH-> ADEQUATE 
- KHI LIỆT KÊ Y cần đảm bảo các rhanhf phần liệt kê phải cùng dạng từ 
intelli
- the growth of intellectual ability and communication skills
- INTELLECTUAL GROWTH
- VỚI CÁC CÂU KHÔNG RÕ CHỦ NGỮ THÌ NÊN CHUYỂN SANG BỊ ĐỘNG 
- CÂU THESIS PHẢI MỞ RA HƯỚNG KHAI TRIỂN TRONG ĐOẠN TỚI 
=> problems: regarding : a strength on social welfare
- on technological advances
CÁCH VIẾT MỞ :
IN DISCUSSION OF + TOPICs


]]> 2022-07-05 13:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237266465 Chữa bài viết haminh22012005 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237267029
1. Nhiều nơi trên thế giới đang phải đối mặt với vấn đề bùng nổ dân số
Many cities across the globe are facing the risk of overpopulation problem.
2. Vấn đề nghiêm trọng nhất của bùng nổ dân số là thiếu nơi ăn chốn ở
Obviously the gravestproblem caused by the growing population in cities is the lack of accommodation 
3. Hãy thử viết tiếp tiếng việt cho câu trên sao cho đảm bảo tính tuyến tính 
4. Nhà mà được xây nhanh có thể ko đủ chất lượng
Houses which are built too rapidly can be underqualified

NOTE: 
tránh dùng từ the world -> across the globe
ways in which / solutions through which 
enough houses -> adequate accommodation
be able to V chỉ khả năng, năng lực ( ko p có thể xra,..) -> apt to V
khi liệt kê ý cần đảm bảo các thành phần liệt kê p cùng dạng từ 
intellectual growth 
inhibit the growth of intellectual ability and communication skills
với các câu bắt đầu bg (people they we) các chủ ngữ ko rõ ng tác động thì nên chuyển các câu này sang bị động




]]> 2022-07-05 13:17:09 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237267029 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237267229 nhiều nơi trên tg đang đối mặt với vấn đề bùng nổ dân số
vấn đề nghiêm trọng nhất của bùng nổ dân số là thiếu nơi ăn chốn ở
sự thiếu hụt này là do khan hiếm quỹ đất
nhà mà đc xây nhanh có thể k đủ chất lượng

hãy thử viết tiếp tv cho cấu trên sao đảm bảo tính tuyến tính
tránh dùng từ the world => across the globe 
enough => adequate
be able to có thể (năng lực, chân tay, tài giỏi)]]> 2022-07-05 13:17:30 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237267229 Chữa bài viết anhnguyen151120022 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237267746 !!!!Làm tiếng Việt trước ( Idea- Vocab- Grammar)
1. Dịch câu sau
-Nhiều nơi trên thế giới đang phải đối mặt với vấn đề bùng nổ dân số
Many cities across the globe are facing the problem/risks of overpopulation
-Vấn đề nghiêm trọng nhất của bùng nổ dân số là thiếu nơi ăn chốn ở
The gravest problem
accommodation
the lack of:

-Sự thiếu hụt này là do khan hiếm quỹ đất

Hãy thử viết tiếp tiếng việt cho câu trên sao cho đảm bảo tính tuyến tính.
2. Tránh dùng từ " in the world"-> across the globe
3. solutions through which
three ways in which
4. enough houses-> adequate accommodation
5. Nhà mà được xây nhanh có thể k đủ chất lượng
Houses which are built too rapidly can be underqualified/ badly qualified
6. be able to: có thể, chỉ năng lực( chân tay tư duy)
có thể xảy ra( trường hợp)-> rất dễ là : be bound to, likely to, be apt to be..
7.Khi liệt kê ý cần đảm bảo các thành phần liệt kê phải cùng dạng từ ( song song)
development of intelligence and communication skills - inhibit the growth of intellectual ability and communication skills
8. Với các câu bắt đầu bằng people, they, we, chủ ngữ không rõ người tác động thì nên biến các câu này sang bị động
VD: Someone could spread false information 
False information could be spread 


]]> 2022-07-05 13:18:16 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237267746 Chữa bài viết https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237269919 1. nhiều nơi trên thế giới đang phải đói mặt với vdd bùng nổ dân sổ
2. vdd nghiêm trọng nhất của bùng nổ dân số là thiếu nơi ăn chốn ở
3. hãy thử viết tiếp tiếng việt cho câu trên, sao cho đảm bảo tính tuyến tính
4. nhà mà xây nhanh có thể ko đủ chất lượng
-> Hou

-Tránh dùng the world -> across the globe
- the way in which
- solution through which
- nơi ăn chốn ở: accomodation
- enough houses -> adequate
- Phân biệt: be able to: có thể ( năng lực), chân tay, tài giỏi
có thể xảy ra (trường hợp) -> rất dễ là: are apt to be
- khi liệt kê ý, cần đảm bảo các tp liệt kê cùng dạng từ
- với các câu bắt đầu = we, they nên chuyển các câu này sang bị động

]]> 2022-07-05 13:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237269919 Chữa bài viết https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237279470 1. Dịch: 
-Nhiều nơi trên thế giới đang phải đối mặt với vấn đề bùng nổ dân số
- Vấn đề nghiêm trọng nhất là thiếu nới ăn chốn ở
Thử viết tiếp tiếng Việt cho câu trên sao cho đảm bảo tính tuyến tính
2.Tránh dùng từ in the world-> across the globle
accomodation: nơi ăn chốn ở
3.Ways in which
   solutions through which
4. enough houses-> adequate accommodation
5. nhà mà đc xây nhanh có thể ko đủ chất lg-> Houses which are built too rapidly can be under qualified badly qualified.
6. Be able to: có thể (năng lực)
-> có thể xảy ra
-> rất dễ là: apt to be
7. Khi liệt kê ý, đảm bảo các t/phần liệt kê cùng dạng từ (song song) Eg: the growth of intellectual abilty and skill.
8. People, they, we: Chuyển các câu sang bị động]]> 2022-07-05 13:34:50 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237279470 cách viết mở bài https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237280079 gồm 2 câu. Câu 1 đưa topic, câu 2 chủ đề
-Câu topic phải gọi đc luôn keyword của câu hỏi.
-Câu thesis phải mở ra đc hướng khai triển trong thân bài ( ý nhất là ý con của 1 đoạn trong thân)

]]> 2022-07-05 13:35:44 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237280079 haminh22012005 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237281569 Cách viết mở bài:
Câu topic phải gợi ra được vấn đề impact 
câu thesis p mở ra đc hướng khai triển trong thân bài (ít nhất là ý con của 1 đoạn trong thân)

OPINION: In discussion of +topic people hold different viewpoint . Although it takes..( 1 ý nhượng bộ)]]> 2022-07-05 13:37:53 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237281569 chữa bài viết: https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237283061 1. Nhiều nơi trên thế giới đang phải đối mặt với vấn đề bùng nổ dân số
=> Many cities across the globe are facing the risk/problem of overpopulation.
2. Vấn đề nghiêm trọng nhất của bùng nổ dân số là thiếu nơi ăn chốn ở
=> The gravest problem caused by the growing population in cities is the lack of accommodation.
3. Nhà mà được xây nhanh có thể k đủ chất lượng
=> Houses which are built too rapidly can be underqualified/ badly-qualified

4. Các lưu ý trong bài viết:
* tránh dùng từ in the world => thay thế bằng across the globe
* ways in which
   solutions through which
*thay từ enough houses => adequate accommodation
* be able to : có thể ( năng lực , vd : có chân tay, năng lực tư duy,thể chất)
  có thể xảy ra theo trường hợp => rất dễ là : apt to be
* Khi liệt kê ý cần đảm bảo các thành phần liệt kê phải dùng dạng từ => inhibit the growth of intellectual ability and communcation skills
* Với các câu bắt đầu bằng people, they , we => các chủ ngữ k rõ ng tác động thì nên chuyển các câu này sang bị động



5. CÁCH VIẾT MỞ BÀI:
- 2 câu : topic => thesis
Topic:  Câu topic phải gọi ra được keyword của câu hỏi luôn
Thesis:  discuss : problem and solution 
- Câu thesis phải mở ra được hướng khai triển trong thân bài ít nhất là ý con của 1 đoạn trong thân 
]]> 2022-07-05 13:40:04 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237283061 Chữa bài Writing. https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237285750 1. Nhiều nơi trên thế giới phải đối mặt với vấn đề bùng nổ dân số.
2. Vấn đề nghiêm trọng nhất của bùng nổ dân số là thiếu nơi ăn chốn ở.
3. Hãy thử viết tiếp tiếng việt cho câu trên sao cho đảm bảo tính tuyến tính.
4. in the world -> across the globe are facing the risk of/ overpopulation problem.
5. ways in which.
6. The lack of accomodation/ adequate acommodation.
7.  Nhà mà xây nhanh có thể không đủ chất lượng. -> House which are built too rapidly can be under qualified.
8. be able to: có thể, có năng lực.
9. impede growth of intellectual ability and skill.
10. intelligence & N-N.
11. với các câu bắt đầu bằng people, they, we khi chủ ngữ không rõ người tác động thì nên chuyển các câu này sang bị động.

12. Cách viết mở bài.
-> Câu topic phải gợi ra được key word, impact của câu hỏi luôn.
-> Thesis phải mở ra được hướng khai triển trong thân bài. (ít nhất là ý con của một đoạn trong thân.)




]]> 2022-07-05 13:44:09 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237285750 Cách viết mở bài anhnguyen151120022 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237286073 Câu topic
  •  keyword của câu hỏi
  •  impact
Câu thesis phải mở ra được hướng khai triển trong thân bài ( ít nhất là ý con của 1 đoạn trong thân)
Discuss( problem/ solution-> regarding)
Tempate introduction OPINION ( U9D)
In discussion of ...., people hold different viewpoints. Although it takes .... I firmly believe a..
Those with the means and desire to attend university will find that..

]]> 2022-07-05 13:44:40 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237286073 Cách viết mở bài https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237286076 -topic: gọi ra keyword của câu hỏi
+impact
-thesis-mở ra đc hướng khai triển trong thân bài
+problem-regarding- a shain on social
-technological advanced
+solution

]]> 2022-07-05 13:44:40 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237286076 màn hình. https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237286103 2022-07-05 13:44:43 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237286103 TEMPLATE https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237286110 In discussion of + topic, people hold different viewpoints
Although it takes 1 ý nhượng bộ 
I firmly believe....
Those ... find sth adj : cảm thấy sth làm sao đó
Not only can...it can also : k chỉ mà còn

]]> 2022-07-05 13:44:43 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237286110 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237297755 Em nghĩ gì về học online? 
Viết
-Intro:2-3 câu
-Body (5 câu)

]]> 2022-07-05 14:02:02 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237297755 BỔ SUNG https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237298352 Excessive time spent playing computer games can take a serious toll on children in various ways. I will discuss the most serious problems arising and also three ways in which the situation can be improved.

On the one hand, computer games can inhibit children’s development of intelligence and communication skills. To illustrate, children who spend many time in front of a screen instead of doing outdoor activities or reading books.As a result, they will live rather isolated lives and have a little opportunity to interact with other people. Moreover, the violence of many of the games easily make players to become aggressive and violent. Scenes of brutality from games are also linked to improper behavior. On the other hand, prolonged sitting games can have a bad effect on children’s health. It may be damage eyes and lack in self-control.  (Thiên An)

One of the most effective solution is diminishing the amount of time spending on computer games. Instead of playing this mean of recreation, children totally can engage in interesting outdoor activities. Which is benefical to their mental and physical heath. Another solution is spending time on healthy games and parent can get hold of these. Besides, to alleviate the damage of eyesight, children should play with appropriate extent. For example, we can prolong screen at maximun of 45 minutes and take a break at least 5 minites each round. And it is advisable for us to check eyes health frequently at hospital. (Phương Hà)

In conclusion, playing computer games has a range of benefits but there are also many risks attached to it. However, to balance its upside and downside, we should play it properly.]]> 2022-07-05 14:03:01 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237298352 Bài làm https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237298705 In modern time with the development of technology, learning online is gaining popularity across the globe. In my firmly believe, this mean of learning has myriad advantages for student in many aspects. Despite its upsides, learning online also has harmfull effects on learner. (Mở bài)]]> 2022-07-05 14:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237298705 chữa bài viết https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237298927 dịch câu sau:
1. Dịch:
-Nhiều nơi trên thế giới đang phải đối mặt với vấn đề bùng nổ dân số
- Vấn đề nghiêm trọng nhất là thiếu nới ăn chốn ở
Thử viết tiếp tiếng Việt cho câu trên sao cho đảm bảo tính tuyến tính
2.Tránh dùng từ in the world-> across the globle
accomodation: nơi ăn chốn ở
3.Ways in which
   solutions through which
4. enough houses-> adequate accommodation
5. nhà mà đc xây nhanh có thể ko đủ chất lg-> Houses which are built too rapidly can be under qualified badly qualified.
6. Be able to: có thể (năng lực)
-> có thể xảy ra
-> rất dễ là: apt to be
7. Khi liệt kê ý, đảm bảo các t/phần liệt kê cùng dạng từ (song song) Eg: the growth of intellectual abilty and skill.
8. People, they, we: Chuyển các câu sang bị động]]> 2022-07-05 14:04:01 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237298927 What do you think about learning online? anhnguyen151120022 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237300490 Intro : 2-3 cau (Outline)
Body( 5 ) 
Cùng với sự phát triển của công nghệ, học online trở thành một phương thức quen thuộc trong học tập nói riêng và trong cuộc sống hiện đại nói chung. Nhiều người cho rằng học online có những điểm yếu như việc dễ bị sao nhãng bị học tập nhưng quan điểm của tôi là ủng hộ việc học online. Bài luận này sẽ trình bày những lý do vì sao việc học online lợi nhiều hơn hại.
Along with the development of technology, online learning has become a familiar method in learning in particular and in modern life in general. It is believed that online learning has weaknesses such as being easily distracted, but my viewpoint is in favor of online learning. This essay will discuss the reasons why online learning's benefits outweighed its drawbacks.
Một trong những ưu điểm nổi bật nhất của việc học online là sự thuận tiện. Sự thuận tiện đối với người học thể hiện trong việc người học có thể học bất cứ đâu, bất cứ thời gian nào. Nhờ sự linh động đó, người học online dễ dàng sắp xếp thời gian học của mình, tập trung vào những công việc khác
One of the most prominent advantages of online learning is convenience. Convenience for learners is represented that learners can study anywhere, anytime. Thanks to that flexibility, online learners can easily arrange their study time and spend time focusing on other jobs which are more important.

]]> 2022-07-05 14:06:20 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237300490 Em nghĩ gì về học online? https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237302249 Intro 2-3 câu (outline)
Body: hại hoặc lợi.

Due to technological advancements, educational institutions have seen a significant change in the way that lessons are taught during the past few years. Online courses, in my opinion, offer tremendous benefits to students, but I also think there may be a distinct disadvantage if all courses were offered online.

To begin with, there is less interaction between the teacher and the students in online programs, and a larger emphasis is placed on the analytical aspect of learning. Because there is no instructional link, passive learning may be encouraged while practical learning components are ignored. Students think this style of study is less effective than classroom instruction. According to a recent survey, more pupils thought classroom education was significantly more effective than online learning. Furthermore, no one can take the position of professors who guide, inspire, and motivate students to set high goals and work assiduously to achieve them as the true value-added in education.]]> 2022-07-05 14:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237302249 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237303187 After the Covid 19 crisis, online learning is becoming more and more popular. Many students perceive this as a beneficial aid in learning while others think that they are not as much effective as classroom teaching. This essay will discuss about the advantages and disadvantages of online learning.
Studying online offers a flexible timetable. They can take the desired courses at a time that suits them. That provides a great opportunity for students to acquire new skills. In addition, online learning will save their money. A business degree in a physical university can costs over 30 millions VND in tuition, but the same degree completed online may only cost 20 millions VND ]]> 2022-07-05 14:10:35 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237303187 What do you think about learning online haminh22012005 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237303440 With the digital age, online learning is becoming more and more popular. Although many people think that this type of learning   takes away a great deal of value, I firmly believe that its convenience is more desirable than some drawbacks.
 
One of the reasons why e-learning is prevalent is the convenience. This comfort is evident in the way students can maintain their academic program without going to school. With the outbreak of Covid-19, if children stay at home and neglect their studies, they may forget their knowledge, so online learning is essential. Furthermore, students are unecessary to take public transport or drive to school, instead of that they can spend more time eating a full breakfast and resting.]]> 2022-07-05 14:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237303440 what do you think about learning online hongdoan1022 https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237303474 after the impacts of the pandemic, there is a growing interest in learning online. in my opinion, I firmly believe that desipe its cost effeciency and convenience, e-learning is still a challenge to student's concentration and interation between teacher and children.
First of all,one of the gravest problems is that an overwhelming number of student can not totally focus on the lessons. Obviously, with the attraction of recreation activities on th Internet, by no mea]]> 2022-07-05 14:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237303474 writing https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237303512 In discussion of learning online, people hold different viewpoints. I firmly believe that learning online has a range of benefits for students in their education. This new way of acquiring knowledge give students a number of perk, one among which is convenience and reasonable price. The use of smart devices to study online is help us be more active when acquiring new skills and especially, we can learn every time and place. Another value is the indepedence ]]> 2022-07-05 14:11:04 UTC https://padlet.com/huonglyams/743dvh86diydgkb/wish/2237303512