7th grade writing <3 by Jayda Dunbar https://padlet.com/26jdunbar/73xmspt72155uj05 Made with a curious mind en-us 2020-12-23 14:06:55 UTC 2021-06-18 21:04:00 UTC hello@padlet.com Informative Article 6/14/21 26ramberg https://padlet.com/26jdunbar/73xmspt72155uj05/wish/1607450085 First Star - I loved how much information you included! Your detail and word choice was really good! All the information showed the readers where they should and shouldn’t go. Travelers could look at your article and read the suggestions and warnings and choose a great place to travel to next!
Second Star - Your pictures really helped tie the whole piece together. Along with your pictures, your warnings and suggestions helped the reader to think about what place they would like to travel to. You also taught the readers the pros and cons of traveling and the pros and cons of different places.
Wish - Maybe next time you could include a little more pros of traveling. I loved reading your article! It was so good!!]]> 2021-06-15 12:54:41 UTC https://padlet.com/26jdunbar/73xmspt72155uj05/wish/1607450085 Informative article 26lskawinski https://padlet.com/26jdunbar/73xmspt72155uj05/wish/1607450840 ☆ I really enjoyed the article because I think it's very helpful to people that may not like traveling or are finding somewhere to travel. 


☆ I liked how you were talking about different languages while traveling to other countries because learning languages is always helpful. 


Wish-  When you were talking about the most rated places to travel I think it would have been a nice detail to add what makes it the most rated and things to do in that area. 
]]> 2021-06-15 12:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/26jdunbar/73xmspt72155uj05/wish/1607450840 26eprincipe https://padlet.com/26jdunbar/73xmspt72155uj05/wish/1609875249 Star- I really like the format you picked and how they are bullet points, it gave us a different way to look at it.
Star- I like how you added something about the pandemic at the end with how has traveling impacted someone’s learning, good job!
Wish- Although you did a good job of showing the good and bad things of traveling I still wish you would’ve add more benefits about Traveling.]]> 2021-06-16 12:54:32 UTC https://padlet.com/26jdunbar/73xmspt72155uj05/wish/1609875249 Information Article 26gbrown https://padlet.com/26jdunbar/73xmspt72155uj05/wish/1614961309 Star: I love how you have a picture for every sub-topic. It’s a great visual to have while reading!
Star: I really enjoyed your questions. They seemed well thought out and unique!
Wish: The only thing I noticed was that it could have used a little more organization. What I mean by this is making the format easier to read or just more exciting. One thing could add next time is a timeline. You could also add text boxes. Just little things like that, but overall, great job!]]> 2021-06-18 21:04:00 UTC https://padlet.com/26jdunbar/73xmspt72155uj05/wish/1614961309