2 - An external resource that you would use.

3 - Your ideas on how you would respond (form, audience, thesis).

External resource:
- Women during world war two: Because of the many hard labour jobs being left empty, women were needed to further involve themselves in society (not just the main care takers for their family), therefore over time due to this conflict women have been forever shaped in their role in society. Now they are not as inferior to men.
- Child soldiers are forced to join state or non-state armed groups and learn to fight/kill. They group up thinking this is ok and that then shapes them as individuals (negative result of conflict) -> can find a true story

Thesis:
- The conflicts that happen in our lives around us, is what shapes us as individuals
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Form:
- expository piece

Audience:

This could then be linked to how to that can shape a person. 

- The mindset of the women

- The use of humor by some women

- The role the vocal orchestra played in the survival

For my external link I'm using a negative way that conflict can shape the behaviours of a survivor.

This can be linked to torture victims such as Jeffrey Rignall who was captured by serial killer John Wayne Gacy, a troubled man who sexually abused and tortured at least 33 men and boys. The recounts of these victims could be used in relation to the psychological damage that is inflicted in conflicts such as this. In an account from American newspaper "The Gadsden Times," in 1980, the paper speaks of a trial of JWG, in which a number of defense witnesses were...

external resource-

how i would respond-

Surviving conflicts physically is not the same as the mental torment we must carry with us after the conflict is over

1- The surviving women are forced to watch their friends die and withstand torturous events. They face all of these conflicts, they lose loved ones, they lose the lives they knew and most of all they lose themselves all because of an individuals desire to 'win'.

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3-

Woman who survive and telling story after the conflict to encourage other woman to stand up for themselves, and to reassure that they can get through conflicting situations (in relation to the women in paradise road)

External resource:

Lieutenant-Colonel Vivian Bullwinkle, Mrs. Statham, was an Australian Army nurse during the Second World War. She was the sole survivor of the Bangka Island Massacre, when the Japanese killed 21 of her fellow nurses on Radji Beach, Bangka Island in Indonesia on 16 February 1942. She had endured the sinking of the Vyner Brooke which is the ship the Japanese shot down; she faced a lot of horrific things in the many weeks she was captured. Bullwinkle spent three and half years in captivity; she was one of just 24 of the 65 nurses who had been on the Vyner Brooke to survive the war.

Audience:

Woman of Australia, young woman

Focus on:

- Uniting together - Various coping mechanisms - Hope

Form:

Either a speech or a feature article

Of those whom encounter conflict, they not only fabricate themselves, but also others, as they can become role models for peers around them. As in times of conflict, people come to understand the true priorities of their own lives, and the mere fundamental necessities needed for survival; food, water and shelter.