https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback Your feedback is greatly appreciated en-us 2021-12-15 00:55:52 UTC 2025-12-27 07:16:43 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f638.png HaruGrade10 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948337810 T - Tell me something you thought I did well about my illustrations 

A - Ask me a question about something you want to know more about or don't understand about my illustrations (If you don't have a question, you don't need to write one)

G - Give me a piece on feedback on something you think I can improve on for my illustrations


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A - Ask me a question about something you want to know more about or don't understand about my storyline or plot (If you don't have a question, you don't need to write one)

G - Give me a piece on feedback on something you think I can improve on for my story

]]> 2021-12-15 04:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948598791 mecooper1 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948701223 G - I am not really sure what you drew behind him, you said it was a car? Maybe make it the same colour as the car in the picture.]]> 2021-12-15 06:00:16 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948701223 30201220 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948701842 I did not see the drawings 3 and 13 and I like the drawing of them]]> 2021-12-15 06:01:00 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948701842 mecooper1 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948702031 Fantastic moral that is really relatable to students. I think your book would be good for Grade 1 to Grade 5.]]> 2021-12-15 06:01:14 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948702031 30203402 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948702701 I didin't know what ba-dum is]]> 2021-12-15 06:01:53 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948702701 3020237 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948705794 Why is James scared of being a target?]]> 2021-12-15 06:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948705794 30203217 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948705945 A - So James is in grade 5, right? If that is, why are the children everywhere, and why are they learning what 1+1 is?

P.S. Sorry if I went hard you Haru! ]]> 2021-12-15 06:05:32 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948705945 3020245 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948706098 I like it because it has tiny details and that means there lots to look.]]> 2021-12-15 06:05:43 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948706098 30202720 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948706697 I think Ba dum means bad so can you just say pump pump]]> 2021-12-15 06:06:22 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948706697 30201518 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948707059 i notice that u use the american map and i understand were he live.]]> 2021-12-15 06:06:45 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948707059 30202517 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948707145 i like the drawing of the sun set and the car but next time can you bur a street light.

by Shahril]]> 2021-12-15 06:06:51 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948707145 3020268 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948707664 I not sure what is BA-DUM means🤔]]> 2021-12-15 06:07:26 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948707664 3020174 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948708150 I like how you made the story I made me understand the feelings but next time you could tell us about the feelings of the character.]]> 2021-12-15 06:08:02 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948708150 3020365 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948708400 I think you should use more word for the picture]]> 2021-12-15 06:08:19 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948708400 3020188 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948708437 T:
I like your illustration. It has many details and  it has pictures that shows what is going on in the story. The picture and the story matches.
A:
I wonder what ba-dum means. I also wonder what the picture shows (The second one from the last). Maybe you should make the car look the same car. 
G:
I think you could have more things going around James. I think it will make it more interesting.

T:
I like your story. It shows what James actually feels. It has lots of details. 
G:
Maybe you could add more words in the book.
  ]]> 2021-12-15 06:08:21 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948708437 30203217 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948709270 G - I think maybe you can make the story better by saying he is in a smaller grade.]]> 2021-12-15 06:09:19 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948709270 30203311 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948709473 why some of the illustrations was no't in the book? ]]> 2021-12-15 06:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948709473 30201413 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948710182 A section. question for u did u draw James? yes/no
Why didnt u show the one of the pictures in the storys?  yes/no 
What is BA-DUM means is it bad or a heart sound? why/what
 
G- I like how u did the book like illustration but next time write a tittle in your book and your name so everyone could see your book.

T- I think u did good at a story  but next time can u tell me what is about the BA-DUM means? when u come next time 
im sure!]]> 2021-12-15 06:10:22 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948710182 30202910 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948713770 A  I like how you share the story with us. But   maybe next time you could add more words to the pictures. 
T  I like how you draw the picture well. I can image what you are talking about. (the book)
G  I like that how you change feeling from every pictures. (sad,to HAPPY)
Thank you for sharing a amazing book for us HARU!!!!!!!!!

from Tomi.K]]> 2021-12-15 06:14:12 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948713770 30203311 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948717040 I liked it but I think you shod of write more about the character. ]]> 2021-12-15 06:17:40 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948717040 3020356 https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948724284 With BA-🤬's expressiveness and the background of the picture, it was well expressed that the main character was nervous.]]> 2021-12-15 06:25:20 UTC https://padlet.com/HaruGrade10/feedback/wish/1948724284