https://photos.app.goo.gl/aVUSiRzXnepQXMyr7

Hereby new adaptation: 

https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/e114195e-ab9d-ee11-8926-000d3a428257?sharedKey=LY-KSmN2dkG3B9Efd17XWw

Collaboration with keiron pepper: 

https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/067efcfd-743b-ee11-b8f0-000d3a41ec20?sharedKey=GTO9G9hUvkSCif-5wlAASA

I would like to re record all of the vocal parts. some are perfectly in key but not recorded with a professional home. you can hear that with the professional microphone my voice seems to hold back a lot. This is because I am not used to singing in front of others especially when my voice is maximized and in super detail its like I am completely exposed. so I tend to tense up causing shortness of breathe and a tight lump in my throat. I need to work on feeling loose around others as if i am alone. I can hear that i breathed into the microphone too much and blew strong breathe which caused a lot of sounds as if i was hitting the microphone, I need to work on my microphone techniques.

hopefully I will have saved up enough to buy my own professional mic soon, I will then practice all the time at home. For now I intend to visit the studio as much as possible to keep learning new things. Although the tone of my guitar sounds fantastic, I am a little nervous and don't strum the strings with much wrist movement, this stiff technique causes the rhythm to drag, i picked it up a bit but I need to work on consistency.

At 2:48 when i go back to playing the guitar i feel as though its out of place in its positioning, i would like to figure out what i could do in that section instead, i don't like how the guitar feels too much like an ending before the outro, it feels unnecessary and a downgrade from what played previously. It was okay to have simple guitar at the beginning because it feels like a warm up to what is about to become, but when 2:48 comes in it's calm and boring again in the middle of an exciting climax, it's too abrupt.

My most proud aspect of this song is the melodic textures. Although its a mix of studio and home recordings so it is hard to hear all of these textures well, i can still feel how uplifted i am when hearing it. I also like the structure i have created. There are no 2 parts the same, it constantly changes and i love that.

I would like the song to be longer but when i tried extending the song, the special feeling of the song was numbed down. The length is perfect. My plan is to focus on making every aspect of this song with lots of thought and attention, making it more crisp, large spacious panning and satisfactory frequencies. I want to make this piece short and sweet.

Half of this song is recorded in the studio, i added vocals and synth when I was home. 

My DAW song: 

https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/cb2a1eb

8-249d-ee11-8926-000d3a428257?sharedKey=3pzpfQOcB0efrOSfq2e-Og

The making of, acoustic: 

https://photos.app.goo.gl/b6YqfvqF3r2PDwZv6

The adapted demo recording:

https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/f42c12de-3b23-ee11-a9bb-000d3a41e8b8?sharedKey=qCSboC_TuUG98oz8mGxRqA

This song primarily focuses on melody. i really enjoyed singing this melody and i wanted to just repeat it over and over, so i created the demo after with just that melody for the vocals. i also really enjoy bending sounds so i reversed guitar and added in my experimentation with that. i also created synths out of my voice for layers, i used:

• harmonic auto-pitch in D#/ Eb Minor scale

• 'studio reverb' 100% mix, 63% size, 43% tone (sheesh)

• 'ST chorus', 100% depth, 100% speed

• drive (mid level), 604 Hz

• EQ, cut down on the high end

  
  

Collaboration for a songwriters circle with noah: 

https://photos.app.goo.gl/FB6Z2HDoeRMUtHs27

Cocoon: 

Intimate Improvisation recording: 

https://www.bandlab.com/revisions/539945dd-399d-ee11-8926-000d3a428257?sharedKey=kPIz7H-Ds0uKvbcAg1IW5w

I dream about the wrong things intimate acoustic: 

https://photos.app.goo.gl/y2YKPSZR4qUFxR8j8