SYNTHESIS MODELS by Christi Branson https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi A place to collaborate. en-us 2023-11-14 21:42:29 UTC 2023-11-16 17:20:57 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4a1.png First Development of Theme ccbranson https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2789840625 2023-11-14 22:01:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2789840625 Kaylie & Alyssa https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792655419 We liked that the first example was interesting. They did a good job explaining what their examples of acronyms were in the paper.


]]> 2023-11-16 15:45:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792655419 Lexi and Carolyn https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792656054 In model one, we like how the author explains the terminology in depth. It was clear to the reader who may not be part of the discourse community.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:45:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792656054 Bella & Yukta https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792656170 one thing we liked was that the author explains the different terminology and they fit the characteristic well.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:45:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792656170 Brodie and Skye https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792656481 Did we need at least one citation from Swales and one from an outside source?

]]> 2023-11-16 15:45:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792656481 Tyler C, Aaliya P https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792656717 One thing we liked was the organization. Another thing we liked was the vocabulary choice that was exclusive to the discourse community.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:45:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792656717 Jordan and Samantha https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792657557 One thing we liked about the first body paragraph was how they wrapped up the paragraph’s. The writer connected the last sentence to the theme of the paper.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:46:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792657557 Lexi and Carolyn https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792657636 We want to imitate the explanations from model one, and how the sources are implemented to flow nicely in each.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:46:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792657636 Tyler C, Aaliya P https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792658278 One thing we would change is in the second one the quote takes up most of the article.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:46:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792658278 Brodie and Skye https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792658319 We liked how they explained the terms in an easy, understandable way for the audience.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:47:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792658319 Kaylie & Alyssa https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792658783 The second essay was not as captivating as the first one. It was harder to stay focused while reading.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792658783 Tyler C, Aaliya P https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792659922 One thing were going to imitate in our draft is the organization of the first paragraph.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:48:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792659922 Kaylie & Alyssa https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792660144 We will use acronyms and explain them throughly in our paper, similar to the way that the first example did.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:48:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792660144 Bella & Yukta https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792661166 one thing that we would change is the informal dialect in the second article when they are explaining the ways in which they communicate with the customers and coworkers.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:48:49 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792661166 Jordan and Samantha https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792661472 Do we need both the Swales’ quote and personal quote from a personal source in each body paragraph?

]]> 2023-11-16 15:49:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792661472 Brodie and Skye https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792661784 One move we wanna imitate into our draft is making our quotes flow into our summary, outcomes, and overall essay

]]> 2023-11-16 15:49:13 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792661784 Lexi and Carolyn https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792662067 For model two, we would like to see a little less quotes and a little more explanation.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792662067 Bella & Yukta https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792664495 we want to imitate the explanations of the language used in the community.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:50:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792664495 Jordan and Samantha https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792664625 We are going to pull in our personal sources. We will start by defining which characteristic makes it a discourse community and then elaborate to how it applies to our own community.

]]> 2023-11-16 15:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792664625 Kayla and Grace https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792779680 We liked in the first one how they stated their acronyms first and then later explained in depth what they were and what they meant.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792779680 Gavyn and Shelby https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792780584 We liked how they explained each of the terms they use at their jobs. We also like how they used quotes from Swales article. They also had a good concluding sentence.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:12:15 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792780584 Kenya and Jasmine https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792780628 Both of them had good examples of the characteristics. They used their outside sources really well. In the second one, they explained very well how their discourse community emphasizes on mental health.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:12:17 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792780628 Kayla and Grace https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792781922 We would change the tone of the second one. It seemed kind of unprofessional compared to the first one.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:13:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792781922 Taniya & Breanna https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792782332 In model one, we liked how they explained what their shared vocabulary means and how it makes their discourse community. We also like the structure of their paragraph and how detailed it is.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792782332 Huda, Jayden, Tavant https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792782662 With the first model, the writer went in depth about the definitions of their acronyms that they use for the shared vocabulary portion of Swales discourse community definition.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:13:43 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792782662 Gavyn and Shelby https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792783637 They could ease their way into the information of the paragraph, with a better topic sentence.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792783637 Kayla and Grace https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792784074 We would want to imitate the first one and how they started out stating all of them and later explained them.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792784074 Gavyn and Shelby https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792785473 Explain each topic in detail. We would also use the same outline and structure as they used.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:15:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792785473 Devonte and Logan https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792785888 -We liked the amount of detail the author put into the shared vocabulary, showing a wide range of knowledge on the subject.

-In the second one we liked how the author showed that Swales' definition of a intercommunication is present within their community.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:15:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792785888 Huda Jayden Tavant https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792785934 Second model uses a lot more quotes compared to model one. The first model could use more sources and quotes other than just John Swales article.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792785934 Taniya & Breanna https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792787768 With the second model, we believe that they should add more length and descriptions about how mechanism for intercommunication is used in their community.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792787768 Huda Jayden Tavant https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792787981 How in depth the first model is, including more information like that into our drafts

]]> 2023-11-16 17:17:25 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792787981 Kenya and Jasmine https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792788621 Making sure we use the right resources, and having good explanations for them. Also having an explanation on why the certain topic is important for that discourse community.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:17:55 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792788621 Devonte and Logan https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792789546 In the first model, something we would change is connecting the segment more to Swales' definitions than just shared vocab.


]]> 2023-11-16 17:18:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792789546 Kenya and Jasmine https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792790807 For the second one, they could use more outside sources other than Swales.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:19:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792790807 Taniya & Breanna https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792792487 We would like to incorporate the deatils that model one used and also use enough references that supports the themes.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:20:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792792487 Logan and Devonte https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792793168 One thing we are using in our drafts would be usage of citiations and how they incorporate them into the paragraphs.

]]> 2023-11-16 17:21:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ccbranson/6zm1st8wl0c94xwi/wish/2792793168