.punctuation

.correction

.scary

.Happy ending

.scary ending

Just so you guys know I’m am working with Brandon

At the start of the movie some is CREEPING IN THE WOODS WAITING

name: ⬇️

BETRAYAL

.scary twist

.weird creatures/monsters/scary things

- nouns

- It has good fiction/information

- verbs

- Exiting characters/plot twists

- capital letters

- full stops

- paragraphs

- a bit scary

- Interesting plot twists

- funny

(Compound words

(Strong words

(Exclamation words

(Short paragraph

-good characters

-a bit scary

-a problem

-the problem must be solved

-must not be boring

-humour

-not hard to read

-full stop

-and good and funny ideas

-and the ending must be good

-good and bad people

-maybe some love 😍😍😍😍😜

.creative

.it’s interesting

.entertaining

.capital letters

.full stops

.make sense

.don’t use words you don’t know

.don’t do super long sentences

.not to many characters

.personification

.simple sentences

.compound and complex sentences

.fanboys

.punctuation

.similes

.unique characters

.funny story

.paragraphs

.characteristics

- ! Marks

-adjectives

-Paragraphs

-creative writing

-Creative ending

-Interesting middle beginning and ending

- Nouns

-creative ideas

-fanboys

Question mark

! mark

spelling correctly

Comma

Capital letter

Scary

Funny twist

Funny

Sad ending

Entertaining

. Funny writing

. Adjectives

. Paragraphs

. Verbs

. Nouns

. Creative writing

. Creative ideas

. Creative editing

. Fanboys

Lot’s of punctuation.

Some adjectives.

Give the story some humour.

Don’t use super long words cause there’s no reason to put long words on your story if they mean the same thing.

Capital letters and full stops of course.

A twist at the end or a creative ending.

Personification metaphors.

.adjective

.use interesting words

.alliteration

.metaphor

.entertaining

.similes

.free verse

.verbs

.punctuation

.synonym

.hyperbole

.humorous

.character

.complex sentences

.compound and simple sentences

. Adjectives

. Verbs

. Creative characters

. Paragraphs

. Crazy

. Funny

. Creative writing

. Capital letters at the start of a sentence

. Full stop at the end of a sentence

. Fanboys

. Simple sentences

Personification

Simple sentences

Compound and complex sentences

Fanboys

Punctuation

Similes

Unique characters

Interesting ending

Funny story

Paragraphs

Scary

Verbs

Synonyms

Nouns

Spelling correctly

Adverbs

• punctuation

• Full stops

• Capital letters

• Not hard to read

• Compound Words

• Fanboys

• Good and funny ideas

• Spelling correctly

-Add personification

-Add alliteration

-Use interesting words

- Use similes

-Onomatopoeia

-Metaphor

-Repetition

-Hyperbole

-Entertaining

-Adjectives

-Humour

-Punctuation

-Complex sentences

-Conjunctions

(Adjectives

(Compound words

(Strong words

(Exclamation marks

(Short paragraphs

• Punctuation

• Full stops

• Capital letters

• Compound words

• Fanboy

• Short sentences to make a paragraph

• Spelling correctly

Punctuation

Personification

Entertaining

Plot twist

Capital letters

.funny

.understandable

.question mark

.entertaining

.scary

.not to confusing

.unpredictable

.inspiring

.appropriate

.interesting characters

Entertaining story

Some adverbs

Exciting parts

Funny

Lots of interesting and funny words

Must have a beginning middle and end

Creative

Ending must have a solution

Shocking plot twists

Scary

Interesting

.Verbs

. punctuation

. adjectives

. Start, middle and end

.A problem and a solution

. entertainment making connections with the reader

. twists

Betrayal

Scary ending 🫨😱

Something creeping in the woods😰

Jump Scare😱

Loud screams 😱

Weird creatures 👽

Funny ending 😂

Biggest scary twist😱

-punctuation

-compound

-speech marks

-funny

-adjective

-lots of punctuation

-adjectives, adverbs, verbs, and nouns

-give the story some humour

-don’t use super long words and sentences

-capital letters and full stops

- a twist at the end or a creative ending

-paragraphs

-fanboys

-must be spelled correctly

. 4-5 Characters

. A hilarious problem

. Punctuation

. Personification

. Similes and metaphors

. Simple, compound, complex sentences

. Scary affects

. A search and mystery involved

. Good. Characters.

. Punctuation.

. Conjunction.

. Adjectives.

. A bit scary and a bit funny.

. Has to have a start middle and end.

. Entertainment.

. Twist.

The writer Added lots of adjectives describing each word:eg.eerie shadows

Writing in first person to make the reader feel or see in there head what’s going on .

The writer wrote Interesting (specific)words to make the story more feelable:eg.i discovered a mysterious and ancient looking map tucked away in the hollow of an old oak tree.

Words and sentences i liked.

Overwhelmed by curiosity, I decided to follow the map. My heart was pounding in my chest

like a trapped bird, and I couldn't help but glance around nervously, feeling as though the

wind was watching my every move. 

This one is my favourite sentence.

Overwhelmed by curiosity, I decided to follow the map. My heart was pounding in my chest

like a trapped bird, and I couldn't help but glance around nervously, feeling as though the wind was watching my every move….

My second most liked one……

Wind was watching my move

first person makes a connection with the reader

Speak emotion

Speak in first person

Specific word choice

1 person at 1 time in 1 moment 

Speak emotion

Personification

Different types of sentences

Time connectives ( similes )

Use clues

Examples

The map seemed to hold secrets, and the wind had suddenly

picked up, as if whispering a warning I couldn't quite understand.

As I entered a dense forest, the atmosphere changed dramatically.

*strong words

*adjectives

*interesting storyline

-you need to get to the good part first

-you need to make it first person

-the reader may not be bord

-plot twists

-need only one problem

-need the mood to Mach the shrouding

-needs a main character

- the main character need to be brave to save

Metaphor

Similes

Hard words

Good sentences

complex sentences

Simple sentences

Compound sentences

Hyperbole

Modality words

Good endings

Start middle end

Adjectives repetition

Entertained

Plot twist

Funny

Describing the words

Describing the sounds

Make the reader feel like he’s in the story

Circular ending

Make the reader read more

Similes

Otmataphia

Good sentences

Having the reader feel the mood

The couler like bloody red

Specific words

Detail

Overcoming fears

Strong and intense words

Straight to the complication

No change of setting

.strong words

.adjectives

.similes

.compound sentences

.complex sentences

lots of good describing words

readable and understanding story

first person

made it straight to the point

a interesting setting

one character one thing one moment

spell correctly

4 paragraphs

simple sentences

Cut like a knife through the water.

Sipher.

Resilience

Similes

Good sentences

Funny

Cryptic

Conclusion

Problem

.first person mode

. describe the characters, emotions.

. personification.

. Similes.

• verbs

• full stops

• tension

• describing words

• characters mood

• Plot twist

The wind whispered through the leaves, carrying a mournful song that sent shivers down my spine.

Adjectives:eg

 dense forest, 

red "X"

 old oak tree.

____________

First person so the character can feel(mood) or see what’s going in there head

Interesting word’s

Similes

- specific detail

- Mood

- Personification 

- Similes 

- Show the audience not tell

- adjectives

- high level word

- use clues

.scary

.explanative

.make HORROR

name:3008

.commas

.entertaining

.good ending

• Need high modality & intense sentences.

• 1st person

• 1 thing happening in 1 moment.

• 1 main character

• Mood

.a bit funny and scary

.good words

. Twists

. Has to be spelled correctly

. Plot twist

.Complex sentences

.Fan boys

.interesting words

. The main character has to solve the problem

. Make it look interesting

*nouns

*Make the reader feel like they’re in the story

* describe the feeling and not just saying the emotions

* capital letters

*fulls top At the end of a sentence

*short sentences

* add a twist to the story

The main character 1 moment one thing

Commas

Capital letters

Funny stuff

entertain

Another dimension

Use personification and metaphors

Engage the reader

Make it FUNNY!

Use idioms

Make the complication scary

1. It needs a problem / plot twist

2. It needs to make the readers feel something

3. It can’t have to many characters

Use punctuation

Add lots of mystery

Use idioms

Add adjectives and metaphors

Make it funny