https://padlet.com/vandykek/6yxts8w3fuho • Use your name to identify yourself. • Be polite, friendly, and encouraging. • Feel free to ask a question to the author. • If you have a suggestion, don’t be rude about it; give constructive (helpful) feedback. • Aim for correct spelling, punctuation, and grammar. en-us 2017-04-13 02:38:44 UTC 2017-05-22 15:01:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/vandykek/6yxts8w3fuho/wish/167360694 I like how you said when it happened you sounded like a dying hippopotamus. I didn't really get the part where you talked about a sandwich. I like how you described what it looked like it was very good details like it looked slimy and and chunky. I like how you put sounds like [dunn dun dunnnn] it made it very unique! I like your beginning and how you said it will be very sickening it really ties into your story! ]]> 2017-04-20 18:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/6yxts8w3fuho/wish/167360694 https://padlet.com/vandykek/6yxts8w3fuho/wish/167361510 I like how you talked the entire day and how you described very small details such as the chandelier on the mini bathroom and also how the puke was tan,slimy and chunky.But I'm still wondering why you described what a hippo sounded like but not what you felt when you thought you were woing to go CABOOOOOOOM.]]> 2017-04-20 19:03:38 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/6yxts8w3fuho/wish/167361510 https://padlet.com/vandykek/6yxts8w3fuho/wish/167362377 I fixed my error you pointed out. Refresh your page and look at my writing again.]]> 2017-04-20 19:07:02 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/6yxts8w3fuho/wish/167362377 https://padlet.com/vandykek/6yxts8w3fuho/wish/173165696 In the chapter animals I really liked how you used your own flare! I liked how you categorized your animals into land animals and water animals! I think you did a very good job on your book! It was amazing ]]> 2017-05-22 14:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/vandykek/6yxts8w3fuho/wish/173165696