"Bring the Line to Life" by https://padlet.com/atoni2/6yghj4z1hnt5mvmt en-us 2025-04-17 21:46:37 UTC 2025-04-17 22:19:51 UTC hello@padlet.com Original lines atoni2 https://padlet.com/atoni2/6yghj4z1hnt5mvmt/wish/3414346065 Bent double, like old beggars under sacks,

Knock-kneed, coughing like hags, we cursed through sludge,

 

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Our knees were shaking, we were coughing like old sick witches

And we swore as we dragged ourselves through the thick mud

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