CEM223-2016-G2 by Zhiwen Luo https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r Group presentation en-us 2016-11-03 23:03:03 UTC 2016-11-04 10:45:38 UTC hello@padlet.com Good logic and strcutre zhwenluo https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322450 2016-11-04 10:35:11 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322450 maybe you can use some images to show the wetland and beijing zhwenluo https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322665 2016-11-04 10:36:49 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322665 A lot of text, not enough images to show the examples https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322791 2016-11-04 10:37:48 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322791 Not clear how the UCU is derived zhwenluo https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322860 2016-11-04 10:38:19 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322860 Long content, you should consider the time-presentation  https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322950 2016-11-04 10:38:46 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322950 maybe you can give some brief introduction instead of those long sentences loveygn https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322990 2016-11-04 10:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135322990 https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135323187 brief conclusion might be better， there is too much information on each slide]]> 2016-11-04 10:39:58 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135323187 you can use some charts or graphs to show your results. https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135323379 2016-11-04 10:41:25 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135323379 how the shape of wetland effect environment? https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135323399 2016-11-04 10:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135323399 892492355 https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135323912 You can highlight some words to make it easier to be understood. ]]> 2016-11-04 10:44:43 UTC https://padlet.com/zhwenluo/6y38n6oors3r/wish/135323912