Writing Conference Padlet by Del Calvo, Andrew O https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca en-us 2022-07-08 14:12:58 UTC 2022-07-11 23:39:40 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241279727 I thought she followed the structural prompts well and was able to outline her argument well with strong topic sentences and solid reasoning. She was able to put herself into the narrative and appreciate the perspectives of the "characters" and had clearly undergone a cultural and intellectual journey while reading this and creating her response.]]> 2022-07-11 22:14:40 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241279727 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241280193 You've obviously put a lot of emotional labour into this assignment and I want to share with you the impact that your writing had on me]]> 2022-07-11 22:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241280193 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241280685 Jessica used relevant evidence throughout her essay and was able to connect each piece of evidence back to her argument. Jessica also did a good job of understanding the power dynamic between Abina and the Important Man. ]]> 2022-07-11 22:18:13 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241280685 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241280762 The feedback I would provide is: Think back to the story and explain to your reader who were the Important Men? Why were they important to Abina? How did they lie? ]]> 2022-07-11 22:18:29 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241280762 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241281233 Would inform Jessica to challenge her claim more. Get more in depth with Abina, show the reader the struggles a slave or anyone powerless can go through. So we can understand why she ran away. 
She used clear evidence throughout her essay on being powerles, also supported her claims well with quotes from the text. 
Get more in depth with the question, Has society always been this way? Does money and power run our society? 



]]> 2022-07-11 22:20:13 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241281233 Feedback https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241281310 I believe Jessica did a great job following the guidelines. I was able to fully follow the structure of her response. Not finished -Sean]]> 2022-07-11 22:20:28 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241281310 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241281339  I liked the connection she made in conclusion. Also, how she connected evidence to her argument. ]]> 2022-07-11 22:20:36 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241281339 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241284860 It's only small, but AdC went into depth about the experience of reading and reflecting on the book

]]> 2022-07-11 22:32:41 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241284860 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241285056 AdC didn't dedicate a lot of time to discussing structure or sequencing of ideas]]> 2022-07-11 22:33:23 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241285056 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241285357 It's like a mini version of a thesis defence ]]> 2022-07-11 22:34:32 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241285357 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241285613 Encouraged to think critically (civil inquiry) as opposed to only recalling facts. Focus on the larger question being asked and use the details to support it but not shift focus to the details ]]> 2022-07-11 22:35:32 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241285613 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241285765 Had a focus on analysis - deepen critical thinking]]> 2022-07-11 22:36:04 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241285765 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241286017 more clearly defining the task, she didn't really attack it correctly ]]> 2022-07-11 22:37:07 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241286017 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241286090 Putting the student in the proper mindset what type of paper she is writing. ]]> 2022-07-11 22:37:27 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241286090 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241306746 I like the idea of rewarding bringing concepts and idioms from other languages and dialects and using them as analytic or communicative tools]]> 2022-07-11 23:35:20 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241306746 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307066 Language is the mechanics of a statement or claim. It's important but not as important as the argument or 'big idea'. I wouldn't have it be a part of my rubric.]]> 2022-07-11 23:36:04 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307066 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307075 Be as comfortable as possible, Clear ideas, and try to use vocabulary from the class that we discussed.]]> 2022-07-11 23:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307075 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307171 To be more flexible with the students regarding grammar and give them feedback to make them aware of what they have to work on. ]]> 2022-07-11 23:36:19 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307171 Andy's thoughts delcalvo https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307412 I'm wondering more about how much of standardized tests actually focus on structure/ grammar and how much on substance. I feel like there's a notion that white mainstream english is necessary to do well on the exam, but it seems like that doesn't necessarily bear out in the rubric. I'm curious if this is the case across. Maybe focussing on ideas actually is way more aligned? ]]> 2022-07-11 23:36:52 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307412 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307700 Make sure that the students know that their grade will hinge on the content of their work and effectiveness of their argument, so they don't have to obsess over little mistakes.]]> 2022-07-11 23:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241307700 https://padlet.com/delcalvo/6viyw1qcfwnomvca/wish/2241308077 To be more understanding, make sure students have clear insight. Give good feedback. 
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