Grade 6 Unit 8 by ES62 21T

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group 6

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Yunchan
Hyungyu

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Myoungjun
Siwoo

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My Happiest Experience

kish21t162 — 2021-11-23 03:00:29 UTC

I have had many experiences, however, my happiest experience is when I went to Disneyworld . It was in the early fall and I was 6 years old at that time. We had to drive for 18 hours to get there!

While we were driving, we stopped at a very cool natural limestone cave in Tennessee. It is called Mammoth Cave. We explored the cave and bought souvenirs. We also took plenty of pictures and then continued driving.

After driving for a few more hours, we reached our hotel. It was very big and inside the Disney park.

Finally, we went to the park, rode all the amazing rides, watched some shows, and had an excellent day.

I would love to go again as an adult!

My happiest moment (Joung Seong Yeon)

kish21s6425 — 2021-11-23 03:00:54 UTC

I have had many experiences. However, my happiest experience is when We went to the hotel with my whole family. It was in the early fall and I was 10 years old at that time. We had to fly in a plane for 1 day to get there!

While we were flying in the plane, we went the hotel called the Flamingo. We went the hotel and we started to swim in the swimming pool. We took a picture there.

After swimming, We went to a buffet. We ate a lot of dishes at there. We ate some fruit, meat, bread and juice.

Finally, we took a walk. The landscape is very pretty and wonderful. We watched the landscape for 15 minutes.

I would love to go again as an adult!!

My happiest Experience(DO NOT ERASE) soyun

deleteduser9611 — 2021-11-23 03:09:40 UTC

I have had many experiences,however, my happiest experience is when I visited Lotte World. It was in the early fall and I was 10 years old at the time. We got to play for 8 hours in the theme park. 

While we were driving, it was interesting.
After driving for a few more minutes, we arrived at the Lotte World. It was very big  inside the Lotte World.

Finally, we went to the park, rode all the amazing rides, ate some foods, and had an excellent day.

I would love to go again next year.

SOYUN

My Happiest Moment.

kish21s6426 — 2021-11-23 03:12:03 UTC

The happiest moment in my life was when I entered school.
It happened when I was seven. When I came home after graduate kindergarten, my parents told me I can go to school. Actually, i was expect to go to school because my sister enter a school when I was two, so I always envy her. Also, mt parents give me some present so I was happy. When I go to school, I met my friend. Then, we take classes and ate lunch. When I came home, I was so happy because I can go school everyday.
Today, we can't go school so I'm so sad. I want to go to the school again!
-Siwoo-

The happiest moment in my life

kish21s6403 — 2021-11-23 03:15:35 UTC

3 years ago, I got my first cellphone. When I got a new cellphone, I was playing with my brother in my home. My mom bought my new cellphone, so I was very happy. After 1 year, I bought a cellphone. Now I changed cellphone twice. One day, my mother got a new cellphone for my father. This was my happiest moment in my life I thank my parents for the nice gift______________________________________________seonghyeon03

My Scariest Experience(jooseong)

kish21s6406 — 2021-11-23 03:17:28 UTC

The scariest moment in my life was when my left arm was broken.It happend when I was in grade 4. I was doing spin jumping in taekwondo class when my feet slipped. I tried to balance my self, but I ended up pressing my left hand on the floor too hard. At first my left arm couldn't feel anything. My taekwondo teacher came to me and saw my arm. He put the bandage on it and I felt pain. My taekwondo teacher drove his car and took me to the emergency room. The doctor put on a wood stick brace and took an X-ray. 12hours later I went to Korea for surgery. The next day I was given anesthesia and they operated on my left arm. I stayed in Korea for 2 months. My whole family was worried,but after seeing my left arm was healthy,they were relieved. I learned my lesson and have been careful with my left arm ever since.

My Most exciting Moment(yeonhee)

kish21s6424 — 2021-11-25 08:17:02 UTC

I have many exciting experiences, however, my most excited moment is when I succeed at skateboard skills.It was in November, eleventh twenty-twenty one.

At that time, my mom, my sister, and I went go outside to exercise. While, mom and sister walked outside, I practiced the skateboard skill called "Olie". Olie is the basic skill of skateboard, and I practice once a two days. After practiced for about 30 minutes, I succeed at the the Olie!

Unfortunately, I never succeed the Olie after I succeed the Olie the first time.

(Would you like to try again? How often will you practice? Why do you want to become good at these skills?)

My happiest moment (MIN GYU)

kish21s6416 — 2021-11-25 08:18:13 UTC

The happiest moment in my life was when I traveled in ~~the~~ Thailand. It happened two years ago wen I was 11. My family and I traveled in Thailand. While my parents ., I wore swimming suit. After swimming for 1 hour 30 minutes, I suddenly took a shower. Pretty soon, we ate dinner at 6:49. On next day, we went to elephant park.
We rode a big elephant and we took a photo.
I hope to travel Thailand again next time.

My Funny Experience (Jimin)

2021-11-26 04:27:54 UTC

I have many funny experiences, however,my most funny moment is when I'm 10 years old. I went on a trip with my family. When I arrived, I went to the bathroom. I stepped on poop in the bathroom and my family laughed at me and I washed my slippers .And I put on my swimsuit and left the house .There was a snake at the door.I went to the pool because I was scared. The weather was hot But I lost my way home but than I find the way home in 10 minutes.

It is my best experience !

Being A Student

Being a student is better than being an parents for many reasons.

the happiest moment in my life NO NAME

2021-11-30 02:43:41 UTC

I received my cell phone four years ago, but I couldn't play games because my cell phone was not good. It's been a year and two years. I arrived home without thinking. At that time, the cell phone was in my dad's hand.I felt really good.And I gave chocolate to my dad as a gift

My scariest moment:hye jin

kish21s6423 — 2021-11-30 02:45:24 UTC

The scariest moment in my life was when I was alone after watching a horror movie. It happened three years ago I was ten. My cousin and I went to my grandmother's house. While my grandmother ____( past tense) cooking ~~for~~ food, ____ cousin and I decided to watch ___ horror movie. After watching for 1 hour ,cosin and grandmother go to the market. I didn't go. Pretty soon, I was very scared. About 50 minutes +later, they come back from the market. When they go back, My grandmother scolded us for watching a horror movie. I learned not to be alone at home after watching a horror movie.

My happiest day

sabnbmbsda — 2021-11-30 02:50:06 UTC

I have had many experiences, however, my happiest experiences is go to disney land to hong kong.
I go to disney land i am 9 years old. I go to disney land i do a some many things. First i do ride a roller coaster. Second i take a some photos. Third buy a mable toys. Finally i see a parade is amazing. I like this draft because can think of the past.-beom gi-

my happy day(seunglee) Capitalize title

kish21s6428 — 2021-11-30 02:52:43 UTC

I have had many experiences, however, my happiest experience is when I went to a camping . It was in the early fall and I was 10 years old at that time. We had to get a video game study hours to get there!? (unclear)

While we were driving, we stopped at a very cool natural cave in a Hanoi.. It is called Cave. We explored the cave and bought souvenirs. We also took a fish of pictures and then continued see

After sawing for a few more hours, we reached our hotel. It was very big and ~~inside the swimming pool~~ +had a swimming pool inside.

Finally, we went to the pool, rode all the amazing rides, watched somewater and had an excellent day.

I would love to go again as an adult!

the happiest moment in my life

2021-11-30 02:54:53 UTC

(Intro needed) I received my cell phone four years ago, but I couldn't play games because my cell phone was not good. It's been one or two years. I arrived home without thinking. At that time, the cell phone was in my dad's hand.I felt really good.And I gave chocolate to my dad as a gift! -----------------------------------------------myoungjun
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The happiest moment(hyungyu)

kish21s6418 — 2021-11-30 15:43:20 UTC

The happiest moment in my life was when i traveled the thailland in pataya.It happened 3years ago when i was 10.
My family traveled in thailand in pataya.I swam in tahiland in patya and we go to night market and we eat delicious food.And we take a boat and we go monkey island and we do flshing and do snorkeling it was veryvery fun.----------------------------------------------hyungyu

My Scariest Exerience

kish21s6410 — 2021-12-02 15:20:04 UTC

My scariest moment in my life was when I stayed home alone.
It happend when I was six years old.
I sleep at atfernooon and woke up at 7 o'clock.
But something strange + happened.
It was very quiet.
Atfer I looked around,I knew I +had stayed at home alone.
I say "Mom? Are you listen____?"
But there was no answers.
I almost +got scared scary and cried.
Mom didn't answer the phone and Dad came home quickly.
If it is happen_ again now,I will not ~~scary~~ +be scared and play game_.
-------------gyumin 10 ------------

my happiest moment(jua)

kish21s6415 — 2021-12-10 02:49:45 UTC

My most exciting experience is walking from my house to Lotte Department Store.

There was also a park halfway through walking with my dad. We took a break there.

It was really fun. It was a little hard when I think back to that time, but it was a really good experience for me.

I want to visit again someday!