https://padlet.com/24sngu/6uj8lehfnyhg PMA Positive Mental Attitude en-us 2018-12-05 15:18:43 UTC 2019-03-27 13:23:13 UTC hello@padlet.com 24khunter https://padlet.com/24sngu/6uj8lehfnyhg/wish/312260933 I like how in the start of your story you used show not tell and showed you didn't know where you were. I think you could of used show not tell a little bit more. Like you could of described the setting a little better than you did.  You should also make sure you re-read your story because you have some spelling errors. Other than that this was a good story. ]]> 2018-12-07 15:12:59 UTC https://padlet.com/24sngu/6uj8lehfnyhg/wish/312260933