https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf Direction: Write the title of the story and your comments under the appropriate menu below. en-us 2021-10-15 17:47:17 UTC 2021-10-18 20:25:21 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1820168487 I like the detail descriptions that you provided. I could really picture the story in my mind. ]]> 2021-10-15 17:48:16 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1820168487 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824665146 i like how it was worded, and the detail.]]> 2021-10-18 16:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824665146 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824673772 I like all the dialogue and its funny and cute ]]> 2021-10-18 16:29:07 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824673772 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824676845 The description in the beggining is really good! I could paint a picture in my mind very well!]]> 2021-10-18 16:30:13 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824676845 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824677232 i like how jayli put the whole story into character by how she changed different parts and kept some parts and the story still came out good with all the new stuff she put]]> 2021-10-18 16:30:22 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824677232 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824677612 I really like the way that you showed and painted a good picture in people brains with the good discriptions ]]> 2021-10-18 16:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824677612 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824684355 I love the cute pictures and the diolouge]]> 2021-10-18 16:33:09 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824684355 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824684533 I liked how the curse changed I thought it was more interesting]]> 2021-10-18 16:33:14 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824684533 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824684800 I liked the way you put the pictures to match up the story and how well the punctuation was]]> 2021-10-18 16:33:20 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824684800 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824685965 I really liked that she lost her glove and not the slipper. I thought it was cute at the end.]]> 2021-10-18 16:33:47 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824685965 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824686530 I like how the wolf made a plane to billed a tool that can freeze granny. That part was really funny.]]> 2021-10-18 16:34:01 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824686530 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824686549 i really like how she changed the whole story and made it into her own and gave us a good discription on what was happening ]]> 2021-10-18 16:34:02 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824686549 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824689087 I like the way that you made a troll seem like The good guy when trolls are normally pictured as evil]]> 2021-10-18 16:35:02 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824689087 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824690988 Your choice of wording is so great! It really really adds emotion to the story!]]> 2021-10-18 16:35:47 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824690988 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824694684 i like how the whole story came into place by how it took a turn from him lying and it changing ]]> 2021-10-18 16:36:28 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824694684 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824696489 I think the story was very cute]]> 2021-10-18 16:36:42 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824696489 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824697058 i liked how detailed the characters emotions were and how you could always know how they feel

]]> 2021-10-18 16:36:55 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824697058 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824697763 It was very creative and funny ]]> 2021-10-18 16:37:11 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824697763 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824698999 I like how you provided good setting details. I also like how the story also had good dialogue.]]> 2021-10-18 16:37:37 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824698999 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824700060 it was amazing. i loved the way it was worded and the pictures.]]> 2021-10-18 16:37:55 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824700060 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824702385 I love the twist at the end! I wasn´t expecting it at all! It made me want to read it again!]]> 2021-10-18 16:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824702385 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824704799 I think the story was very cute and funny]]> 2021-10-18 16:39:42 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824704799 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824705448 it was amazing how the pictures were reused from the original Cinderella. and the wording was also great]]> 2021-10-18 16:39:57 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824705448 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824705657 I really liked that you gave so much detail at the beginning. It really hooked me.]]> 2021-10-18 16:40:03 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824705657 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824706313 I really liked how the wolf was putting so much emotion into his machine and the way he danced after was great too]]> 2021-10-18 16:40:22 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824706313 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824706552 I like how you put onomotanpias in your story and how there is a lot of dialogue ]]> 2021-10-18 16:40:28 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824706552 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824707923 I like the way the roles were reversed and the detail that was put into the story]]> 2021-10-18 16:40:44 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824707923 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824712915 I really liked the detail you gave the reader, it was very descriptive.]]> 2021-10-18 16:41:22 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824712915 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824715063 i like how he put all the emotions the characters had by like when they where mad he would show it and say it in harder words then normal mad words]]> 2021-10-18 16:41:37 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824715063 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824716521  i liked the dialogue because you can always know who is saying what ]]> 2021-10-18 16:42:00 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824716521 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824717052 I liked the pictures and how it was worded ]]> 2021-10-18 16:42:11 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824717052 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824717766 I like how the story flows very nicely. Another thing I like about the story is that you used onomatopoeia which made the story easier the imagine. ]]> 2021-10-18 16:42:28 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824717766 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824718803 I like how you put dialouge on all most every slide ]]> 2021-10-18 16:42:51 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824718803 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824720040 The pictures went with the story and event]]> 2021-10-18 16:43:18 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824720040 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824720834 I thought it was very creative and I think that they made it better then the original story. ]]> 2021-10-18 16:43:33 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824720834 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824720950 it was a good story and it shows dedication how she went so far to meet the prince

]]> 2021-10-18 16:43:35 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824720950 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824721069 I love the way your story transitions so nicely! And the description of the setting is so clear!]]> 2021-10-18 16:43:38 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824721069 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824723046 I love how it was just a whole pretend game at the end!]]> 2021-10-18 16:44:10 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824723046 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824723169 I really liked the story you have created here. For example, how the queen guessed the name correctly but he lied. I really wasn´t expecting that! I thought he was gonna admit and the queen would have her child back.]]> 2021-10-18 16:44:13 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824723169 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824726640 I liked the way that he made the fox determined and how he persevered]]> 2021-10-18 16:45:32 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824726640 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824726746 I like how the picture represent the story and all of the dialogue you put in your story]]> 2021-10-18 16:45:35 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824726746 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824727715 i like how you changed the bears into elves and how Goldie locks needed gold ]]> 2021-10-18 16:45:53 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824727715 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824731082 I like that all the pictures match the text it was a very good story]]> 2021-10-18 16:47:10 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824731082 2838921 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824733405 I liked that it was simple but good. I don´t know what it means when it says the instead of bears there are locks but it´s interesting. ]]> 2021-10-18 16:48:05 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824733405 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824735091 i like how he changed up the story and turned it all around and how he added a lot of information about it and i could easily picture it all]]> 2021-10-18 16:48:42 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824735091 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824735247 My favorite part was in the river! The way you wrote the setting gave me a visual picture in my mind!]]> 2021-10-18 16:48:45 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824735247 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824738128 I liked how the story went into a sad mood going up into a happy mood the more you read]]> 2021-10-18 16:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824738128 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824739956 I really like how you used CREEK at the beginning it really hooked me to your story.]]> 2021-10-18 16:50:33 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824739956 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824741258 I really like the pea and me because it had a really good ending to it and I just want to read it again]]> 2021-10-18 16:50:58 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824741258 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824746059 Adding Hansel and Gretel at the end was such a good idea! I would have never thought of that!]]> 2021-10-18 16:52:48 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824746059 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824747615 it was a good story and there were good twists and turns]]> 2021-10-18 16:53:23 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824747615 https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824747955 i liked that it was funny and i liked how the pictures matched the story ]]> 2021-10-18 16:53:32 UTC https://padlet.com/acfleming/6u2io9648yd9ftdf/wish/1824747955