https://padlet.com/priscilamartinez1105/6tght9xq7oxd Jasmine Clark, Matteo Garza, Blanca Hernandez, Priscila Martinez en-us 2018-10-31 17:30:52 UTC 2018-10-31 17:56:23 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Pizza.png priscilamartinez1105 https://padlet.com/priscilamartinez1105/6tght9xq7oxd/wish/299104058 -The description of where Billy Weave is, like cut to the point and skip all the unnecessary stuff.
-state an era instead of being vague semi-description
-avoid fluff when stating adjectives that describe the city
-description of how the lady looks, like how she is dressed and her facial expressions in responses to his questions
-change her sign to make it more appealing. 
-it wouldn't change the meaning of the story because it would just get to the point instead of adding excess fluff]]> 2018-10-31 17:36:19 UTC https://padlet.com/priscilamartinez1105/6tght9xq7oxd/wish/299104058