On our way to become great writers by Bea Collado Aliena https://padlet.com/bea_collado_al/6sb578yydczknhbl "Writers aren't people exactly. Or, if they're any good, they're a whole lot of people trying so hard to be one person". - F.Scott Fitzgerald en-us 2022-05-16 14:09:35 UTC 2022-05-20 14:49:55 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/270d.png This is an interactive activity which will help you revise some terms and group them into the correct category. bea_collado_al https://padlet.com/bea_collado_al/6sb578yydczknhbl/wish/2186220978 Grouping by categories]]> 2022-05-16 18:19:01 UTC https://padlet.com/bea_collado_al/6sb578yydczknhbl/wish/2186220978 EXAMPLE OF FIRST DRAFT: THE END OF THE WORLD bea_collado_al https://padlet.com/bea_collado_al/6sb578yydczknhbl/wish/2189370464 Last Monday, my famili and I were sleeping, when something strange happened to us. We hearded a laud noise, but we thought it was a flash of ligting. So, we continuing sleeping. However, the sound was louder and louder. 
The next morning, we woke up and left home. It was a dark and stormy day. When i was riding her bike, I saw something moving. I started feling nervus and frightened. Then, I ran towards my dad to tell what I had seen, but he does not pay atention to the story. 
Some minutes later, the thing appearead again and they noticed it was an ovni.  We think it was the end of the world, hahahaha.

]]> 2022-05-18 12:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/bea_collado_al/6sb578yydczknhbl/wish/2189370464 EXAMPLE OF A CLASSMATE'S REVISION OF THE DRAFT bea_collado_al https://padlet.com/bea_collado_al/6sb578yydczknhbl/wish/2192845707 2022-05-20 11:08:15 UTC https://padlet.com/bea_collado_al/6sb578yydczknhbl/wish/2192845707 EXAMPLE OF FINAL VERSION OF TEXT: THE END OF THE WORLD bea_collado_al https://padlet.com/bea_collado_al/6sb578yydczknhbl/wish/2193087401 Last Monday, my family and I were sleeping, when something strange  happened to us. We heard a loud
 noise, but we thought it was a flash of lightning. So, we continued sleeping. However, the sound was louder and 
louder.  
The next morning, we woke up and  left home. It was a dark and stormy  day. While I was riding my bike, I saw something moving. I started feeling  nervous and frightened. Then, I ran towards my dad to tell what I had seen, but he did not pay attention to the story. Some minutes later, the thing appearead  again and we noticed it was a UFO.
 We thought it was the end of the world, hahahaha.
 
 
 
 
 
 
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