https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu Pick at least one or two pitches to listen to and give feeback about their inquiry question and what else you would like to know. Please leave your name and pitch you are giving feedback to. en-us 2018-02-13 00:15:56 UTC 2026-03-18 01:37:36 UTC hello@padlet.com ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230872511 2018-02-13 00:20:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230872511 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230872768 2018-02-13 00:23:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230872768 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230873795 2018-02-13 00:31:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230873795 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230874477 2018-02-13 00:36:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230874477 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230876103 2018-02-13 00:47:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230876103 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230876757 2018-02-13 00:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230876757 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230876974 2018-02-13 00:53:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/230876974 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/231955690 2018-02-15 15:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/231955690 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/231969149 2018-02-15 15:54:28 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/231969149 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/232440057 2018-02-16 17:49:06 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/232440057 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/233511731 2018-02-20 20:44:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/233511731 ajeffcoat6 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/233511993 2018-02-20 20:45:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/233511993 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235388268 I think you did a good job on giving good facts and information on your passion. One thing I would do is tell about some more things like who your expert is and what you think the future will be like with your passion]]> 2018-02-26 15:00:48 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235388268 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235389098 GLOW: I really like that in your pitch you talked about a real life person who is included in your passion.
GROW: But I think next time you should add maybe how she gets the small amount of food she actually has.]]> 2018-02-26 15:02:03 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235389098 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235389385 GROW: I think you did good but make sure next time that you include  one fact you learned.
GLOW: I loved your puns and how you fillmed it. I also liked how you gave a example.]]> 2018-02-26 15:02:29 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235389385 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235390516 2018-02-26 15:04:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235390516 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235391193 https://docs.google.com/presentation/d/1rLZv6Cu3JD27tMrqBDZcucU8io3-4UaPNq7RXsx7mt4/edit#slide=id.g3424fa52fb_1_0

]]> 2018-02-26 15:04:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235391193 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235392630 GLOW: You talked about how we can recycle.
GROW: Try to make the pitch a little bit longer]]> 2018-02-26 15:06:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235392630 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235394088 Grow: Your video was amazing and I liked how you included why you wanted to do this passion project. ]]> 2018-02-26 15:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235394088 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235395785 Glow- I think you did a good job on explaining what your passion project would be about!
Grow- I think you need to work on expaining why you chose being a musician.]]> 2018-02-26 15:11:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235395785 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235396292 Glow-You did a good job of telling facts about your passion and told about your expert.
question-what are some ways you think you can do to help the hunger besides making restraunts because that would be expensive]]> 2018-02-26 15:11:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235396292 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235399251 2018-02-26 15:15:30 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235399251 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235401622 Glow- I think you did a good job explaining what your passion project was going to be about.
Grow- I think you could do a better job with explaining why you are doing it. ]]> 2018-02-26 15:17:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235401622 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235494118 Whats your favorite concept of math? Why is it your favorite?]]> 2018-02-26 17:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235494118 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235909724 glow: I loved how you told about the types of pollution and causes
grow: You should add why you want to do this projcet]]> 2018-02-27 15:01:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235909724 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235913032 Glow You used many pictures to show what DNA looks like and your pitch is just the right length.
Grow can you tell what you want to be when you grow up?]]> 2018-02-27 15:05:45 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235913032 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235913229 https://animoto.com/play/8pgqu5yGkQBTClmpMBgX0w]]> 2018-02-27 15:05:59 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235913229 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235920732 2018-02-27 15:15:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/235920732 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236419835 Glow: You stated your expert and put everything in plan
Grow: You need to state why you are studying fires]]> 2018-02-28 14:48:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236419835 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236422981 Glow: You showed about everything from your question to facts and more
Grow: You need to state more about what you are going to do with the information

]]> 2018-02-28 14:53:27 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236422981 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236432624 glow:i like how you used exaples of a 5 people family and how they sufer from hunger
grow: i would show what organization lily uses to give food to people]]> 2018-02-28 15:05:11 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236432624 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236436878 2018-02-28 15:11:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236436878 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236436965 2018-02-28 15:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236436965 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236445083 https://animoto.com/play/y0loOT52jroM9HtcHaUJyw]]> 2018-02-28 15:21:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236445083 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236541253 Glow: You did a great job of explaining how safety has changed over the years in football.

Grow: Say why you pick this question.]]> 2018-02-28 17:29:51 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236541253 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236542464 2018-02-28 17:31:32 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236542464 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236542751 GLOW:I like you stated your problem and used the right actions 
Grow: What is your inquiry question


]]> 2018-02-28 17:31:58 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236542751 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236547327 Do you know the year and/or month when they were made?]]> 2018-02-28 17:38:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/236547327 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/237430691 Grow: You could add what date and year the first phone was made.
Glow: I loved how you added a real person in your pitch.]]> 2018-03-02 15:12:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/237430691 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/237512273 2018-03-02 17:28:52 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/237512273 https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/238117310 https://animoto.com/play/8pgqu5yGkQBTClmpMBgX0w]]> 2018-03-05 15:03:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ajeffcoat6/6s484gp688yu/wish/238117310