Sentence Workshop (P4) by Abigail Sides https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5 Pick out a sentence from your own writing, revise, and edit it below. *Be sure to add your name! en-us 2020-09-04 16:32:24 UTC 2020-09-23 17:36:11 UTC hello@padlet.com Trisha Nimnauth https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772164518 "Me and my siblings followed people to the lottery stage."  
My siblings and I followed a group of tall people down to the long lottery stage. 
My siblings and I decided to follow a group of random people to the lottery stage. ]]> 2020-09-23 14:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772164518 kurt fischer https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772164757 2020-09-23 14:11:06 UTC https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772164757 Paige Fisher https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772165249 1.The lottery helps you get your dream house, or something that you can use to get what you always wanted.
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2. I took my dog to a park for a walk to get some exercise then we went home.]]> 2020-09-23 14:12:23 UTC https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772170743 Aaliyah Jenkins https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772171223 1. Me and My mom went to the store and came back home. 
2. Me and My mom went to the store and got some groceries then  we went home and put the groceries  up. ]]> 2020-09-23 14:12:29 UTC https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772171223 Christian Velasquez https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772173043 2020-09-23 14:12:52 UTC https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772173043 Megan Sapp https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772208763 1.No one is okay with their family members getting chosen.
2. It affects ]]> 2020-09-23 14:19:54 UTC https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772208763 Jaslyn Perez https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772211655 1. People are dying because of an old, cruel, inhumane  tradition.
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]]> 2020-09-23 14:20:31 UTC https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772211655 Makayla Theodile https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772217924 1. I watched the fear and anticipation of the other villagers as they waited for the chosen one to be picked.
2. I watched as the other people waited for the chosen one to be announced. As I looked around I saw the people participating having different emotions on their faces.]]> 2020-09-23 14:21:47 UTC https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772217924 Miola Hedayat https://padlet.com/abigailsides/6qwtzf0yhwvi15w5/wish/772223208 1. the lottery is an thing that should be banned forever.
2. The lottery is an event that sould always be banned

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