I sort of agree with this opinion.

First reason for my opinion: With money, you can provide one with shelter and food, which can lead them through a basic healthy life.

Second reason for my opinion: Even if the life of one is threatened with factors that makes them to be unbalanced like bad health, you can't make it balance once more without the help of money

Summary:

I agree that money is one of the most important factor in one's life in this modern day because it can provide them with shelter, food, the basic crucial things of their lives and even health in some of the cases that in need of it.

Body 1: People need money to pay for their life, families and entertainments.

• Buy for clothes, laptops, furniture in family,....

• Pay for bills, medicine, tuition,...

• travel around the world.

  Body 2: Money is an ultimate purpose of life

• Take the rest

• Enjoy the life easily

• Take care yourself.

  eg: Amercians save moneys to worry about their life when they are old.

  Body 3: Making me confident and comfortable

• Belive in ability of myself

• live in a luxurious place

• Everyone respect me

  => This is a type of happiness.

  Conclusion: Money is a important things and indispensable in our lives. I belive that money is the source of happiness.

• Paraphrase the statement

• Both Disagree & Agree

Body:

1. Disagree: Money is not enough to impact on happiness. It's just one of the most important in our life -> not in person's happiness.

   • Use Maslow matrix to analyze the levels of demands -> prove to the argument that people cannot feel happy when they just have money or much money

2. Agree: Cannot self-control the demands -> lack of money can make people unhappy

   • Lead to peer pressure, depression, or some mental issues

   • People cannot level-up their awareness of real happiness when they don't overcome the low level of needs (physical level)

Sum up

1. We need money to maintain our daily life: food, health care, clothes, entertainment, education, ... I use it to pay my receipts. Without money, people will feel difficulty in solving the problems that happen in life.

2. Every culture has a certain difference in their money earning and using.

   -In Western countries, they intend to earn and save money first, then they spend it.

   -In Eastern countries, they frequently spend money first.

   The rich and the poor has differences in using money for their health: physical or mental health.

   In conclusion, I think that money has a definite role in our life.

   
   

1. Necessities for life

   -food: Eating is happiness for many people, helping to relieve stress

   -accommodation: A house is always a home --feel the happiness, love, and inseparability

2. Health issue

   -necessary at all ages

   - cannot be happy if you are constantly sick

   -money improves and protects health

   -eg: sick people if they don't have enough money for treatment

=> The importance of money in human's happiness

The correlation of money and happiness is a universal interest nowaday. Some people claim that money is one of the most important factors in a person's happiness. In my view, Iam both agree and dissagre with this statement.

Paragragh 1:

I believe money is essential to maintain our life better which is the reason to make us happy. For instance, poor people need money to support basic needs such as: food, clothes, shelter. In addition, wealthy people aslo use money to entertament, or to hepl their mental health.

Paragragh 2:

But in the contrary, I would suggest money is one of the most reason cause stressful in a person's life.

1) money can improve quality of life: traveling, entertainment can boost energy, contribute to happiness

ex

2) money can open opportunities for growth such as education, training which can help people to have a better job in the future.

ex: according to a recent survey from oxford university, people who have good degrees can get a job with high salary than others

P1: First reason: Buying necessaries

example: student and parent's point of view

P2: Second reason: Improving our life

example: - White-collar workers in urban area need money for having trips to get out of daily stress

- Blue-collar workers in industrial parks need money for treating their occupational disease

Conclusion: In short, i agree that money is one of the most essential things in our life / that money plays an important role in our life.

My opinion: In our life, people usually think that money is essential to their enjoyment.

Paragraph 1:

+First reason for my opinion:

• It can be seen, that money is an important part of our lives, it gives us a way to purchase a variety of things that we need.

• In contrast, even though money will give us everything, it cannot bring us health or happiness.

  Summary:

  Money certainly is a necessary part of life, but it is not everything.

  
  

Body: Many other reasons can make one happy

• Have family members who will not judge an individual and conversely, support all the new beginnings in their lives.

• Allocate time for their leisure activities since it gives a better sense of self-development and adds more moments to cherish in their lives.

  
  

  Conclusion: I believe that people can be happy without much money. If more people try to find other reasons for happiness than having a lot of money, the world will be a better place to live in.

  
  

  
  

There are a lot of reasons for choosing video games or other better hobbies. Playing video games can lead to laziness and some health problems such as eyesores, obesity, and backache, etc.. Nevertheless, playing sports helps you stay fit and be stronger. In addition, you probably play video games alone at home, but in sports, you can interact and compete in teams with each other in person. Another contrasting point is that there may be a large number of violent scenes in some video games, that children can imitate and apply negatively to real life. In opposition to that, outdoor activities such as running or skipping rope are still nonviolent choices for children.

but at the same time bad things about that is when we play too much time we sit too much, your muscels reduce so that will be bad for your heath. That's why we need balance and go workout like gym, swim,....

Also play video game all day may be lonely but with conecting people online all over the world that seem like not much of a problem.

Compare to other hobbies seem like olmost the same things, All about relax, having fun and productive

In my opinion other hobbies and video games both are useful but for me music is better choice if i have to chose because i like music

For the first reason, video games pick up a new skill for users which provide them with problem solving skills to find out quickly a way playing games better. However, solving problems in sport games will be expanded for your social experiences such as communication, discussion or cooperation of another people.

Paragraph 2:

Another reason is the amount of people playing video games that it make them addicted and lazy to exercise. So this affect human health and work or study seriously. Playing sports games helps people relax and release your stress rather than playing video games. They improve your physical and mental health because they don't need excessive brain activity especially good supporting for good work or study after playing sports.

Other sports are also considered an important part. Playing sports makes children healthy and strong. Not only that, it is also a good thing to prevent children from becoming too addicted to electronics. Although sports help a lot, it is not the best way to keep children healthy. Therefore, there needs to be a balance between electronics and sports to help children develop best.

Secondly, having a hobby is beneficial for personal development. Video games and outdoor sports are great for developing quick reactions. Playing video games could improve our tactical skills and also they help us practice how to deal with losses in games so we would go through disappointment in real life better. On the other hand, outdoor sports could help us learn better work as a team and build sportsmanship.

P1: Causes: economic crisis (not many jobs, layoff matter, minimize company, decline in need of white-collar jobs, example)

P2: Effects: reduction in life quality reduction (anxiety, depression, crime rate increase)

A serious problem and deserves attention to young people for my country through history is unemployment. This is lead to the large number of youth who lacks of work in some countries. Due to the difficulty in finding jobs higher, there are many problems to create bad effects in the future. This essay will look at many causes about national developments and overpopulation, and even the impact on individuals and on the economy as a whole.

Body 1: Causes

1. National developments:

   - The technology is developed and improved => achieve high quality in some industries => a decline youth workers. Eg: morden facilities, robots.

2. Overpopulation:

(Introduction)

Economic crisis -> Workforce reduction + Company bankrupt

Result: Dificult to get job for fresh graduates

Ex.

Paragragh 2: Effect:

Mental issues: e.g. Anxiety + Depression + Stress--> Serious illness: Anorexia --> Lower quality of life

-Financial crisis caused by COVID-19 pandemic => Employers tend to minimize their workforces.

-The improvement of automatic technologies is more rapid than ever => low-skilled manual workers become redundant.

P2: effects

-More depressed young people

-Unbalanced-grown economy