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      <title>Reviews by COURTNEY PETERS</title>
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      <pubDate>2021-01-22 15:20:16 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aslan&#39;s Chart</title>
         <author>cpeters86</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1114456246</link>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-22 15:25:37 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Isaias&#39;s review/comments</title>
         <author>cpeters86</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1114457373</link>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-22 15:25:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Isaias&#39; Chart</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Characters:Timmy Jimmy   Mr. Voice (narrator)  Guards, and Community leader<br><br>Setting:A community in Britain and a boat the ocean.<br><br>Beginning: Jimmy and Timmy are best friends they were American. They were poorly treated for being American They were constantly called Yanks in a bad way though. They are all orphans and live together. One day the leader of the community decided to dispose of the Yank scum. Timmy and Jimmy try to run but are grabbed by the guards and were dragged to holding chambers. They are not even fed. When they are going to be disposed Jinny has the best idea and stomps on the guards foot and Timmy bites the Guard. They make a mad dash for the exit.</div><div><br></div><div>Middle: Once they made it out they start to think "What are we going to do now." Jimmy said before his parents left him his dad was in something called the Navy. The Community leader punished anybody who acknowledged that word. He did not want anybody to go back to the "savage" ways. Jimmy said that his father taught him how to craft an object called a boat. He said he went to places beyond the border of the community's woods, and that you can float on water with it. Timmy wondered maybe we could use it to escape. The Community leader was beyond livid, he sent out search party after search party, but little did he know that these little boys were smarter than he was. </div><div><br></div><div><br></div><div>End: Soon enough the boys built the boat they named Liberty, and they both worked hard on scavenging food from the woods Timmy was looking for food and stepped on a snake and was bitten. Jimmy did all he could to tend to the bite, but soon Timmy said "Go, go without me". Jimmy knew he had to, soon they would find them but he couldn't. He said "I can't leave you." Timmy said, "Trust me on this one, we will meet again". Jimmy with tears coming down his eyes ran pushed to boat out into the water and vanished into the distance. Timmy had been working on a secret project and made a special device that showed him Jimmy's status, meaning his health, and position. Now you may be thinking how did Timmy do this, well the night before he had been making their little meal and put the little pea-sized device in Jimmy's food. Now since Timmy was laying there he saw that the snake was dead and he dragged himself over to it and realized that it was not venomous. He cleaned the bite and made a new raft and called it Friend Finder. He found Jimmy's Position and found Liberty snuck on and quietly made breakfast as if nothing happened. Jimmy woke up and almost wet his pants when he saw Timmy, he was so happy.</div><div><br></div><div><strong>And that is the tale of two boys who have a great bond and nothing stands in their way when they are together.</strong></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-22 18:02:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Steven&#39;s Chart </title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1115215513</link>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-22 18:02:48 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Keyshia&#39;s Chart</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1115865563</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Narrator: Avi from the future tells the story.<br><br>Characters: Avi , Ama , and Aria are the main characters but the least main characters include The Queen , My brother , And other people.<br><br>Settings: Avi's House , The Village , the Queen's castle , the S.O meeting place ( Secret Organization).<br><br>Beginning: Avi witnesses how they kill her own brother in front of her in the middle of the village to which everyone saw , Horrified. Each week they get anyone random and killed them in front of everybody to show power over the poeple. Nobody liked watching it but we were forced. That changed when she met Ama and Aria , who showed her that things can change.<br><br>Middle: At the end Avi joins the secret organization who Ama and Aria joined a long time ago with other people who fought for freedom and justice. They all worked together , it was hard at first. But they did it each time the rebellion grew more and more.<br><br>End:  The rebellion grows and grows to a point in which the queen was killed. They were finally free , they had choice now. Avi and the organization helped make the kingdom happy again. <br><br>Theme/ Main idea: The theme of the story is to work hard for justice and freedom. And to fight for what it is right. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-22 20:54:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aslan&#39;s chart </title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1115966519</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Narrator and Character(s):<br>The Narrator has no name my character names are going to be Oliver, John,Thea, The club of riders, The leader,the the voice of daily reminder and the club named the Enforcers.<br><br>Setting The school, the "playground" and the library <br><br>Beginning The story beginning Oliver and John in the school and talking about how are tried of the rule that fun is banned so that the The LEADER can control them.<br><br>Middle So Oliver and John go to the "playground" and stared having fun and got Thea to help and they went to the library <br><br>End So they went to the library to make people have fun and they did but the Enforcers  where there to stop it so Oliver called up the The Riders. They came and they had a battle the The Enforcers gave up and had fun then they made Oliver the LEADER.<br><br>Theme that if you start something small it can end up big.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-22 21:33:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aslan&#39;s Comments </title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1115987147</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Very good even made me shed a tear.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-22 21:43:43 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aris&#39;.. chart.</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1116560345</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Narrator: Someone outside the story<br>Characters: Jareed, Confirmation, Mom, Control System 882, Jahlil Cole<br><br>Setting: Home, Corner Store 15, CS882HLNC and a sport court.<br><br>Beginning: Jareed is a 16 year old muscular kid who has sports and effort taken away from him ever since robots took over jobs and sports are virtual characters in simulated games with random players now. He feels this is unfair and he chooses to try and get it back, somehow.<br><br>Middle (Kinda long) : Jareed contacts Confirmation, his brother. Jareed trys to brainstorm at home for hours on how and where they could somehow plead with the Control System 882 and but eventually get nothing. Their mom just comes back from working at Corner Store 15 and asks what their doing and how the could help. They tell her all about their situation and she says the most shocking revelation... the CS882HLNC is just down the street and to the left. Also, she helps them with their argument on why they should have sports and jobs back.<br><br>End: Jameel, Confirmation and their mom have to choose two other players from a lineup of players Control System 882 picked to make it a fair effort. They choose two people who look very small and scrawny. They decide it shall be held at a sport court. With all their effort combined, Jameel's 81 point game, the two random players rebounding and Confirmation setting up lobs for Jameel, they are tied in overtime. The players Control System 882 recruited are just too good! It is close all the way through when Jahlil Cole from CS882's team makes a dunk to bring them up one. Their team seems destined to lose with only two seconds left. At the last few seconds, Jareem's mom demands the ball from Jareem, who seem like the obvious choice. She's been struggling so far. She hurls the ball and hopes it goes in. It hits the left side of the rim, then right but it goes in! Control System 882  are forced to bring sports and effort back.<br>THEME: People should make their own decisions and fight for what they want.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-23 08:59:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Isaias; Comments</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1117528692</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Awesome Aslan very good. I like it.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-23 21:36:25 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ariah&#39;s Chart</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1119168940</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Narrator: Someone outside the story<br>Characters: Ali, Nora, and Lisa<br><br>Setting: There highschool<br><br>Beginning: Ali, Lisa, and Nora are 13 year old girls who are trying to do everything they can to try and get their favorite tv show back on air.<br><br>Middle: One day Ali, Lisa and Nora went to school like any other day and they see everyone talking about how the tv show called, "911" but then this girl named alex makes a fake petition that says everyone wants the show to go<br> but Ali, Lisa and Nora have to find a way to show everyone that the petition is fake and that they can't take the show away,<br><br>End: Ali, Lisa and Nora create a plan to get alex's computer and show everyone that the petition is fake so they can show the director and save the show!<br><br>Theme: Fight for what u want.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-24 17:03:55 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ariah&#39;s comments</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1119176320</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>It's very good! I like how its from the future and how the story is very unique.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-24 17:06:58 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Keyshia&#39;s comments</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1119956157</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I think it is ... awesome!!! , I like how it has a different type of story compare to the other ones. In recap i like it. I cant wait to be able to read the story.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-25 01:39:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Narrator:The man who survives the attack tells the story</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1121961365</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Characters: Jax,</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-25 14:08:57 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aris&#39; comments</title>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/cpeters86/6pjrbhutdtemqylt/wish/1122350836</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Creative narrator idea and I like the name Jax.<br><br><br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2021-01-25 15:15:45 UTC</pubDate>
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