ENGL 202 109 Writing Practice by Easton Phidd

Mr. Easton

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Each student please write your three causes or effects for your topic.

Step 1: Write Your Team Names
Step 2: Write your topic name (state cause or effect focus)
Step 3: Write your three causes or Effects (bullet points only)

effects of online shopping

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positve effects :
1-opens 24 hours and every season
2- worldwide all around the world
3-easy access
negative effects:
1-people losing their jobs
2-stores loses costumer and money
3-shops closing

Causes of increased Anxiety and Depression in Today’s World

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1- Bullying
2- Family issues
3- Childhood trauma

Topic 2: Causes of illegal migration increasing Globally

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1) Lack of services
2) wars in countries
3) Lack of employments

Causes of increased anxiety and depression in today’s world

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1- Bullying
2- Childhood traumas
3- Family issues

Causes of Increased Anxiety and Depression in Today’s World

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Causes:
Family problems
Academic stress
Unstable friendships/relationships
Bullying

Causes and effects of Depression and anxiety,

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Causes:

- change in brain chemistry
- lack of certain vitamins
- change in hormones
- inherited traits

Effects / symptoms :

- losing control of life
- extreme sadness and anger issues
- mood swings
- loss of concentration and memory

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Causes of Increased Anxiety and Depression in Today’s World:

Psychological problems

Health problems

Bad mod

Online shopping in today's society

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(Effects)
Positives:
1- discounts, online shops often have more discounts.
2- saving time, people shop online because it saves time and effort.
3- all the time , online websites and shops are open 24 hours 7 days
a week.
4- more options, real shops are usually seasonal unlike online shops, you can find all types of clothes regardless of the season.
5-less crowds and traffic, obviously online websites have no traffic at all. It can be slow but it’s not crowded.
Negatives:
1- losing jobs, a lot of the biggest shops are closing down because of online shopping and that created a ripple effect to the smaller shops around them, the smaller stores depend on those major stores to give them the foottraffic they need .
2-addiction, the fast and easy nature that online shopping provides can easily make one addicted to online shopping.
3-harmful to the environment, not all online retailers use environmentally, friendly, packaging, they mostly use plastic, and non-biodegradable materials, which affects the environment greatly.
4-dangerous , prone to getting hacked not all websites are safe , and a lot of them can lead to cases of stolen identity.

Causes for the increase in illegal migration

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(Causes)

1- Poor treatment in the migrants' home countries. For example, being held in concentration camps, and being deprived of basic services like health and education.

2- Overpopulation and low employment rates. Many citizens flee their country because it's simply too full, and because they have extremely limited opportunities when it comes to jobs.

3- The desire to reunite with their families. Many families get geographically separated and are sometimes unable to legally migrate to one another, this causes them to resort to illegal migration.

Effects of AI(Artificial Intelligence)

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Positive effects:
-Robots can preform more precisely than humans specially in fields that require focus.
- Chatbots such as ChatGPT can take education to further points (if it's used rightly and under conditions).
-Robots are capable of doing risky jobs .
-For a mission to be done a company might need a whole team of 10 people or more while one robot can do the same thing.

Negative effects:
-AI made identity theft easier .
-Many people are losing their positions due to robots.

Effects of artificial intelligence:

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-Increase of unemployment.
- Identity theft
-Increase of political and social conflict.
- Less risky jobs for humans.

Effects of Artificial Intelligence on Societies

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- AI replaced humans in many job, leaving people unemployed by preforming more precisely
-students use AI (ChatGPT) for their studies, and researches
- AI can be saving lives by doing risky jobs such as mining for humans

Online Shopping In Today’s Society

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Positive effects:
- Relaxed decision making
-Financial organization
-Bargains
Negative effects :
-Delay
-No special advice
-No contact with the product

Illegal Migration Increasing Global

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Causes:
- fleeing from conflict
- poverty/bad quality of life
- very difficult restrictions for legal migration.

Online shopping

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Positive effects:

- Affordable.
- Various options and pricing.
- Having access to international brands and goods.

Negative effects:

- Packaging waste.
- Too easy which causes some sort of addiction.
- Fraud and identity theft

Topic Name : Effects of Artificial Intelligence on Societies ( Focus on Effects )

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Positive Effects :

AI could do all the repetitive tasks humans do with a high accuracy rate and a less percent of mistakes
AI is not only effective in one field but it can help and improve so many other fields
AI can make unbiased decisions without being driven away by emotions

Negative Effects :

AI replaced jobs which left a number of people jobless
AI needs high technology skills and could sometimes require high payments in order for it to actually function properly
AI could have high accuracy rates but there will still be a risk of something going wrong

Causes and effects of depression in todays world

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1-First, family problems such as divorce and other things that result in anxiety and depression among family members.

2-The lack of a job leads to a person's frustration and increases his depression

causes of illegal migration

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-lack of opportunuties
-to flee conflict
-search for a better life
-asylum

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The effects of childhood trauma

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Childhood trauma can have lasting effects on a person's life. It's like a heavy backpack of negative experiences that they carry into adulthood. These effects can include:

1. **Emotional and Behavioral Challenges:** Childhood trauma often leads to emotional difficulties such as anxiety, depression, anger, and trust issues. It can also manifest in behavioral problems like aggression or withdrawal.

2. **Physical and Health Impact:** Trauma can affect physical health, causing issues like headaches, stomachaches, and sleep disturbances. It can also contribute to long-term health problems.

3. **Interpersonal and Life Struggles:** Individuals who've experienced childhood trauma may have difficulties in relationships, low self-esteem, and trouble performing well in school or at work. They may also turn to unhealthy coping mechanisms like substance abuse.

Remember, while these effects are common, they are not permanent, and healing is possible with the right support and care.

Paraphrasing Practice (Oct 1)

ephidd1 — 2023-10-01 09:59:24 UTC

Paraphrase these sentences:

Strategy 1: Using Synonyms:

1) ORIGINAL: Adolescent employees sometimes argue with their employers.

2) ORIGINAL: Most of the women who attended the conference work with their husbands.

Strategy 2: Different Word Forms:
3) ORIGINAL: I had a meeting with some engineering students.

4) ORIGINAL: Failing the exam saddened them.

Strategy 3: Changing Word order/Sentence Structure:

5) ORIGINAL: Only half of the students passed their driving test.

6) ORIGINAL: I never make mistakes!

Paraphrasing Practice

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1-Original: Adolescent employees sometimes argue with their employers.

Paraphrased: Occasionally, young workers initiate arguments with their bosses.

2-Original: Most of the women who attended the conference work with their husbands.

Paraphrased: The majority of the female meeting attendees, have careers together with their partners.

3-Original: I had a meeting with some engineering students.

Paraphrased: The pupils in the college of engineering and I had a conference.

4-Original: Failing the exam saddened them.

Paraphrased: They were upset because they did not pass the test.

5-Original: Only half of the students passed their driving test.

Paraphrased: The driving assessment was successfully completed by just 50% of the learners.

6-Original: I never make mistakes!

Paraphrased: Errors are never made by me!

Paraphrasing Practice Exercise

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- Paraphrase 1: Young workers clash with their bosses every now and then.
- Paraphrase 2: The majority of females that took part in the conference work together alongside their spouses.
- Paraphrase 3: I met with some students that are studying engineering.
- Paraphrase 4: Having failed the exam made them sad.
- Paraphrase 5: The driving test was only passed by half of the students.
- Paraphrase 6: Mistakes are never made by me.

paraphrasing practice

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ORIGINAL: Adolescent employees sometimes argue with their employers.

PARAPHRASED: Young workers sometimes debate with their bosses

ORIGINAL: Most of the women who attended the conference work with their hUSBANDS

PARAPHRASED: The majoirty of female showed up in the conference accompanied with their Spouses

Paraphrasing

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origion 1:Adolescent employees sometimes argue with their employers .
Employees age between 10 to 19 years old every now and then disagree with their employers .

origion 2:Most of the women who attended the conference work with their.
The majority of the female who attended the event work with their husbands.

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Paraphrase 1

1) Sometimes teenage workers go head to head with their employers.

2)The majority of females who were present at the conference have business with their spouses.

Paraphrase 1 .

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From time to time, teenage employees cross swords with their managers

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1) Adolescent employees sometimes argue with their employers.
Teenage employees and their employers occasionally dispute.

Paraphrasing

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1- From time to time young workers argue with their bosses .

2- About all of the females who came to the meeting work alongside their spouses .
———-
3- I had to meet with engineering students .
4-Failing the test made me sad.
———-
5-Half of the students who took the driving exam failed.
6-I’m always correct .

paraphrase 1/2

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1-Every now and then managers get into tensed discussions with their young staff members.

2-The majority of females who were present at the event worked beside their husbands.

Paraphrase 1:

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Teenage workers occasionally disagree with their manager’s.

Paraphrasing practice

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1 ) Young workers might possibly argure with their bosses from time to time.

2 ) The majority of the females who were present for the discussion meeting are working with their spouses.

Paraphrase 2.

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Women who cowork with their husbands make up the majority of conference attendees.

1) ORIGINAL: Adolescent employees sometimes argue with their employers.

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Teenage employees and their employers occasionally dispute.

paraphrasing

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1- Young workers often disagree with their managers.
2- More than half of the females who attend the conference usually share the same workplace with their partners.

2) ORIGINAL: Most of the women who attended the conference work with their husbands.

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The majority of the conference attendees were women who work alongside their spouses.

Paraphrasing

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Strategy 1:
1- Teenage staff sometimes disagree with their managers .
2-The majority of females who were present at the meeting work with their husbands.

Paraphrasing Practice

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1) Younger workers tend to argue with their managers.
2) The majority of the women that attended the forum with their spouses.

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Nearly all females who were present in the conference work with their spouses.

paraphrase 3/4

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3-A Few pupils form the college of engineering gathered with me.

4-They failed the test. Thereby, they were upset.

3) ORIGINAL: I had a meeting with some engineering students

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I met with a group of engineering students.

4) ORIGINAL: Failing the exam saddened them.

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Failure in the exam made them sad.

Introduction

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The effects technology has on the workplace is significant and that is shown with the difference it made for the workplace, one century ago who would have thought that you can work from home ? The primary effects of technology on the work place is making the workplace more efficient, making communication easier, making work hours more flexible.

effect of technology on workforce/employee

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introduction: Is technology presenting a risk to employees? . Technology is the application of scientific knowledge to the practical aims of human life. its integration in the workplace has concerned many employess. This essay will discuss the negative impacts of technology on workforce such as: work displacement, privacy concerns and reskilling.
body paragraph:to begin with, technology has caused job displacement. this means that advancement in AI and robotics enabled machines to take over certain job functions.

Introduction

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In the past, our ancestors mechanisms of labor were much different than they are today. The majority of the work was done by hand due to the absence of the aid of modern technological devices and machines. In contemporary society, the use of technological apparatus prevails. The use of such means has a number of effects on the workforce of today. Some of the effects of technology on employees include displacing human jobs, increasing productivity using new technological devices, and providing more accessible work environments.

Effect of Technology on Employees

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Last century's people thought our current age would witness flying cars; and while that didn't necessarily happen yet, we're not exactly far off. Our technological advancement is at a scary height, showing no signs of slowing down. Yet while business owners rejoice as more and more inventions are being developed to make their businesses more efficient and profitable, a very sensitive conversation arises: what about the people doing the work? Technology has had immense effects on employees everywhere; three of which have definitely been the sharpened workforce deskilling, the new modern job opportunities, as well as the increased work flexibility.

The phenomenon of deskilling in the workplace as a result of technology can be traced back to a conversation that started a very long time ago: as we become more developed and our inventions become smarter, are we actually turning less and less capable?

Technology effect on Workers

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Technology has developed through the years and eventually arrived to workers lives .Every year ,technology became popular than ever . There are many positive and negative effects of technology on workers including ,losing their jobs ,developing their skills ,and keeping them safe .

To begin with, the first positive effect of technology on workers is losing their job.Many people lose their job because of techology which destract them from their work .For Example people work hours or even days at the same technology for more than a year which makes them tired and want to do something else but they do not have time , So they work and do something else while they are working .

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Technology has become a crucial resource in our everyday lives especially in the workforce. Technology is used to make our lives easier by making the workplace more efficient. Which means making the work places extremely productive and well organized. Therefore the effects of technology on the workplace are that it increases efficiency, improves data analysis and increases laziness.

Effects of Technology on Workforce

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Introduction :
Could it ever be possible for workplaces to run without technology nowadays? When comparing the use of technology in work fields now and before then we will be able to detect the importance of technology. Technology is hugely needed not only for the workforce generally but precisely on the workforce and employees. Technology simply runs machines or devices which are created by humans for certain purposes. The purpose of the work they do could vary efficiently from one field to another. Technology has various of important impacts on the workforce such as creating a stable network between employees, time and work efficient, as well as opening or closing the door to certain jobs.

Body 1 NOT DONE

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A very important impact of technology in the workplace is making it more effective. Efficiency is defined as the least amount of time spent on the most amount of tasks, and in the workplace it is a key component. For example without technology

What are the major impacts of technology on workforce employees?

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What are the major impacts of technology on workforce employees? There are many institutions that organize many businesses and discussions, and each institution is linked to each other, so it takes, and in some transactions, a long time to move from one transaction to the next. The main impacts of technology on the workforce are: organizing the schedule, saving time, and preserving the environment.

Introduction

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Technology plays a big role in today's world. And it can't be denied that it keeps getting more and more advanced day by day. Technology exists in many different types, shapes, and formes. From something as simple as a phone to something as complicated as a surgery robot. It is obvious to us that the introduction of technology changed the path of this world, and with a change as big as this one, a chain reaction of effects follow. The three negative effects that this essay will cover are as following: workers losing their jobs, expenses, and functionality

Essay 2: Argumentative Topics (Brainstorming)

ephidd1 — 2023-10-17 10:20:34 UTC

Step 1: Watch the Video on your topic
Step 2: Take notes
Step 3: research the topic on the internet, find websites
Step 4: on Padlet, write:
- 2 arguments for
- 2 arguments against
Step 4: post your arguments to our class Padlet: Practice Writing
Step 5: add a website- find one website to post on padlet

Good luck!

Should employees have the choice to work from home?

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For:
1) Increases efficient outcomes.
2) Corporations will invest less money on building /renting working places .
3) Flexibility
4) Attract new talents

Against:
1) Staff feeling isolated
2) Home distractions
3) Information security risk
4)Difficulty monitoring performance.

Should businesses start working from home?

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for:

- rest once done with work

- time saving

- less transportation cost

- better attendance and punctuality

against:

- less business productivity

- technical issues can occur often

- many distractions

- rest place cannot be a work place

is accessing free internet a human right ?

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argument for :

1- help people communicate (medical and educational uses )

2-to know what happen to the world

argument against:

1-not all people can access free internet

2-its negative effect of human health

Should businesses allow more work from home ?

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Pros :
1- Time saving
2- Fewer sick days

Cons :
1- Expensive equipments
2- Less business productivity

https://kissflow.com/digital-workplace/remote-work/pros-and-cons-of-working-from-home/

Is internet access fundamental human right? Legain and Noora

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For:
-Allows freedom of speech and opinion.
- Essential for communication and making jobs.
Against:
- Increases cybercrime and conflict.
- Prioritizing internet access may turn the focus off on important things such as healthcare and education.https://www.globalcitizen.org/en/content/internet-access-basic-human-right/

Researching Longevity

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for:
-increasing the number of young years which means increasing productivity in society
-reducing the stress about loosing a family member
against:
-unintended consequences such as overpopulation,lack of resources.
-it costs a lot of money that could be used in more important cause

Researching Longevity

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For:
1. Increasing societal productivity as we increase people's youth years
2. Improving mental health/societal happiness as people become less stressed about dying or losing their loved ones

Against:
1. Lack of the enough esources that people living longer would consume
2. It costs a lot of money that could be dedicated for potentially more important causes

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2690099/

Is access to free internet a universal human right?

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Argument for:

1- communicate with others.

2- know what is happening around us.

argument against:

1- reduce the intelligence rates.

2- negative effect on human behavior and health

Is access to free internet a universal human right?

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Arguments For

1- The internet has become a diverse platform. Many aspects of daily life have been shifted to online platforms. For example: banking, flight bookings, remote work, shopping, education, etc. Therefore lacking internet access would put people at a major disadvantage.

2- The internet provides a platform for people to freely express their opinions. This could serve as an important way of solving societal issues. Also, the internet facilitates worldwide communication especially with people who are incapable of interacting with their loved ones physically on a daily basis.

Arguments Against:

1- It is not a necessary aspect for maintaining life. Humans have lived without the internet for decades and they survived and thrived the same way we do nowadays. This proves that the internet is not crucial for living, and we can survive without it.

2- It can lead to people overstepping their boundaries on the internet. This can lead to controversial arguments on the internet. In addition, cyber bullying and rumor spreading can lead to issues in society. These issues especially become more common if the internet is a human right because people feel "over-comfortable" and tend to over-step their boundaries.

should scientist help people live longer lives?

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1- overpopulation, lack of human rights (negative).
2- Fear of death or losing people we love (positive).
3- It would not be fair for low and middle class people (negative).
4- Keeping important people alive, politicians for example will prevent a lot of global issues (positive).

Researching longevity

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3 arguments against:
- Strong point is waste of money and resources
- Scientists should on more important things
- Some religious think that the human lifespan shouldn’t be missed with.
2 arguments for:
- Some people look forward to make a difference in the world.
- People will pay more attention to the universal problem such as climate change and pollution.

should scientists help people live longer lives?

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Should employees have the choice to work from home?

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For:
1) Increases efficient outcomes.
2) Corporations will invest less money on building working places .
3) Flexibility
4) Attract new talents

Against:
1) Staff feeling isolated
2) Home distractions
3) Information security risk
4)Difficulty monitoring performance.

Should businesses allow more work from home ?

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Topic 3 : Should businesses allow more work from home ?

Adventages

People with social anxiety who have the talent and ability to do creative and outstanding work will not worry much about communications and interactions between them and other employees because they are working from their own comfort space
Provides access to a wider range of talented employees as for example the employer does not certainly have to be in the country where that company is found as they can be working from their own home country
Leads to higher attendance rates such as if you could not attend to the workforce due to a valid reason as for example illness then you are not marked absent as you could still do the work from home so you technically attended work even if you did not show up

Disadvantages

People will tend to procrastinate more and delay work if the place they work in is the same as the place where they rest and relax as the lack of a clear separation between work and home can make it difficult for employees to maintain a healthy work-life balance
Lowers productivity as the surrounding of the house tricks your brain into resting and relaxing while the surrounding of the workforce is translated by your brain into doing the work because you have a certain work time and you need to be done with the work at a specific time and generally your home environment can be filled with distractions making it difficult to focus and maintain productivity while setting up a dedicated workspace can help in being more productive
Working from home will have this constant presence of work related reminders as for example seeing your laptop or unfinished tasks or emails will not allow you to fully relax if you had to or if you needed to disconnect from work for a while

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Is access to free internet a universal human right?

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Advantages:

Information and knowledge are essential for exercising the right to education and information. The internet provides abundant access. It fosters learning, inquiry, and information access, which are crucial for personal development and informed decision-making.

Internet access is essential for participating in the modern economy in our increasingly digital culture. People need internet connectivity to overcome career and financial barriers because to online employment and economic potential. Internet connection helps reduce socioeconomic inequality.

Counterarguments:

Due to resource constraints, governments in underdeveloped countries emphasise fundamental human rights like food, water, and shelter. One may argue that internet connection is valuable but not more important.

A revolution in national security and governance.
Some nations believe unlimited internet access threatens national security and societal stability. Online extremism, criminality, and misinformation are commonly used to justify internet restrictions. The careful balance between accessibility and security and management is difficult.

Positive&Negative of Should businesses allow more work from home

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positive:

. Comfort and flexibility so that you can take a break at any time.

. Save time and money by avoiding traffic congestion, etc.

. Balance between work and personal life.

Negative:

. Continuous work pressures affect health.

.Social isolation because his focus is on getting work done.

. Low discipline and supervision, such that there is no oversight at work.

Positive & Negative of Should businesses allow more work from home.

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positive:

. Comfort and flexibility so that you can take a break at any time.

. Save time and money by avoiding traffic congestion, etc.

. Balance between work and personal life.

Negative:

. Continuous work pressures affect health.

.Social isolation because his focus is on getting work done.

. Low discipline and supervision, such that there is no oversight at work.

Essay 2:

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Arguments for:

1) Enable people to get in touch with each other

2) Helps people to be informed about global events

3) It helps students in studying

Argumnents against:

1) It has detrimental consequences on well-being and human behavior.

2) lower the rate of intellect

Practice Paraphrasing for Final Exam

ephidd1 — 2023-11-19 10:48:29 UTC

Review the above PPT on Strategies to great paraphrasing.

Then, post your paraphrase to these sentences.

Original Sentence:

About four out of ten Americans say they would definitely or probably be interested in orbiting the Earth in a spacecraft in the future, while roughly six out of ten (58%) say they would not be interested.

paraphrase 1 practice 19/11

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1-About more than half Americans say that they maybe be curious in orbiting the earth in a spacecraft in the future, while around 58% say they are not interested.

Paraphrase Practice (19/11/23)

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Original: About four out of ten Americans say they would definitely or probably be interested in orbiting the Earth in a spacecraft in the future, while roughly six out of ten (58%) say they would not be interested.

Paraphrased: Less than 50% of U.S. citizens claim that they would most likely or surely be intrigued in revolving our planet in the coming years. On the other hand, more than half say that they would prefer not to.

Original: In recent years, the Middle East has been investing heavily in solar power and other renewable energy technologies. Electricity generation from renewables doubled in the region between 2010 and 2020, and it is anticipated to double again by 2024.

Paraphrased: The MENA region has been increasingly funding solar energy and different forms of regeneratable power recently. Throughout 2010 and 2020 the formation of electric power from undepletable sources has increased by two times in the area and is expected to increase in the same way again within 4 years.

Original: Most animals are either highly social, or fiercely independent, coming together only to mate. Tasmanian devils are a rare exception falling somewhere in between, which makes their interactions particularly interesting to science.

Paraphrased: The majority of creatures on Earth are either extremely outgoing, or intensely self-reliant, meeting solely for breeding. Scientists are specifically curious about Tasmanian devils because they standout as their relationships lie among the two extremes.

Paraphrase 1 (19/11/2023)

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1) less than half of American citizens state that they would be curious about experiencing space tourism, whereas a small majority did not show any curiosity about the matter.

paraphrese practice

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origianl sentence 1:

About four out of ten Americans say they would definitely or probably be interested in orbiting the Earth in a spacecraft in the future, while roughly six out of ten (58%) say they would not be interested.

sentence 1 paraphrased:

While about more than half of the US citizens are curious about riding a spacecraft around the earth in the future, approximately half of them are indifferent.

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19/11/23

A small majority of Americans are not curious in space exploration, whereas 40% are

Paraphrasing

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Among people from the United States, an approximate 40% consider themselves certainly or likely to take interest in travelling around the Earth in a spacecraft, whereas a weak majority wouldn’t take interest.
As per the last few years, Middle Eastern countries have been putting so much effort into pursuing energy generation from renewable sources, like solar energy generation and others. From the years 2010 and 2020, electricity production from sustainable sources saw a 200% rate increase. By 2024, this rate is expected to reach another 200% rise.
Animals tend to either be heavily community-based, or extremely solitary that procreation is their only form of relationships. Tasmanian devils, however, are a special case that makes their relationships an exciting study for scientists - as their social habits take a middle-of-the-road trend.

Paraphrasing 19/11/23

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1) A small majority of the U.S. population have no interest in space tourism, however some did not show any interest in the idea

Paraphrasing 19-11-2023

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1. About four out of ten Americans say they would definitely or probably be interested in orbiting the Earth in a spacecraft in the future, while roughly six out of ten (58%) say they would not be interested.

Final (1 mark):

Of Americans, about half (58%) say they would not be interested in orbiting the Earth in a spacecraft in the future, while about four out of ten say they would definitely or probably be interested.

2. In recent years, the Middle East has been investing heavily in solar power and other renewable energy technologies. Electricity generation from renewables doubled in the region between 2010 and 2020, and it is anticipated to double again by 2024.

Final (1 mark):

The Middle East has made significant investments in solar energy and other renewable energy technologies in recent years. Between 2010 and 2020, the region's renewable energy generation doubled, and by 2024, it is expected to increase again.

Practes paraphrase

2023-11-19 10:53:40 UTC

Approximately 40% of Americans express definite or potential interest in traveling around the Earth in a spacecraft in the future, while approximately 58% indicate that they would not be interested in such an experience.

In the past few years, the Middle East has made significant investments in solar power and other renewable energy technologies. The region experienced a twofold increase in electricity generation from renewables between 2010 and 2020, with expectations for another doubling by the year 2024.

The majority of animals exhibit either strong social tendencies or a marked preference for independence, forming social bonds primarily for mating purposes. Tasmanian devils, however, stand as a unique exception, occupying a middle ground between these extremes, rendering their interactions especially intriguing to the scientific community.

Paraphrasing - 19 Nov 23

2023-11-19 11:07:03 UTC

Approximately 40% of the U.S. citizens say that they are willing to circulate around the world in a spacecraft in the upcoming time whereas 60% would not be curious about that.

Strategies For Paraphrasing: The 4Rs

ephidd1 — 2023-11-19 11:48:00 UTC

Paraphrasing Practice

2023-11-21 10:38:35 UTC

Original: Only half of the students passed their driving test.

Paraphrased: The driving assessment was successfully completed by just 50% of the learners.

Original: I never make mistakes!

Paraphrased: Errors are never made by me!

paraphrasing :

2023-11-21 10:40:01 UTC

original : only half of the students passed their driving test .

paraphrased : just fifty percent of the students successfully completed their driving test .

2023-11-21 10:40:10 UTC

Fifty percent of the students failed the driving assessment .

Paraphrasing Practice

2023-11-21 10:40:10 UTC

Original : Only half of the students passed their driving test.

Paraphrased : Fifty percent of the driving learners have passed the test.

Original : I never make mistakes.

Paraphrased : Mistakes are never done by me.

Paraphrasing 21-11-2023

2023-11-21 10:41:22 UTC

Original: Only half of the students passed their driving test.

Only fifty percent of the students nailed the driving examination.
Mistakes are never committed by me.

paraphrasing :

2023-11-21 10:41:26 UTC

original : I never make mistakes

paraphrased : I don't ever commit errors .

Paraphrasing

2023-11-21 10:42:24 UTC

Only half of the students passed their driving test.

only fifty percent of the pupils were able to pass the driving exam.

I never make mistakes!

I never commit errors!

Paraphrasing:

2023-11-21 10:42:34 UTC

Original: only half of the students passed their driving test .

Paraphrase: Just fifty percent of the trainees were able to pass their driving exam.

Paraphrasing 21/nov

2023-11-21 10:42:39 UTC

Original: Only half of the students passed their driving test.

Paraphrase: The driving test was failed by half of the students.

Original: I never make mistakes.

Paraphrase: Mistakes are never made by me.

paraphrasing 21/11

2023-11-21 10:42:41 UTC

ORIGINAL: Only half of the students passed their driving test.

PARAPHRASE:

fifty per cent of learners completed their driving exam .

ORIGINAL: I never make mistakes!

PARAPHRASE:

Mistakes wiere never made by me

paraphrasing

2023-11-21 10:42:41 UTC

-original: Only half of the students passed their driving test.

paraphrased: The percentage of pupils passing the driving exam was only 50%.

2023-11-21 10:42:42 UTC

I am always correct.

Paraphrase

2023-11-21 10:43:06 UTC

1.original:half of the students passed their driving test

paraphrase : about fifty percent of the pupils have passed their driving test.

2.in recent years the Middle East has been investing heavily in solar power and other renewable energy technologies.electricity generations from renewable doubled in the origin between 2010 and 2020 and it is anticipated to double again by 2024.

Lately, southwest Asia has been investing in clean and advanced power source . Clean electricity generations has doubled in the area between 2010 and 2020 and it is expected to double again by 2024.

2023-11-21 10:43:22 UTC

I never make mistakes!

Mistakes are rarely made by me.

Paraphrasing

2023-11-21 10:43:25 UTC

original: only half of the students passed their driving test

Paraphrase: Fifty percent of the pupils passed their driving test.

Rephrasing

2023-11-21 10:44:13 UTC

Original: I never make mistakes.

Rephrase: Mistakes are never made by me .

2023-11-21 10:44:48 UTC

original: I never make mistakes!

Paraphrase: under no circumstance do I make mistakes.

2023-11-21 10:49:33 UTC

paraphrasing

19.11.23

original: About four out of ten Americans say they would definitely or probably be interested in orbiting the Earth in a spacecraft in the future, while roughly six out of ten (58%) say they would not be interested.

paraphrased: About two out of five of the American population have a curiosity in spinning around the earth in a spaceship, when three out of five believe that it’s not an important topic.

original: In recent years, the Middle East has been investing heavily in solar power and other renewable energy technologies. Electricity generation from renewables doubled in the region between 2010 and 2020, and it is anticipated to double again by 2024.

paraphrased: last few years, the Middle East governments were investing deeply in solar energy and other Tecnologies functions. Generating electricity from a natural force twice as much in a decade, except to twice as much again by 2024.

2023-11-22 19:30:52 UTC

ORIGINAL: About four out of ten Americans say they would definitely or probably be interested in orbiting the Earth in a spacecraft in the future, while roughly six out of ten (58%) say they would not be interested.
PARAPHRASED: When it comes to space exploration in the near future, the majority of US citizens are curious about the adventure, while less than half the population is not quite fascinated.
ORIGINAL: In recent years, the Middle East has been investing heavily in solar power and other renewable energy technologies. Electricity generation from renewables doubled in the region between 2010 and 2020, and it is anticipated to double again by 2024
PARAPHRASED: Significant investments have been made by the Middle East in renewable energy technologies such as solar energy, over the past few years. Throughout the last decade, the region's renewable energy production increased twofold and is predicted to see further growth by 2024.
ORIGINAL: Most animals are either highly social or fiercely independent, coming together only to mate. Tasmanian devils are a rare exception falling somewhere in between, which makes their interactions particularly interesting to science

PARAPHRASED: The majority of animals interact solely for reproduction purposes and are either extremely social or strongly autonomous. Scientists are particularly interested in the social behaviors of Tasmanian devils since they are a unique exception when it comes to the creature's interactional manner.

Paraphrasing 23/11/2023

2023-11-23 08:09:31 UTC

Original: In recent years, the Middle East has been investing heavily in solar power and other renewable energy technologies. Electricity generation from renewables doubled in the region between 2010 and 2020, and it is anticipated to double again by 2024.

Newly, middle eastern countries are dedicating their investments in solar power as well as other alternative energy applications. The number of electricity generators from alternative resources had doubled in 2010 and 2020, and it is expected to double once again by 2024.

Original: Most animals are either highly social, or fiercely independent, coming together only to mate. Tasmanian devils are a rare exception falling somewhere in between, which makes their interactions particularly interesting to science.

When breeding the majority of animals are rather extremely social or furiously independent. However, Tasmanian devils are sitting on the fence. Therefore, their interactions had attracted scientist's curiosity.

Paraphrasing 23/nov

2023-11-23 10:12:47 UTC

Paraphrasing: A small majority of the U.S. population have shown no interest in space tourism, however slightly less than halfdid show interest in the idea.

Paraphrase

2023-11-23 10:21:37 UTC

Forty percent of Americans voice that they most likely be intrigued in orbiting the earth in a spacecraft in the future, however about 60% say that they would not be intrigued.

23/11 paraphrasing

2023-11-23 10:24:51 UTC

paraphrasing :

About more than half Americans say that they maybe be curious in orbiting the earth in a spacecraft in the future, while around 58% say they are not interested.

paraphrasing :

In modern years, the middle east has been providing lots of money in solar power and other recyclable energy electronics. New generation from renewables times two in the area from 2010 to 2020 and it is against doubling again in 2024.

3. Most animals are either highly social, or fiercely independent, coming together only to mate. Tasmanian devils are a rare exception falling somewhere in between, which makes their interactions particularly interesting to science.

paraphrasing:

A large majority of animals are each or two highly social or fiercely independent , with each other only to a friend . Tasmanian devils are a rare exception to not succeed most of the time in between , which makes their interplay specialy curious to science .

Paraphrasing 23/nov

2023-11-23 10:25:49 UTC

Paraphrasing:

Solar power and renewable energy sources is one of the main investments of the Middle East region. The clean energy industry has doubled in the region in the past decade and by 2024 it is expected to increase by double

2023-11-23 10:27:19 UTC

The Arab world in the past few years has been investing greatly in solar power and technology related to renewable energy. In a decade between 2010 and 2020, electricity generation from renewables increased twice as much in the area. It is expected to see it double again by 2014.

2023-11-23 10:29:00 UTC

Less than half of the United States citizens are willing to go on a future trip around the Earth in a spacecraft, while more than half express no interest.

Paraphrasing Practice

2023-11-23 10:30:31 UTC

Recently, Arab countries have been putting money into solar power and other energy generation technologies. Between 2010 and 2020, electricity generation from renewables have increased twice as much and it is predicted that it will increase twice as much again in 2024.

2023-11-23 10:47:47 UTC

In recent years, the Middle East has been investing heavily in solar power and other renewable energy technologies. Electricity generation from renewables doubled in the region between 2010 and 2020, and it is anticipated to double again by 2024.
- Recently, the Middle Eastern region is investing in long-term sources of clean energy such as, solar power and other technologies. Whereas, the electricity sources have doubled in the last decade, and it is expected to be doubled again by 2024.

Should fast food restaurants and unhealthy drinks be banned from schools and campuses such as Qatar University?

2023-11-28 10:26:31 UTC

For:

Young people haven't mastered self-control yet, and still need guidelines in order to develop discipline - in this case to pick food choices that would serve their health.
Banning fast food and unhealthy drinks from schools and university campuses - in which students spend a huge portion of their time - would force students to become used to healthier options, hence significantly helping them develop a habit for eating and drinking healthily.
Banning unhealthy options will force students to become self-aware in terms of how healthy their food and drinks' choices are.

Against:

It's kind of unfair to control what people choose to eat, and it could discourage them from learning.
Healthier options aren't accessible for everyone, and for so many people they're noticeably harder to access.
Young people need to learn self-control without needing restrictions from older people.

Practice Final Exam: Argumentative Essay Topic

ephidd1 — 2023-11-28 10:29:47 UTC

Prompt: Banning Fast food from College Campus

Recently, health is becoming a major concern in many countries. Governments and schools are considering many ways to improve the health of people and encourage people to adopt healthier lifestyles. One solution some countries have adopted is banning fast food restaurants and unhealthy drinks from schools and college campuses. Some people agree this can help, while others argue this can create many problems.

Question: Should fast food restaurants and unhealthy drinks be banned from schools and campuses such as Qatar University?

Write an outline:

1 ) Thesis Statement

2) Topic Sentence 1

3) Topic Sentence 2

4) Counterargument Sentence

5) Refutation - Intro to refutation

2023-11-28 10:32:02 UTC

Against

1) Even if the fast food chains aren’t in campuses people can order

2) Each person is responsible for their health , and could be able to choose. Especially since they’re in college

3) It’s quickly made and cheap, healthier options are out of budget for some people. Also, college students are in a rush.

Banning fast food from college campus .

2023-11-28 10:34:08 UTC

Against points :

1- Time and convenience.

2-Cheap

3- Tasty

For points:

1- Unhealthy

2- Encouraging better food choices

3-Acdamic preformence

Fast food in school and university

2023-11-28 10:34:11 UTC

For:

Unhealthy - could cause health problems.
Eco friendly
Encouraging better food choices
Academic performance

Against:

Cheap
Fast and convenient f
More fun and tasty

Should fast food restaurants and unhealthy drinks be banned from schools and campuses such as Qatar University?

2023-11-28 10:35:00 UTC

With the topic:

1- Maintaining the student’s health.

2- Reducing the increase in obesity.

3- Healthy food has a positive effect on the student’s activity.

Against the subject:

1- Fast food costs are cheaper.

2- It is prepared faster and does not take time.

3- It has no negative effect.

Arguments for

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1) Since students can easily reach fast food station they will become easily addicted, as a result obesity rates will increase.

2) If Junk food is being consumed on daily bases it will cause a Sluggishness crises, in other words student's productivity levels will decrease and that will cause a decline in their grads.

3) Counter argument: Junk food is much cheaper than organic alternatives.

Should fast food restaurants and unhealthy drinks be banned from schools and campuses such as Qatar University?

2023-11-28 10:35:53 UTC

arguments for:

-Promoting healthy lifestyle

-Nutritional value

-fast food packaging contributes to pollution

arguments against:

-no freedom of speech

-healthy food is expensive

-fast food is easy to access

banning fast food from college campus:

2023-11-28 10:37:16 UTC

for:

faster to serve/ provide
affordable
serving all day meals(whether it is breakfast lunch or dinner time).

against:

causes obesity and heart diseases.
energy draining.
does contain needed nutrients for students.

Argumentative Essay Practice

2023-11-28 10:37:54 UTC

Arguments For:

1- Unhealthy meals cause result in many health concerns such as obesity. Schools would have to be held responsible for the students' health.

2- Fast food causes students to lose focus while studying.

3- Discourages students from being active and healthy, they will always resort to the fast food as it is an easier option.

Arguments Against:

1- Some students are not financially stable. Healthier options are typically more expensive due to the ingredients used.

2- Individuals with certain allergies or preferences will have a smaller choice of restaurants to choose from which can lead to students not eating at all.

3- Fast food is more accessible, and easier to get when on a time-crunch.

Banning fast food from college campus:

2023-11-28 10:38:31 UTC

for:

faster to serve/ provide.
affordable.
serving all day meals(whether it is breakfast,lunch or dinner time).

against:

causes obesity and heart diseases.
energy draining.
does contain needed nutrients for students.

Should fast food restaurants and unhealthy drinks be banned from schools and campuses such as Qatar University?

2023-11-28 10:39:06 UTC

With the topic:

1- Maintaining the student’s health.

2- Reducing the increase in obesity.

3- Healthy food has a positive effect on the student’s activity.

Against the subject:

1- Fast food costs are cheaper.

2- It is prepared faster and does not take time.

3- It has no negative effect.

Banning fast food

2023-11-28 10:44:41 UTC

Arguments FOR:

It creates a healthier generation
Healthier food raise student’s concentration
Having healthier options reduces obesity rates

Argument AGAINST:

Everyone has the right to eat whatever they want
Having more choices is better
Fast food is cheaper

should fast food and unhealthy drinks be banned from schools and universities why and why not ?

2023-12-06 09:54:27 UTC

yes it should be banned ;

1-reduce the amount of energy in student's body by causing lazyness .

2-its negative impact on student's health due to the fact that it increase the chance of getting many dangerouse diseases

3-its effect on their academic performance