Core 7 Projects by Alana Asrelsky

Student Name: Kataree

aasrelsky — 2017-02-27 12:58:15 UTC

Name of Case: Roe v Wade
Type of Product: Website
https://allaboutabortionblog.wordpress.com/thoughts-on-abortion/
Warm Feedback
Kadeem: I like how you used evidence from your sources.
Ms. Asrelsky - I like that you have videos. I like how you site your sources. You spoke through your presentation, which made it more interesting to your audience.
Tom- it is good that the sources are cited and there are videos
Sanae- The sources on this website is amazing and the information that you had given is very descriptive.
Joel:its good and discriptive
Adonis: Good job on giving details and elaboration
Oaklinell: abortion is something serious. It can cause u not get pregnant in the future.
Ayanna: interesting and information. was nice being able to hear the stories of people who have abortion or almost died from abortion. could have done better with
erich- very informative
Eliesha: I like the way you used facts and had a video to back up the facts. Also good job on the description.
What to work on:
Ms. Asrelsky-
Tom-the puncation in the website is not good
Eliesha- I like the way you used facts and a video to back up the facts. Good job on the dis
William Batty(HATER)-Need to work on capitalization, punctuation and proper pronouns
Jaden Walker

2017-02-27 13:01:44 UTC

Student Name: Kadeem

aasrelsky — 2017-02-27 13:14:05 UTC

Name of Case: Brown v Board
Type of Product: model
Warm Feedback
Ms. Asrelsky - I like the drawings you made. You touch on a tough topic. Your graphs look clean.
Ayanna : i like the facts you put in it add more colors
to kadeem.
Sanae- I like how you added sports into the project, not only education. (Added a new element to the project.)
Tom; like the graphs they put the numbers into perspective
eLIESHA: I like the way you describe the segregation between the two.
Ayanna: i like that you added graphs and a lot of information. i learned a lot of new information. like if you made the outline of the graph darker to see it better.
Adonis: i like that you added graphs and a lot of information. i learned a lot of new information. like if you made the outline of the graph darker to see it better. I like how you put color in to this project
Oaklinell: i learned that the NFL and the NBA is not far needs color
Amalie: I like how you showed multiple graphs on both the nfl and nba
Kataree: i like the facts you put in it add more colors
to kadeem
What to work on:
Ms. Asrelsky- I would add color to the graphs on the sides. I would add the sources on the sides of the graphs to show where it came from.
Ayanna : i like the facts you put in it add more colors
to kadeem

Student Name: Eliesha

aasrelsky — 2017-02-27 13:15:17 UTC

Name of Case: Roe v Wade
Type of Product: Website
https://elicampbell3.wixsite.com/mysite-2
Warm Feedback
Ms. Asrelsky – I like how you cite your sources on the side of the page.
Eliesha: Beautiful website , very informative details
Kadeem: I love your website.

What to work on:
Ms. Asrelsky-

Student Name: Tom

aasrelsky — 2017-02-27 13:16:05 UTC

Name of Case: Tinker v Georgia
Type of Product: Fundraiser
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-xKAUDwn4Vn0_IOVta6NERHaYHBkBQqtdvQSxJvrg7M/edit
Warm Feedback
Ms. Asrelsky -
Ayanna :
very nice idea. i think it would really get people thinking. i think you you put a good place to donate to.
Sanae- I like the idea and I believe it's a project that the middle (and high schoolers) will want to participate in.
Eliesha: I like the idea of having a dress down to raise money for your topic.
Adonis: I like the idea of dress down-Tom
tom- i like your idea
Amalie: I like how you used description
What to work on:
Ms. Asrelsky-

Student Name: Kayraly -

aasrelsky — 2017-02-27 13:52:02 UTC

Name of Case: Gregg v Georgia
Type of Product: survey
https://docs.google.com/a/creclearning.org/document/d/1gNDtdzzW6PGXK_9Gkp9M_a2RJwmlZEDWmksqXPfbU38/edit?usp=sharing
Warm Feedback
Kadeem: I like how all your questions are based from your sources.
Amalie: I like how you wanted peoples opinion on your topics
Ms. Asrelsky - What are you going to do with the results of the survey?
Ayanna: i like how you added different types of questions. i think you did good job researching for your topic. found
Sanae- I like how deep you went for the case, and how you expressed your opinion.
Trenyce: I like how Kayraly gave us information about the death penalty, stated her opinion, and let us ask questions. This gave me a better understanding of Greg vs. Georgia
What to work on:
Ms. Asrelsky- I would take the information and make graphs or cards to display your data

Student Name: Erich

aasrelsky — 2017-02-28 15:12:08 UTC

Product: survey
Case: Roe v Wade
https://www.surveymonkey.com/r/78CNZHF

Warm Feedback:
Anthony: I think you added interesting questions, some i didn't think of. Think you could have done better explaining.
Sanae: Sanae- I like the survey, and the facts/information. Work On: Making the survey more clear to read.
Anthony: Gave descriptive details about his case, felt educated on

Kataree: need to now more on topic like the survey
Asrelsky: I like that you presented your case to the class.
Will: I like how you focused on how if it should be legal or not
Anthony: I think that your survey was nice and that you may have been able to add some more questions but other than that it was nice
Eliesha: I liked how you organized your survey and explained yourself.
Kataree: I liked how you organized your survey and explained yourself.
Things to work on:
Asrelsky I would have added a few more questions to the survey.

Trenyce

aasrelsky — 2017-02-28 18:38:19 UTC

Case: Brown v Board
Product: Website
http://websitebuilder102.website.com/brown-vs-board-of-education/

Warm/cold Feedback
Anthony: I feel that your website is amazing and you have alot of details. 10/10
Kataree: i like the pictures
Eric: explain more about your topic
Ayanna: I think you did a great job. Your website was neat and organized. You put a lot of work and facts into it.
Eliesha: I LOVE YOUR WEBSITE <3
Erich- very well explained and the way the website was setup was very good

Student Name; Anthony

aasrelsky — 2017-02-28 18:49:28 UTC

Case: Tinker v Des Moines
Product: party for charity

Warm/cold feedback
Kadeem: I like the Idea that you have and I think it's very creatuve
Eliesha: I like the idea of the arm band
Kataree: like the information
cant wait to see your idea
Ayanna: Like your idea think that a lot of people would enjoy it. Think you should pick a charity that has to do more with schools or something more to do with your case.
Will: I like how you made a relation to the black bands and that its also for a good cause
Trenyce: Anthony's presentation was very informative and I can't wait to participate in his product.
Tom: Tom- i like the idea of making a fun event to help a good cause

oakinell

2017-03-02 14:46:54 UTC

http://thestorybehindabortion.weebly.com

wil_naylor — 2017-03-02 14:50:15 UTC

Oakinell

aasrelsky — 2017-03-02 14:51:08 UTC

http://thestorybehindabortion.weebly.com
Case: Roe v Wade
Product: website

Warm feedback:
Sanae: Sanae- I love the organization of the website and the videos you had provided to prove your opinion.
Karaly: I like your layout of information and pictures
Trenyce: I like how you stated your opinion on abortion and exounded on the details and process
Ayanna: Your website is very good. It had tons of information and i thought it was interesting you had videos of what ha
Kadeem: I like how you used videos and it gave me a better understanding of your case an also the process of ebortion.
Sanae: Sanae- I like the layout of your website
Eliesha: I like the organization of your website
Asrelsky: I like your explanations of the pictures and the breakdown of information. I like that you included the video, however, it is graphic and may be too much for young adults. Try to use note cards so you can face your audience.
Tom: Tom-i like the way the website is set up
Karaly: I like how your trying to base your topic on a every day life situation
Adonis: i like how you explain your pictures and put
Kataree: i loved your website it was very informatonal

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2017-03-02 15:03:32 UTC

Oakinell

2017-03-02 15:04:02 UTC

i like how you had pictures and videos and explained it

Jaden Walker

aasrelsky — 2017-03-02 15:04:31 UTC

Case: Tinker v Des Moines
Product: project board
Kadeem: I like how you used photographic evidence on your poster board.
Eliesha: I like your poster board
Anthony: Your presentation was nice but the board could be designed better.
Oaklinell: Your website is cool
Trenyce: I like your product because you listed facts about Roe vs Wade and the pictures gave me a deeper understanding.
Ayanna: wish the the words were bigger and more pictures.
Did okay with talking about your topic.
Tom: i like the way your poster board is set up with the details of what happened when
Sanae: The words were small so i couldn't really see, also the board didn't look presentable. Good job with the information and comparing the dress code in Tinker to the dress code now,

Adonis

aasrelsky — 2017-03-02 15:13:35 UTC

Case: Tinker v Des Moines
Product: Exhibit board

Tom: I like the detail in the poster and the ways to draw people into it
Erich: erich- i like the board
Ayanna: Your poster board looked very nice, neat, and organized. Did a good job talking about the case. The layout was nice.
Kadeem: I think that you need more information on your poster board.

Sanae

aasrelsky — 2017-03-03 18:58:53 UTC

Case: Roe v Wade
Product: sculpture

Will N: I like the sculptures that you made
Kataree: i like your choose for your project i like the idea
Jaden: I like how you try to be creative by doing a
clay sculpture to show many were in a week
Adonis: i like how you did a clay sculpture and tried to be creative
Trenyce: I like how you were creative with your product and created an abstract clay sculpture relating to Row v Wade.
Kadeem: I like that you used clay for your product
Anthony: I really like your creativity and the thought of your project.
Tom: i like how you created it out of clay instead of a poster board or something normal.
Amalie: I like how you were creative with your work and did something different- sanae

Trenyce (Sanae

tre_taylor — 2017-03-03 19:01:01 UTC

Ayanna

aasrelsky — 2017-03-03 19:05:15 UTC

Product: drawing
Case: Roe v Wade

Kataree: i like your drawing cant wait to see the real thing
Sanae- I like the information that you provided before you presented your drawing. I also l
Adonis; i like how u made a picture and had written an paragraph/explanation
Kadeem: You need more pictures and color on your drawin
Amalie: Ayanna I like how u were specific with the reasoning for everything you did, I like how your words were clear an you stuck to one side
Ayanna: erich- the picture looked nice
Trenyce: I like how she combined here interest of art to create her product, which told me her position on abortion: pro-choice
Jaden: i like how you made a drawing of the pregnant woman
Anthony: I really like your art and your speech

kataree to ayanna

2017-03-03 19:06:46 UTC

tom-ayanna

2017-03-03 19:09:56 UTC

i like the creativity of a drawing