https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f Hello Grade 3 Rockstars! Thank you for letting me do a Power Writing lesson with you today! Your magic wands (pencils) were hard at work! Here is some feed forward for you to think about and enjoy! Keep on writing and adding to your stories! en-us 2019-09-18 16:29:39 UTC 2019-09-18 16:50:43 UTC hello@padlet.com burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386074970 I love how you repeated some of the words, but maybe next time you could use more details to bring your story to life. ]]> 2019-09-18 16:33:16 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386074970 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386075851 I love how you told a story about chocolate maybe next time you could tell more about the family who is enjoying the chocolate. ]]> 2019-09-18 16:34:15 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386075851 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386077350 I love how you descried riding a chocolate go-cart! Maybe next time you could add more descriptions about the go-cart and what happened when you rode it. ]]> 2019-09-18 16:36:09 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386077350 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386077917 I love the story about the magician ! Maybe next time you could tell me more about what happened to the chocolate bar. ]]> 2019-09-18 16:36:56 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386077917 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386078773 I like how you told me all the things you like and enjoy. Maybe next time you could talk about the different places you have been. ]]> 2019-09-18 16:38:03 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386078773 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386079588 I like how you used details similar to Charlie and The Chocolate Factory. Maybe next time you could continue the story about the person it seems really interesting and I want to read more! ]]> 2019-09-18 16:39:09 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386079588 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386080597 I like how you wrote about a chocolate go-cart, maybe next time you could tell more about the go-cart and what happened with it. 

]]> 2019-09-18 16:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386080597 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386081396 I like how you used descriptions to show what you could do with a magic wand, maybe next time you could tell even more of a story about the magic. ]]> 2019-09-18 16:41:34 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386081396 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386081924 I like how you told a story about a go-cart race, I hope you add more details about the story because I want to know what happens next! ]]> 2019-09-18 16:42:22 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386081924 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386082330 I like how you told a story about your life and the go-cart! Maybe next time you can tell more about what you do at home with your own go-kart. I would love to read more about it! ]]> 2019-09-18 16:42:59 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386082330 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386082909 I like how you talked about the different kinds of chocolate and the type of car you would like to get. Maybe next time you could add in more about magic! ]]> 2019-09-18 16:43:47 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386082909 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386083505 I like how you talked about chocolate and even drew a colorful picture! Maybe next time you can make a cartoon caption and add in more words and pictures to go with it! ]]> 2019-09-18 16:44:39 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386083505 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386084178 I like how you described chocolate being on your go-cart. Maybe next time you could tell a funny story about it and how you played a game with it. ]]> 2019-09-18 16:45:32 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386084178 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386085075 I like how you described eating chocolate, maybe next time you can tell a story about trying to buy it at a store, but every store you went to didn't have any left. ]]> 2019-09-18 16:46:40 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386085075 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386085971 I like how you described a magical chocolate go-cart, maybe next time you can tell more about the kid that you met while riding this go-cart. ]]> 2019-09-18 16:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386085971 burkeme1 https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386086601 I like how you told a story about going to your friend's house to show Maddy a magic trick. Maybe next time you can keep adding details and descriptions as to what happened at the magic show. I would love to read more! ]]> 2019-09-18 16:48:41 UTC https://padlet.com/burkeme1/6mm3utlpf37f/wish/386086601