Economic progress is often used to measure a country’s success. However, some people believe that other factors are more important. What other factors should also be considered when measuring a country’s success? Do you think one factor is more important than others? by Nguyễn Thị Bích Phương

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bichphuong160193 — 2024-02-08 02:21:27 UTC

BODY PARAGRAPH 1:

- MAIN IDEA 1: Basic needs of citizens are met.

education: free education, high quality of teaching and training
health care: accessible to all citizens, even those dwelling in remote and rural areas

-MAIN IDEA 2: sustainable development of a country
balance between economic growth and environmental protection
conserve habitats of living creatures, do not spoil pristine forests, humans and other creases live in harmony

BODY PARAGRAPH 2: viewpoint: all factors are equally important

- MAIN IDEA 1: government should ensure national development in all important aspects: from education to health care to ensure welfare and well-being of citizens

- MAIN IDEA 2: without balancing all factors, that development may not be sustainable and short-lived.

For example, a country focuses too much on economic development without investing in environmental protection and conservation of natural resources >> that development is short-termed.

BAO KHANG (CONCLUSION + BODY PARAGRAPH 2)

bichphuong160193 — 2024-02-08 02:21:41 UTC

It is crucial to understand that all factors contributing to a country’s success are equally important. The government should ensure national development in all significant aspects, from education to healthcare, to ensure the welfare and well-being of its citizens. This integral approach to development ensures that all citizens have access to essential services and opportunities for growth and prosperity. However, without balancing all these factors, the development may not be sustainable. For instance, if a country SOLELY focuses ~~too much~~ on economic development without investing in environmental protection and conservation of natural resources, that development is likely to be short-termED. The depletion of natural resources and environmental degradation could lead to long-term consequences that COULD BE IRREVERSIBLE, hinderING future growth and success.

In conclusion, while economic progress is a crucial indicator of a country’s success, it is not the only one. Other factors, such as education, healthcare, environmental sustainability ~~and~~ are equally important. Therefore, we should not prioritize one over another; INSTEAD, SUCH A balanced approach SHOULD BE ADOPTED FOR ~~TO will lead to~~ a long-term and sustainable success.

KHANH NGAN (INTRODUCTION + BODY PARAGRAPH 1)

bichphuong160193 — 2024-02-08 02:21:52 UTC

IT SHOULD BE NOTED THAT THERE EXIST SEVERAL OTHER FACETS TO MEASURE SUCCESS OF A NATION, ~~Other~~ two gauges OF WHICH ~~used to evaluate a nation's strength~~ are ~~the~~ education and ~~the~~ health care. It is widely accepted that THAT basic needs of citizens are met is an aspect to determine A NATION'S SUCCESSFUL DEVELOPMENT. For example, free education AND high quality of teachING and training will create more learning opportunities for YOUNG GENERATIONS ~~poor children~~. ALSO, Physical and mental health is another dimension that can determine the capacity and resilience of a country's workforce...