https://padlet.com/ciftcisena95/6lancwwc9cxags6o For Writing and Sharing en-us 2022-02-28 21:38:41 UTC 2022-06-17 07:40:48 UTC hello@padlet.com ciftcisena95 https://padlet.com/ciftcisena95/6lancwwc9cxags6o/wish/2223826076 ......]]> 2022-06-17 07:19:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ciftcisena95/6lancwwc9cxags6o/wish/2223826076 https://padlet.com/ciftcisena95/6lancwwc9cxags6o/wish/2223835108 2- Sorbonne, where I had studied history, I went back to there last month.
3- In University of Manchester, where the biggest university in UK, there are over 39,000 students.
4- Aristotle, who studied under Plato, wrote books on many subjects.
5- Harvard, where Hilary has just been offered a professorship, she studied politics there.    


Correction: 
2- I went back to Sorbonne last month, where I had studied history. / I went back to Sorbonne, where I had studied history, last month.
3-There are over 39,000 students in University of Manchester, which is the biggest university in UK.
4- (correct)
5- Hilary has just been offered a job at Harvard, where she studied politics.

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The inventors,who lived the last century,contributed technological  development.

Ahal Teke, which is the most beautiful horse in the world, had been shown audience in the festival last week 

Teenagers, who is between 13-21 years old, have some mentally problems


Charities that installed in the poor countries, changes their people’s life positively 

Correction:
The inventors, who lived the last century, contributed in the technological developments. (only a couple of articles mistake)

Teenagers, who are ......

Charities that are installed .... (passive voice)

]]> 2022-06-17 07:32:18 UTC https://padlet.com/ciftcisena95/6lancwwc9cxags6o/wish/2223837677 beyzanuryesilyurt1 https://padlet.com/ciftcisena95/6lancwwc9cxags6o/wish/2223839163 Sorbonne, where I had studied history, I went back to there last month.

In University of Manchester, where the biggest university in the UK, there are over 39,000 students. 

Aristotle, who studied under Plato, wrote books on many subjects.

Hilary, who has just been offered a professorship there, studied politics at Harvard.

Correction:
2- I went back to Sorbonne last month, where I had studied history. / I went back to Sorbonne, where I had studied history, last month.
3-There are over 39,000 students in University of Manchester, which is the biggest university in UK.
4- (correct)
5- Hilary has just been offered a job at Harvard, where she studied politics.]]> 2022-06-17 07:33:53 UTC https://padlet.com/ciftcisena95/6lancwwc9cxags6o/wish/2223839163 https://padlet.com/ciftcisena95/6lancwwc9cxags6o/wish/2223839889 1. last month I went back to Sorbonne, where I had studied there.
3.There are over 39000 students at the University of Manchester, which is the biggest university in the UK.
4.aristotle wrote books on my subjects,who was studied under Plato
5.hilary studied politics at Harvard, which she has just been offered professorship there.

Correction

4-  ...... who studied.
5- Hilary has just been offered a job at Harvard, where she studied politics.

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