https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav This is my awesome Poetry Portfolio en-us 2022-03-30 11:57:15 UTC 2025-10-23 11:45:36 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f615.png 21234Greijdanus https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav/wish/2121378552 Hello,
I absolutly loved the poem you send me. It was an amazing poem about our love and it perfectly captured the way our love feels. When i was reading it i had to think about a poem of William Shakespear: 'Sonnet 116'. 
It said: 'O no! it is an ever-fixed mark' and i think that he and you where right about that because you can never really lose love. I also thought about this line: 'It is the star to every wand'ring bark' because i think that love really can guide you on the path that you are supposed to be on.
Anyway i really loved the poem so if you ever have insperation for more poem's please write them and send it to me.
Lots of love.]]> 2022-03-30 12:37:20 UTC https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav/wish/2121378552 21234Greijdanus https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav/wish/2121846546 2022-03-30 16:19:55 UTC https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav/wish/2121846546 21234Greijdanus https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav/wish/2121983364 I have read the newest poem of Lord Alfred Tennyson and i am here to give you my opinion about it. 
Alfred goes in his poem really in on the morality of the soldiers that he describes because the soldiers know it's a death trap because that is said in: 'Into the valley of Death' and the soldiers still go in and this line also shows the imagery that Tennyson used in his poem. It is really nice that the soldiers still go in especially considering this line: 'Then they rode back, but not Not the six hundred.' because this line shows that not all soldiers made it out alive. But Tennyson also makes sure everybody knows that we should honor their deaths by this line: 'Honour the Light Brigade, Noble six hundred!'
'Forward, the Light Brigade! Charge for the guns!” he said.' This line show that the soldiers had no know doubts whatsoever because they just go for it. This just shows how brave the soldiers are. 'When can their glory fade?' this is one of the final lines of the poem and it just shows how great those soldiers where and that the ones that survived will always have won.
Because of all this i think that this is an awesome poem and that it really captures the things that are happening these days.

]]> 2022-03-30 17:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav/wish/2121983364 21234Greijdanus https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav/wish/2123138832 2022-03-31 08:22:32 UTC https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav/wish/2123138832 21234Greijdanus https://padlet.com/21234Greijdanus/6l66osrz7l5ageav/wish/2123566600 'The Pool Players. Seven at the Golden Shovel.' 
Before this the poet is just walking on the streets and then she passes a café called the Golden Shovel. When she looks in she sees the seven pool players.
'We real cool. We Left school. We'
When she sees the players she thinks about how they feel really cool because they left school and are now playing pool instead of studying. 
'Lurk late. We Strike straight. We'
The players stay till late and they hit the ball straight because they have had so much practice. They skip school a lot so they have time to practice.
'Sing sin. We Thin gin. We'
When they are in the café they sing along with the songs that are playing. And they are all drinking gin while playing pool.
'Jazz June. We Die soon.'
They enjoyed the music and the gin but because of al the partying they have now bad health so they al die at a young age.

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