Davien Robles-English 2 Portfolio 2023-2024 by Davien Robles

100 Story Word

1061682 — 2023-12-13 22:00:32 UTC

I selected this piece of art because of the wonderful nostalgia it brought to me. it was great going back to the past and seeing my childhood again. The strengths in this 100 word story are creativity and memory. What was important to me was how it brought so much memories to me, like if i was back in 2012-14. The troubles i did have while typing my story was just trying to remember what was in this story. I couldn't remember my childhood a few times, until I took baby steps and helped myself up. If i worked on this more, i would talk more about my childhood. My writing has changed a lot due to the Grammar and Dialogue.

Theme Analysis Paragraph - Low Cuts

1061682 — 2023-12-13 22:01:07 UTC

I selected this piece of art because of the analysis i came up with just by seeing a story and exporting it into my conclusion. The Strengths in this class work are strategy. What was important to me while making this was how i was like a detective and spotted some things around the story and theme. I did have trouble writing this because of how confusing or how long it was, i get distracted sometimes and forget it. If i were to write more of it, it would be how the story went out and my opinion of the story. My writing changed since i was able to make more sentences on how the story was.

Narrative Final Draft

1061682 — 2023-12-13 22:15:12 UTC

I selected this because this was my final revised draft, and it was perfect. The strengths i see in this draft were Creativity, Strategy, Memory, and Analytical. It was important because it wasn't just because this was my revised final draft, but because it showed how vibey it was, how i described a story that could relate. Some issues or troubles i had was organizing it, which scene goes where and how the story was supposed to go, it was hard for me since i was a good writer but not a good organizer. If i had to work harder on it, i would probably describe more about the theater, or describe the car or the streets. My writing has changed from Organizing to using Revision strategies in this Draft. It's however not my best work, but i will soon make a good one.