https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo Submit your response with the number of the question beside it. en-us 2019-04-25 12:51:39 UTC 2025-12-07 14:16:36 UTC hello@padlet.com jwebb29 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354083878

]]> 2019-04-25 12:57:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354083878 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084846 where?]]> 2019-04-25 12:59:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084846 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084859 interesting topic but what would be the definition of success ]]> 2019-04-25 12:59:41 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084859 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084875 I don't think that the "caused by rising CO2 levels" part is really necessary (that might be more background)]]> 2019-04-25 12:59:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084875 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084911 Specific region?]]> 2019-04-25 12:59:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084911 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084928 #9
Choose soybeans and don’t say such as unless you are still deciding what crop to grow]]> 2019-04-25 12:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084928 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084931 clarify what or where these rising ph levels are that you are referring to]]> 2019-04-25 12:59:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084931 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084943 what do you mean by health? ]]> 2019-04-25 12:59:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084943 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084945 what stimulant?]]> 2019-04-25 12:59:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354084945 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085077 specific place? ]]> 2019-04-25 13:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085077 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085146 what plants?]]> 2019-04-25 13:00:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085146 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085216 specify what cancer, also when you say “associate” it sounds weird to say “or” after (in my opinion)]]> 2019-04-25 13:00:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085216 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085230 Grammar check]]> 2019-04-25 13:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085230 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085279 is association the correct word to use? also which cancer are you looking at specifically ]]> 2019-04-25 13:00:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085279 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085322 Just choose soybeans ]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:00 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085322 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085343 “Implications” implies that the IA is going to be more focused on what this will mean going forward. Maybe “What are the effects..” might be better as it establishes a cause/effect relationship?]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085343 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085387 maybe specify the stimulant?]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085387 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085414 You could maybe condense the question and replace ‘crop growth’ with ‘soy bean growth’. ]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085414 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085417 "resulting in coral bleaching" might not be necessary--more for the background section?]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:15 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085417 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085450 “have an effect” could be written a better way ]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085450 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085526 2019-04-25 13:01:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085526 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085542 the wording just seems to be a bit hard to follow]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085542 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085606 How will you be measuring their adaptability?]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085606 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085648 which type of plant are you studying ]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085648 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085663 the wording sounds too informal]]> 2019-04-25 13:01:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085663 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085710 Hard to operationalize, maybe rephrase the question to establish a cause/effect relationship.]]> 2019-04-25 13:02:01 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085710 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085773 what area specifically ]]> 2019-04-25 13:02:14 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085773 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085880 Which agricultural plant?]]> 2019-04-25 13:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085880 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085934 specific area?]]> 2019-04-25 13:02:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085934 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085952 the beginning wording is difficult to follow]]> 2019-04-25 13:02:40 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354085952 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086141 2019-04-25 13:03:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086141 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086144 Choose one part of sleeping bear dunes because it’s a little vague 

]]> 2019-04-25 13:03:11 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086144 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086150 maybe change "what implications" to "what effect does..."]]> 2019-04-25 13:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086150 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086261 specify a certain location at which this is occurring. also use scientific name for salmon]]> 2019-04-25 13:03:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086261 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086331 Is there a particular cancer you will be looking at or a group of them?]]> 2019-04-25 13:03:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086331 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086384 could be rephrased to make it flow example: to what extent does rising...]]> 2019-04-25 13:03:48 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086384 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086392 2019-04-25 13:03:50 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086392 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086424 fix the wording of the question so it flows ]]> 2019-04-25 13:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086424 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086475 Maybe make this more specific?]]> 2019-04-25 13:04:06 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086475 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086612 either "changing climates" or "rising temperatures"]]> 2019-04-25 13:04:29 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086612 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086764 How is it measurable? What factors would be considered?]]> 2019-04-25 13:04:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086764 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086863 2019-04-25 13:05:09 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086863 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086915 what is rising the temperature? could be more specific  ]]> 2019-04-25 13:05:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086915 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086957 A bit hard to read]]> 2019-04-25 13:05:21 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354086957 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354087496 What type of salmon are you looking at?]]> 2019-04-25 13:06:45 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354087496 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088167 Good question! Locally applicable and a current issue that affects us.]]> 2019-04-25 13:08:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088167 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088361 Good, but don’t put in parenthesis. Just say outright carbon emissions and COPD rates. You can relate these to the bigger ideas later in the analysis.

]]> 2019-04-25 13:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088361 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088553 Good with specificity. Make sure you can relate it to real world problems; how do sea urchins affect us locally or in the grand scheme of things?]]> 2019-04-25 13:09:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088553 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088693 The concept is good. Focus on a specific type of cancer though. This will give you a more honed focus. In addition, this question is worded strangely and does not read clearly. Each word must have an impact because it is such a short phrase. Keep that in mind.]]> 2019-04-25 13:09:43 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088693 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088800 Focus on a specific areas where forest fires appear. Otherwise this question is well phrased and focused.]]> 2019-04-25 13:09:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088800 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088959 Define and operationalize stimulants. Make it specific.]]> 2019-04-25 13:10:24 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354088959 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354089094 Operationalize agricultural plants. Make them locally applicable. Are you using a range of plants or just one? Define it.

]]> 2019-04-25 13:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354089094 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354089176 Good specificity. It’s just a mouthful and can get difficult to read at times. Read it aloud to hear what doesn’t sound right and reword it.]]> 2019-04-25 13:10:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354089176 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354089357 Don’t bother with frilly words to connect your sentence, get straight to the point. “To what extent can polar bears adapt to the change in temperatures?” Also make sure to include a specific region.]]> 2019-04-25 13:11:22 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354089357 https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354089515 It’s a good start, but you need to work on the wording. Not only are there spelling errors but basic grammar errors as well. I’d suggest fixing that first considering this is what you’ll be basing your entire presentation on and it needs to be professional. Make it more specific as well. Pick a region and focus on that. Dig deeper into the subject.]]> 2019-04-25 13:11:49 UTC https://padlet.com/jwebb29/6kpcndmxlewo/wish/354089515