Short story unit evaluation by https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc We read: "TYM'am" "Sleepy Hollow" "MIMannville" "Chas" "The Monkey's Paw" 1. What is somthing you liked in 1 of the stories and why? 2. What is something you didn't like in 1 of the stories and why? 3. What story elements make for the best reading and why? Please put your name in the title and # your responses en-us 2018-11-26 12:48:36 UTC 2018-11-26 18:49:16 UTC hello@padlet.com Walker Scott abystoma https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307941574 1. I really liked The Monkey's Paw because of the horror and surprise aspect of it. The reveal of Herbert's death and the collection of the sum made me sit on the edge of my seat
2. I didn't like the ending in Thank You M'am because of the ending. It made me feel as if the Roger and Mrs. Luella Bates Washington Jones would never see each other again.
3. I think the Legend of Sleepy Hollow had the story elements of the best reading because of the settings that we are placed in as the story continues. For example, the beginning of the book told us that Sleepy Hollow was a quiet foggy place, which set the tone for a scary story, and as the story went on, it only got scarier.]]> 2018-11-26 18:22:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307941574 Molly https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307942697 2018-11-26 18:24:35 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307942697 Paul Iacobucci https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307942885 1. I liked when in "The Monkey's Paw", Mr. White had his wish granted, but not in a way he might have suspected. I liked this because it was ironic and surprising.
2. I did not like the ending of "A Mother in Manville" because I felt that we needed a better explanation of Jerry's past.
3. The story elements that make for the best reading are irony and suspense. I believe this because it keeps readers on edge and makes the story interesting.]]> 2018-11-26 18:24:52 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307942885 Anna https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307942957 1. I really liked the story Mother in Mannville because it was an open ended story and was allowing me to decide what could come next. 
2. I didn't like The Monkey's Paw because I didn't agree with some of the characters and what they were saying and doing, so that drew my attention away from the story causing me to lose interest.
3. The best element that makes a short story is foeshaowing because it reveals little clues about whats going to happen later in the story.]]> 2018-11-26 18:24:59 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307942957 Lauren https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307942969 1. I liked the horror in The Monkey's Paw for example when Herbert came back to the house.
2. I didn't like the fact that Mother in Mannville was an open ended story, because I want to know what happened at the end.
3. I like suspense because I like to not know what is going to happen.]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307942969 Calvin Burke https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943068 1. I liked Charles because of the humor because it was funny.
2. I did not like the Monkey's Paw because I felt that the characters made some bad decisions, which annoys me and causes me to not like it. 
3. I like stories with humor because it make the story funny. Also, suspense is good because it make the story interesting.]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943068 Molly https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943102 1.) I liked Charles because it was exiting and there was always a little suspense.
2.) I didn't like ]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943102 Bernadette https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943117 1. I liked The Monkey's Paw because pf the suspense and the horror
2. I didn't like Mother in Manville because there was no background to where the mother was.
3. In stories I like suspense and surprise. The Monkey's Paw was the best story elements wise. 

]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943117 Nathan https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943163 1. I really enjoyed The Monkey's Paw because it gave a little bit of interest in it like when they are trying to find the paw
2.  In the Mother in Manville one, I didn't really like the ending because it did not have an ending to the story and I don't really enjoy story's that don't have an ending
3. I think the best element for the reading is the climax because it can add lots of questions and lots exciting parts that might make you wanna read more of the book]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943163 Abby afraser24 https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943251 1. In The legend of Sleepy Hollow I liked how the author described the setting.
2. In Charles I didn't like how there was a lot of foreshadowing so it didn't have much suspense.
3. Suspense because it makes the story more interesting.  
 

]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:25 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943251 Madeline https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943301 1.  I liked the open ended story plot from the story Mother in Manville because it made me vision possible endings.
2. I didn't enjoy the story the monkeys paw because of the Setting it made the readers feel gloomy. 
3. The story's setting had a large impact on the readers because they make you feel different emotions.]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:29 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943301 Rowan Lyl https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943387 1. In the short story sleepy hollow I liked that at the end of the story there were all these theory's like if Icobod was still alive or not because it makes you want to read more.
2. in the short story mother in Manville it was a open-ended story and I really don't like open-ended stories because  it is a cliff hanger
3. the best elements that make a good story are that there is foreshadowing and there is suspense in the story because it makes the story interesting  ]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943387 Riley Cushman https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943444 1. in "the monkeys paw" i like the suspense of what is going to happen and is there going to be gold.
2. in "TYM'am i did not like how Mrs. Jones was so easy and odd about the incident.
3. i like foreshadowing because you slowly start to figure out the rest of the story without giving it away immediately]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:41 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943444 Annabelle Lyle annabellexlyle https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943561 1. I liked Charles because it was a fun and surprising book.
2. I didn't like that MIM had a cliffhanger.
3. I think the Climax the best reading elements because it has suspense]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:50 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943561 ashley https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943623 1 in thank you m'am i really liked how Mrs. Jones showed roger a lesson to not do things like that.

2 in Mannville i did not like that they left you hanging and didn't give you a hint or anything.

3 story elements make reading better and more understanding and bold]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943623 Zachary Tooley https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943632 1. I liked MIMannville because you could not tell that the boy did not have a mom and was making it up.
2. I didn't like sleepy hollow because you could tell that brom  was the head less horse men.
3. MIMannville was the best for reading because they kept the secret but gave a few hints that the boy did not have a mom. ]]> 2018-11-26 18:25:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943632 Wesley Reinhard https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943770 1. I liked the suspense in "the monkeys paw" because i enjoy the tense moments.
2. I didn't enjoy the open ending in "MIMannville" because I want to know the mothers reaction.
3. I think that ]]> 2018-11-26 18:26:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943770 Madut Mathuc https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943943 1. I like how the author was explaining ichabod with all the details.
2. I didn't like how the mom/narrator was explaining the story. 
3. The legend of sleepy hollow would make the best reading for me because it gets me thinking about the story and i can see whats going on in my head.]]> 2018-11-26 18:26:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307943943 christopher https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307944152 1 I liked thank you mam because it has a lot of detail


2 I didn't like the open ending in "MIMannville" 
  
 ]]> 2018-11-26 18:26:44 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307944152 Molly M. https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307945719 1.) I liked Charles the best because it was fun and there was a little suspense.
2.) Something i did not like is that MIMannville had a cliffhanger and there was not a background to where the mother ever was
3.) A story element would be the climax, the conflict, and the characters.]]> 2018-11-26 18:29:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307945719 Aiyana Basciani https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307945864 1. I liked Sleepy Hollow because the story was fun and at some parts intense
2. I didn't like how some of the stories were open-ended
3. I like when I can relate to the story and the suspense
 ]]> 2018-11-26 18:29:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307945864 kyle Scorsone https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307946975 1.) I liked the monkeys paw because it was spooky and very suspenseful 
2.) I didn't like that the man in the beginning wished for his own death]]> 2018-11-26 18:31:15 UTC https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307946975 Lachlan https://padlet.com/sarah_pollard1/6jtu22xm4ljc/wish/307949333  
1. I think that "The Monkey's Paw" was a dope book. The suspense when the wife tells the old man to bring Herbert back to life after the shocking moment when it is revealed the he died wile working on the machines. I was cool how the author made it so when the old man wished for money is turned out that that the wish killed Herbert but the money the company gave them was the same amount the old man wished for.
2.I did not like how little detail they got into disusing the Monkey 
Paw's power maybe they could of put some rules like don't raise someone from the dead. Maybe if they had just said what you wish for will have consequences. Rather then just having the man throw the 
Monkey's Paw into the fire and say a small warning. I also did not like it when the old man wished for his son back and then wished him dead. I think that he should of wished that this never happened. 
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