Rubrics for Writing by Mr Aaron Goh https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m Post your comments of your friend's introductions here. en-us 2018-07-26 09:15:13 UTC 2018-08-01 12:09:19 UTC hello@padlet.com Sample Rubrics and comments aarongoh https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271184897 Peer's name: Min
#1: Level 4/Level 3
#3: Level 3/Level 3
#4: Level 4

Comments: Well done, Min. I think your introduction is very captivating and it makes me want to read the rest of the story. ]]> 2018-07-26 09:17:04 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271184897 Chua Yee Ting https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262224 Peer's name: Jun Hong
Comments: Great story! I wonder what trick that is up his sleeves.. i hope to read the rest of your story!

]]> 2018-07-27 04:08:55 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262224 Name:cheng kun peer:breydon https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262352 l like it,a lot of good phrases and words, very good.

]]> 2018-07-27 04:10:11 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262352 LEE JUN HONG https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262418 Peer name: Cheng Kun
Good phrases and good sentences.I like the cliff hanger that is at the end.
GOOD JOB!!!


]]> 2018-07-27 04:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262418 Samuel https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262502 Peer's name: Tian Xinyuan
The content of the text was simple and the story flows nicely in my opinion.
Relevance of Ideas: Level 3-4(#1) 3-4 (#2)
Development of Ideas: ]]> 2018-07-27 04:12:21 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262502 Tian Xinyuan=D https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262570 Peer's name: Samuel
Comments: Nice story, it makes me wonder what happens next.=)GOod JOb

]]> 2018-07-27 04:13:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262570 Fraser https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262613 Peer's name: Yu zhe
Comments: Very Interesting!
GOOD JOB! ]]> 2018-07-27 04:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262613 chenjia https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262648 peer's name : Lim shin shyan
I like the way you described the sky.Good context ! I cannot wait to read the whole story]]> 2018-07-27 04:13:53 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262648 Lim Shin Shyan https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262667 peer's name : Li Chen Jia
Good starting and the content of the story is wonderful.I like it!]]> 2018-07-27 04:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262667 srISHTI https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262677 PEER NAME: roshan
COMMENT; nice starting! i wounder what will happen as the story progresses
peer name : lovina
comment; cant really catch is going to happen but i do like the words that you use:) i am wanting to read more....
peer; reyes
comment : the story flow seems really interesting cant wait to red more.....   



]]> 2018-07-27 04:14:09 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262677 Breydon https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262717 peer's-name: Yee Ting 
The-content-is-good-with-nice-words-used-and-good-usage-of-the-words]]> 2018-07-27 04:14:27 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262717 Samuel https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262767 Peer's name: Yan Yifan
I feel that the story is very detailed. The idea of the story is well planned and I understand the feelings of each character mentioned in the introduction.]]> 2018-07-27 04:15:01 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262767 Lovina https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262844 2018-07-27 04:15:56 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262844 Teh Shr Li https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262871 Peer's name]]> 2018-07-27 04:16:24 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262871 Sanjay https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262887 Peer's name:

]]> 2018-07-27 04:16:38 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262887 https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262937 2018-07-27 04:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262937 Zhou Yu Zhe https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262938 Peer name: FRASER
the story was very nice 
story was interesting good job!]]> 2018-07-27 04:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271262938 peer name Qin yue https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263015 The story was nice .I wonder what would happen next to the characters? ?Would they fight?]]> 2018-07-27 04:18:34 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263015 Qinyue https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263092 peer name : Kayden
The story has just started and already sounds interesting. It would be more innteresting at the summit.]]> 2018-07-27 04:19:22 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263092 Peer name: Mikerson https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263164 Good Job, Mikerson Level 3 you wrote it really well.]]> 2018-07-27 04:19:56 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263164 wong yan song https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263267 hello.peer name.valeska.quite good

]]> 2018-07-27 04:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263267 Xavier https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263285 Valeska your story is good]]> 2018-07-27 04:21:17 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263285 Richie 🤬 https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263393 My peer's name:Sean Foo

]]> 2018-07-27 04:22:21 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263393 Peer name srishti https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263395 the story was interesting. i wonder what will happen next

]]> 2018-07-27 04:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263395 Peers name; Louis https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263415  
Good Job,Louis Level 4 you wrote it really well. Lots of nice vocab.
]]> 2018-07-27 04:22:33 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263415 JAY https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263500 PEER'S NAME GUAN LIANG very good

]]> 2018-07-27 04:23:19 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263500 Yan Yifan Renee https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263519 nice intro Xin yuan!

]]> 2018-07-27 04:23:33 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263519 https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263608 2018-07-27 04:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263608 https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263609 2018-07-27 04:24:34 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263609 Thadd https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263626 You story is good!!!!]]> 2018-07-27 04:24:45 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263626 Guan Liang https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263628 My peer is jay

]]> 2018-07-27 04:24:46 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263628 Peer name; Shr Li https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263652 Nice
Bye]]> 2018-07-27 04:24:58 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263652 Jay https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263697 2018-07-27 04:25:22 UTC https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263697 valeska https://padlet.com/aarongoh/6j592sl96q3m/wish/271263720 peer name : Yan Song
Your story was really nice and interesting. 

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