https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021 Feedback about Food wastage. en-us 2021-11-14 22:31:39 UTC 2021-11-25 22:37:13 UTC hello@padlet.com hhatton3 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1889730144 2021-11-14 22:55:27 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1889730144 choward109 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1903897704 On your information page, that can’t be just in dot points. You need to write it up like an information report. You have done this a little but I want more. Please edit you work too. There are random full stops and capital letters in the wrong places. ]]> 2021-11-20 23:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1903897704 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1905249174 This was an amazing topic! You did an awesome job. I loved how you were so confident in your research and so passionate about it. You also had great time management as you finished only two minutes to go. The only thing I have to say is, maybe don’t read the facts off your device. Overall amazing job! ]]> 2021-11-22 04:13:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1905249174 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1907237532 I think that you put so much effort into this I think you were very passionate in this project and your speaking but I think you should talk a bit slower so the audience can take some time to process all this great information you found.]]> 2021-11-23 00:53:55 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1907237532 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1907531386 My feedback:

Hi Harriet! I thought this was an amazing presentation. I can tell you put a lot of time, thought and research into it. I learn so much! I didn’t know 70% of the food we waste is perfectly edible. You picture page really represented food waste, you couldn’t have chosen better photos! I thought maybe you could name some of the restaurants in your local area that you were going to talk to. Maybe you could have even already talked to them and written what they said in your presentation. Next time, maybe fix up some of your spelling and grammar mistakes (spaces, dot points). I also noticed some repeated information on the infographic and in your paragraphs. But overall great presentation and I really enjoyed it!

My questions:

1. Why was this topic so important to you?
2. What was something that surprised you in your research?
3. Now that you have finished, what were some positives and negatives, what could you fix or work on?
4. What process do you go through to make this project
5. What did you want to learn more about? Why?

Amazing project!]]> 2021-11-23 03:59:00 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1907531386 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1907533016 Your topic is great I like the idea of going to restaurants and asking them if they throw food away]]> 2021-11-23 04:00:18 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1907533016 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1907543729 Hi Harriet, this was a very interesting showcase. It was very enjoyable. Learning about the issues of food waste intrigued me.
Perhaps you might want to form sentences with your dot points on your information- just reading dot points wasn’t that interesting.
Maybe edit your work. There are minor, very minor mistakes with your work. Eg capital letters in the wrong places.
Your photo essay was very very good. The pictures and the emotions used were very effective. 
A few questions I have:
What did you learn about yourself through this project?
What do you think is an area of improvement?
What moments were you most proud of?

Congrats on such an excellent project!]]> 2021-11-23 04:08:44 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1907543729 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1911390021 Harriet I think you did a great job with your topic and the way you presented your website. It looked really professional! I think your information page was great. 
From Charlotte F 🤍🌮🍉👍]]> 2021-11-24 22:32:26 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1911390021 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1911396388 I really liked your website. I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into this website. You also used very descriptive words.

This was an amazing presentation well done 👍 ]]> 2021-11-24 22:40:38 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1911396388 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1913290908 I really like your website and presentation! I liked how you expanded on things and didn’t just looked on your website and read it, it shows you really know your topic! Some advice is to slow down your speech and try not to mumble, be confident! ]]> 2021-11-25 22:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1913290908 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1913291108 I loved your presentation Harriet!

Things that I want to point out:

- Maybe try not to say "And Then" so many times.
- Try to give more eye contact
- Speak Slower
- Try and summarise what your saying, maybe don't read everything off the page/tab. 

That is my feedback for you today! Overall, you did an amazing job, well done!!! :) 😁😁😁]]> 2021-11-25 22:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1913291108 https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1913292241 Your information and call to action about food wastage were excellent! I liked how you put your research notes on your information. Some things I would work on are:

- trying not to read to fast
- vary your pitch
- elaborate on what your saying]]> 2021-11-25 22:37:13 UTC https://padlet.com/hhatton3/showcase2021/wish/1913292241